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Part10

Day10:

Beeji and Papaji in their room
Beeji: pata nahi meeta ki shaadi itni jaldbaji mein kaise karpayenge
Papaji: sab kuch ache se hojayega aap bilkul chinta mat kijiye
Preeto before starting to boutique goes to Beeji Papaji room
Preeto: thik kaha papa ji...
Beeji aap bilkul chinta mat kijiye main hoon na
Meeta di ki shaadi bhi dhoom dham se hoga jaise ishu di ka hua tha
she then leaves to boutique in her luna
while driving Preeto thinks about money...kuch karna padega..1 lakh se jyada hosakta hai meeta di ki shaadi ke liye kharcha...aur maine jitna bhi savings ki hai abh tak 50,000 se jyada nahi hoga...Babaji plz kuch raasta dikhao...
she reaches to Boutique where simran is already there..

Simran: Congrats Preeto..Meeta di ka shaadi date kal Bhai ne bataya tha
Preeto: thanku simran...
meanwhile customers comes Preeto shows them their collection they do get impressed and buy clothes...
after that Preeto and simran sit and discuss about new designs...
Preeto: Simran mujhe lagta hai hume newspapers mein bhi advertisement dena padega...
Simran: ya Preeto aisa karne se shayad contract bhi milsakta hai...
Preeto: suddenly gets idea
Simran hum aisa kyun nahi karte...kal jo exhibition pe gayi thi na ..agar hum ek stall open karte hain toh waha pe aaye sabko humare boutique ke baare mein bhi pata chalega aur kya pata hume contract bhi miljaye...
Simran: idea toh acha hai lekin waha pe stall kaise
Preeto: woh tum mujhpe chodo mein abhi jake pata karta hun...
Simran: ok grtt..
Preeto then says Simran tumhe toh pata hai meeta di ki shaadi 10 days mein hain aur mujhe uske pehle money arrange karni hai..
Simran: samjhsakti hun preeto...and dont worry mujhe toh lagta hai yeh stall ka idea hit hoga...
Preeto: ha agar aisa hoga na humare boutique bhi amritsar mein famous hojayegi..
Simran: right..mein newspaper mein add ke baare mein baat karti hun
Preeto: ok..mein abhi jati hun exhibition kisi bhi tarah waha pe stall rakhne ke liye hume permission miljani chahiye...
Preeto goes to exhibition and asks there to one of the shopkeeper...shopkeeper says aapko manager se baat karni padegi madam...
Preeto: acha manager kaha milenge..
Shopkeeper: madam manager yaha pe nahi rahte aap ek minute rukiye mein address dekhta hun
he finds the address and gives it to her..he also gives the phone number...
She calls the manager but he doesnt agree saying that booking of stalls is closed even after preeto trying to convince...

She goes back to boutique and says to simran maine phone kiya lekin manager kehraha hai stall booking close ho chuka hai...office jake try
karne se shayad manjayenge..kisi bhi tarah hume exhibition pe stall open karni hai atleast for 4 days simran...
Simran says hum dono milke jate hain preeto...
Preeto: nahi simran tum yahi rehna iswaqt boutique close karke jana acha nahi hoga...
Simran: ok preeto lekin pehle lunch karte hain...
as they were about to start having lunch Rajbeer also comes..
Rajbeer: Hi Preeto and Hi Simran
Simran: Rajbeer join with us in lunch
they have lunch together...Preeto says to Rajbeer about the stall in the exhibition for 4 days...
Rajbeer: grttt idea...Boutique ko promote karna achi baat hai...so kabh khul rahe ho stall..
Preeto: pata nahi rajbeer...manager se baat karne jana hoga..
Simran: Preeto manager ka office dur hain tum luna pe jana thik nahi hoga...
simi asks Rajbeer...Rajbeer agar tum free ho toh plz kya Preeto ke saath jasakte ho abhi...
Rajbeer: ya simi sure...preeto hum saath chalte hain waise bhi mausam kuch thik thak nahi lag raha hai...baarish ho sakta hai...
Preeto: smiles and says ok...
they start in the car...Rajbeer driving the car..Preeto asks acha tum achanak boutique kaise agaye...
Rajbeer: tumse milne ka mann kar raha tha toh agaya
Preeto: smiles
he ons the music player...Tumse milke song plays...Both remember all their moments...

Tumse milke aisa laga
Tumse milke armaan hue poore dil ke
Ae meri jaane wafa
Teri meri meri teri ek jaan hai
Saath tere rahenge sada, tumse na honge judaa
Tumse milke aisa laga
Tumse milke armaan hue poore dil ke
Mere sanam, teri kasam chhodenge ab na yeh haath

Preeto suddenly laughs..
Rajbeer: tum achanak itna kyun hass rahe ho...
Preeto: kuch yaad agaya tha...number 57...
Rajbeer: kya?
Preeto: humari pehli mulakat aapko yaad hain...
Rajbeer: laughs...achi tarah yaad hain because of you main har gaya tha bet...
Preeto: Dhruv jiju aur tumhe suicide point hi mila tha aur koi jagah nahi mila bet lagane ke liye...
Rajbeer: tumhare wajehse pehli baar police station ka darshan hogaya...
Preeto: Laughs...tumhe pata hai maine complaint bapas kyun li
Rajbeer: tumhe pata chala ki mein fauji hun aur kya karte complaint vapas lena hi tha
Preeto: ha woh toh hai lekin kuch aur baat bhi thi..
Rajbeer: kuch aur baat ?
Preeto: ha jab tumne kaha tha ki tum fauji ho toh mujhe laga tum ishu di ke liye bilkul perfect dulha hoge...laughs...
Rajbeer: what...u mean oh god..your madd..abh pata chala kyun tum baar baar ghar bula rahe the tution ke naam pe...
yeh dekho baate karte karte pahunch gaye Preeto...
They reach the office...he wishes her all the best..and waits outside...
she goes and talks to the manager who says that i have already told u in phone booking of stalls is closed...
she tries to convince him after trying hard manager agrees...
Preeto feels very happy and thanks him...
she comes out..and says it to Rajbeer he also feels very happy...
Preeto: mein abhi simran ko call karti hun...she tells simran that from tomm for 4 days manager has agreed for the stall in the exhibition..
Simran: oh wow thats grtt preeto...and i have spoke to add agency also newspaper mein bhi humare boutique ka add ajayega in 2 days...

They then start in the car...it starts drizzling...
Rajbeer: Preeto mein tumhe ghar chod detha hun...
Preeto: lekin Rajbeer meri Luna Boutique ki yaha rehgayi
Rajbeer: dekh rahe ho baarish ho raha hai Preeto tumhe Luna ki chinta ho rahi hai...it will be there at the boutique dont worry...
Preeto: ok will take it tommorow..waise bhi kal jaldi jaana hai boutique...
he drives to Preeto home...almost they reach near to home rain stops...
Preeto: dekho yeh baarish kaise bandh hogaya...iss baarish ki chakkar mein luna boutique mein hi rehgaya..
Rajbeer: koi baat nahi mein simran se boldunga woh luna andar rakhwadegi kisiko bolke...

They reach home..She asks him to come inside...he says ya chalo have to talk to papaji also..
as the bell rings Sonu opens the door...
Sonu: Preeto di aap agaye...and Hi Rajbeer Bhayya...
Rajbeer and Preeto get inside the house...
Rajbeer: Sonu exams kaise likha...
Sonu: acha gaya bhayya
Meanwhile Rajbeer gets phone call from Jogi so he was busy talking with him...
Preeto sees that no one is seen in the home so she asks Sonu...
Preeto: Sonu ghar pe kaha hai sab...
Sonu: Preeto di ghar pe koi nahi hain...Papaji aur Beeji bahar gaye hain sabko meeta di ki shaadi pe invite karne...
Preeto: she sitting in the sofa there replies acha thik hai...aur yeh meeta di..Bani kaha hain..
Sonu: meeta di pankaj jiju aur sunny bhayya ke saath gayi hain bazar...
dekho na di Bani di bhi chali gayi apne friends se milne mujhe akele ghar pe chodke...mere saath patang udane ke liye koi nahi hai aap plz kheliye na meere saath...
Preeto: main thak gayi hun Sonu..tu khel na...mein dekhungi...
as the phone call ends Rajbeer comes and sits in the sofa asks them kya hua kya discussion chal raha hai...
Sonu: dekho na Rajbeer bhayya..mere saath patang udane ke liye keh rahi hun toh bahana bana rahi hai Preeto di...
Preeto: kya bahana oho pagli sonu kaha na tu khel..mai bhi dekhungi tu aaj kitni acha patang udati hain..
Rajbeer: Preeto khelne se kya jayega...
kahi harne ka dar toh nahi hai na...he laughs saying it...
Preeto: she gets up and by pointing her finger at him oh hello darna...main sher singh preeto hun Rajbeer...
Rajbeer: acha toh phir abhi khelo sonu ke saath..
Preeto: ek minute meri aur sonu ke beech patang udane ka competition bahuth baar hochuka hai...kyun na aaj tumhare aur sonu ke beech competition ho...
kya kehti hai Sonu...
Sonu: wow preeto di main ready hun...
Rajbeer: acha toh chalo Sonu..
three of them go out...
Preeto: abh dekho 20 mins mein jiska patang sabse uper jayega wahi jeetega...
she asks him his wrist watch...and then asks them r they ready for the game...
Sonu and Rajbeer say yess...
Preeto: counts 1..2...3..start...
Rajbeer and Sonu fly the kites
Rajbeer: aaj mein jeet ke rahunga...Sonu all the bestt...
Sonu: nahi bhayya main jeetungi..
Preeto taking side of Sonu...Sonu dikhade jeet ke...
Rajbeer: Preeto dekhlo thodi hi der mein tum mere side loge...kyunki aaj mai hi jeetne wala hun...
Preeto: ha dekhti hun kis mein kitna hai dum...Fauji ya phir Sonu..
Rajbeer: han han dekhlo
Both keep flying the kites and Preeto talking to them by cheering up Sonu asking her to win..
as the time goes Preeto says dekhlo dono abh bas 5 mins baaki hai...5 mins mein pata chal jayega kaun jeetega...Sonu dhyan se patang na kat jaye...
Rajbeer: damn it mera patang kat gayi oh no..
Sonu jumps main jeet gayi preeto di...both hug...
Rajbeer stands there jus with a smile...
Preeto: acha Sonu yeh bata jab koi harjatha hai toh kuch kehte hain mein bhul gayi..
Sonu: laughs and says Loser
Preeto: sahi kaha Sonu...
laughing at him she says tum loser nikle Rajbeer...
Rajbeer: kya kaha tumne...tumhe mein chodunga nahi Preeto..
before he could catch hold of her she escapes from him running from out to inside the house...
Sonu also comes after them but as the phone rings she stays in the hall and recieves the phone call..It was Mammi ji who kept on talking with Sonu...
Preeto runs to upstairs he follows her trying to somehow stop her...but she doesnt give him a chance reaches her room...
Rajbeer: tum jitne bhi bhagne ki koshish karlo Preeto..mein tumhe pakde ke rahunga..
Preeto: kya karloge ha..tum ho hi aaj loser...sonu ke saath bhi jeet nahi paye rajbeer..laughs...
Rajbeer: tumne mujhe phir se kaha loser...
ruko abhi batata hun...he closes the door and bolts it..
Preeto: dekho yeh cheating hain...tumne door kyun close kiya
Rajbeer: abh tak bade bhag rahe the mujhse abh kaha ja pauge...
runs around the bed...finally he catch holds of her...and he twists her arm behind her back...
Preeto: Rajbeer please mujhe chodo...
Rajbeer: aise kaise chodunga pehle bolo ki mein loser nahi ho...
Preeto: she laughs saying maine kab kaha ki mein loser hun...
Rajbeer: bahut maaza araha hai na tumhe he twists her arm even more...jab tak tum nahi kahoge tab tak mein chodne wala nahi hun...
Preeto: acha acha aap loser nahi ho Rajbeer...abh please chodo...
Rajbeer releases her arm...she turns around him and gives him his watch yeh lo tumhara watch aur chalo abh neeche...
Meanwhile Sonu as the call ends...she thinks yeh preeto di kaha chali gayi...she goes to upstairs calling out di kaha ho...she checks in the terrace
doesnt find preeto or Rajbeer...
Rajbeer to Preeto in room : tumne kaise soch liye ki mein tumhe itni asaani se jaane dunga...putting his arms around her waist...he drags her even more
close by winking at her...
Preeto: Blushes..and jus looks into his eyes smiling...
he brings his face more close to her and gives a kiss on her cheek...she closes her eyes blushing...

Surkhiyan hai hawaon mein
Do dilon ke milne ki
Ha haan arziya hai nazaron mein
Lamha yeh tham jane ki
O kaise hazuri ji
Yeh lab dikhaye
Chupi laga ke bhi
Gazab hai yeh dhaaye
Dheere dheere
Naino ko dheere dheere
Jiya ko dheere dheere
Bhayo re saibo
Dheere dheere
Begana dheere dheere
Apna sa dheere dheere
Lage re saibo

as she hears Sonu' s voice opens her eyes Rajbeer chodo Sonu arahi hai...he released her from his arms smiling...
she opened the door and came out...he also comes out of the room...
Preeto: Sonu kaha hai tu...
Sonu: are preeto di aap yaha ho mujhe laga aap terrace pe ho...
Rajbeer comes to them and asks abh tak nahi aye beeji papaji...
meanwhile they see Meeta di who came back home...so they come down...
Meeta di sees Rajbeer
Meeta : rajbeer tum yaha...kab aye...
Rajbeer: bas thodi der pehle...acha mein jata hun...papaji se kehna mein unse kal mil lunga...
Meeta : coffee pike jao Rajbeer...
Rajbeer: nahi meeta di phir kabhi
Meeta : acha thik hai...
he leaves saying bye to them

At Pankaj Home:
Sunny calls Bebe and talks to her..tells about Pankaj Marriage date..he then gives to Pankaj who asks bebe to come Amritsar...Bebe agrees so Pankaj feels very happy...
Sunny decides to go Pathankot and bring bebe to Amritsar...

Will wait for your comments...😃

Edited by snehapatro - 13 years ago
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All who didnt read day 8 and day 9 check page 13...😊
Edited by snehapatro - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome when will u write again.
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Originally posted by: unknownunknown

Awesome when will u write again.

thanku...will update this week only..😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb sneha ..now preeto reveled why she invited Rajbeer to her home for tution hehheheh...waiting for nxt part make it fast😊
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Awesome Sneha. Your FF is always amazing. Waited a long time for your update. Hope the next part will not be so long.
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Originally posted by: Raj_preet

Superb sneha ..now preeto reveled why she invited Rajbeer to her home for tution hehheheh...waiting for nxt part make it fast😊

thanku dear..😃next part will post this week only...😊
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Originally posted by: Bobby1810

Awesome Sneha. Your FF is always amazing. Waited a long time for your update. Hope the next part will not be so long.

hehe i know making u all wait for too long...but next part will update this week itself very soon...😃
thanks a lott Gurminder...😊
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I will comment after reading all i missed sneha ...😊

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