Firstly sorry for late update...wrote this both parts(Day8 and Day 9)today after longtime so forgive if any mistakes...😊and do read and comment...😃 if u liked it then do click like button...😉...will wait for your comments...😃
Flashback: as u know in the last update Rajbeer went on a mission...and Ishu is in Dhillon' s home for 2 days...and Preeto jus waiting to know truth behind the shop matter...😃(as it has been longtime wrote flashback of previous update...)
Part8
Day8:
Preeto goes to Boutique...
Simi and Preeto talk about how to improve the sales and also about adding some new designs to the collection...
In Dhillion' s home Ishu and Meeta plan for sunday...going out with all to exhibition fair tomm ...ishu informs dhruv about asking him to inform jogi Rajbeer and all...and she also calls Preeto and tells her about it...Simi refuses despite of Preeto asking her again and again...
Simi: Preeto tum log jao mujhe kal dinner plan tha meri dost ke saath woh cancel karna acha nahi hoga...u all enjoy...😊
Rajbeer Mission turns out succesful...all in the Air base congratulate him for his gud work...😃
he immediately calls Preeto in the evening 5:00 and tells about his mission success...she feels happy for him...tells him that she wants to meet now and will be cuming to Airbase...
Meanwhile she gets a call from sonu..
Sonu: Preeto di aap Rajbeer bhayya ko bataye na kal mujhe physics padane aye...
Preeto: ha sonu mein puchta hun Rajbeer se..
Preeto in the Airbase she comes to his room...and as she comes starts asking about the shop matter
Preeto: Rajbeer mujhe aapse kuch baat karni thi
kya aapne shop bhej di hai
Rajbeer: shop!!..tumhe kaise pata chala
Preeto: kal mein uss taraf gayi thi...waha pe toh kisi aur owner ka naam bata rahe the...
Rajbeer: Preeto woh shop bhejna pada...actually needed some money...
Preeto: bhejna pada lekin aap mujhe iske baare mein kabhi bataya bhi nahi...she notices that hez hiding something...aisi kya baat hai rajbeer...mujhe kyun aisa lag raha hai ki tum mujhse kuch chupa rahe ho...
Rajbeer: he says not here and takes her to the other room closes the door...and tells her everything about why he needed to do this...
Preeto: tears roll down from her eyes...she gets upset...you told a lie...iska matlab sign jo gurantee ki naam pe..woh balki loan ke liye nahi shop bhejne ke liye...
Rajbeer aapko batana chahiye tha..bina bataye itna bada kadam utha liya...yeh aapne acha nahi kiya...
Rajbeer: seeing her crying he feels bad...he keeping his hands on her shoulders trys to convince her..
Preeto main bas Ishu di ki khushi ke liye ..mujhe uss waqt wahi sahi laga tha isliye...
then by saying dont cry Preeto...he wipes her tears and says...
Preeto zindagi mein chahe jitne bhi mushkilayeen ho aur jitne bhi khushiyaan mein tumhere saath dena chahta hoon...aur tum mujhe rok nahi sakte...
both look at each other for a moment...
Preeto: she then hugs him and then asks him to promise that he will not hide anything like this again..
Rajbeer mujhe promise karo ki istarah tum mujhse kuch chupavoge nahi..
Rajbeer: acha baba abh toh rhona bandh karo...
she smiles...and about to tell about returning money...
he stops her from talking by putting his finger on her lip..
Rajbeer: mujhe pata hai tum kya kehne wale ho Preeto...abh chodo na yeh sab baate...
aur ha iske baare beeji papaji ko kuch mat batao Preeto
Preeto: she says ok..and then tells him that sonu was asking to come tomm to teach her physics...aur ha exhibition kal 4 baje..
Rajbeer: ha dhruv ne bataya tha exhibition ke baare mein...and tell sonu that i will come in the morning to teach..
Both leave...she goes by her luna to home...he in his car...
In Dhillon' s home Night 12 all already slept...
Preeto didnt get sleep..she went to the terrace for sometime...talking to herself rajbeer kya kar rahe honge...call karun ya nahi...
Finally she decides to call him and disturb..so gets her phone dials rajbeer number...his phone rings...
Rajbeer: he lifts the call...Preeto tum abhi tak soye nahi...
Preeto: ha neend hi nahi araha tha so tumhe disturb karne call kiya...
Rajbeer: acha mein ajaun
Preeto: kaha?
Rajbeer: ghar tumhe milne
Preeto: iswaqt..nahi...koi dekhlega toh problem hojayegi
Rajbeer: agar koi dekhlega toh boldunga hum pyaar karte hain aur shaadi karna chahte hain...
Preeto:she laughs and says tum bologe...mujhe pata hai tum kitna darpok ho Rajbeer..
Rajbeer: janlo ki Fauji darpok nahi hote...let Pankaj and Meeta di get married then will talk about it to beeji Papaji...
Preeto: when he says that she blushes...
their talks continued for so long without bothering about the time both kept on chatting about everything...
Preeto: Haaye rabba rajbeer time kitna hua...she suddenly asks him...
Rajbeer: says its already 1:30...
Preeto: baat karte karte waqt hi nahi pata chala...goodnight rajbeer mein ja rahi hun sone...kal subah ajao sonu ko padhane...
Rajbeer: says ok goodnight Preeto.. and ends the call...
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Part 9
Day 9:
Its Sunday
Rajbeer comes to Dhillion' s Home...Preeto comes running to open the door...he comes in and tells preeto to say Sonu that he came..
Sonu comes down with her books...in the hall both sit in the bed...he starts teaching physics to Sonu...
Papaji went out on some work...Bani went to meet her friends...
Meeta di Ishu and Beeji upstairs busy talking about the things needed for marriage and making a final list...
Preeto then goes up to get the threads box...
beeji:asks kaun aya tha preeto
Preeto: woh Beeji..Rajbeer aye hain Sonu ko padhane...
Beeji: Rajbeer acha mein thodi der mein niche athi hoon...
ishu and meeta di look at eachother with a smile...
Meeta di: Preeto...Rajbeer ko coffee chahiye ho toh puchke mujhe bolna mein ake banadungi...
Preeto: ok Meeta di...
Preeto comes down goes to her stitching machine by giving a glance at Rajbeer...he also looks and smiles...
she sits and starts stitching the lehenga which almost is completed jus finishing work is left...though doing her work in between she stares at him from there...he could feel her gaze so even he looks at her...
after sometime she comes to Rajbeer and asks...
Preeto: Rajbeer aapko coffee chahiye
Rajbeer: he knows that she doesnt know cooking and as he likes teasing her.. naughtily replies kyun tum bana rahe ho kya...
Sonu: Laughs...Rajbeer bhayya Preeto di...unko kaha athi hai bannana...sirf khana atha hai...
Rajbeer: laughs sonu thik kaha lekin ha sabka sar khana ache se atha hai...
both Sonu and Rajbeer Hi Fi eachother...
Preeto: making cutee angry face..says Rajbeer tum mere mazak uda rahe ho..aur Sonu ki bachi tu jyada hass mat apni padhayi kar...
she then says to Rajbeer tumhe coffee chahiye na main abhi banati hun...aur ha bina kisi ke help ka...
Rajbeer: smiles...and says jaldi ha...
Preeto: she goes to kitchen...ties her hair up...talking to herself...coffee hi toh hai kaunsi badi baat hain ek baar dekha toh tha meeta di karte waqt...
she jus ons the gas stove putting the kettle she boils the milk...after sometime milk gets boiled...suddenly Preeto screams loud as she burnt her fingers because of hot kettle...Sonu hears this and Rajbeer also hearing this says to sonu tum ruko mein dekhti hun...he goes fast to kitchen kya hua he sees her fingers burnt dhyan se karte na preeto he blew onto her burnt fingers so that pain will be reduced...he then takes her to washbasin there by placing her hand runs the water...she jus looks at his eyes with a smile...his caring nature towards her for just a little pain makes her happy...
nai jeena, tere baajo
nai jeena, nai jeena
nai jeena tere baajo
nai jeena, nai jeena
mein tenu samjhawan ki
na tere baajo lagda ji
mein tenu samjhawan ki
na tere baajo lagda ji
tu ki jaane pyar mera
mein karaan intezar tera
tu dil tu yun jaan meri
Preeto: Rajbeer kuch nahi hua bas choti si chott hai..
Rajbeer: Preeto haath jyaada jal jathi toh..meeta di ko boldete na tumhe kya zarrurat thi yeh sab karne ki...
Preeto: Rajbeer mein bilkul thik hun aap bekaar mein tension le rahe hain...abh ek minute she goes near to the stove...pouring the milk in the coffee mug makes a coffee...he stands beside her...she gives him the coffee saying Preeto ki banaya hua coffee...
Rajbeer: he tastes it and says acha hai with a smile...
Preeto: smiles and says thanku
meanwhile beeji comes and sees both of them in kitchen...
Beeji: Rajbeer beta kaise ho puttar...asks standing near the kitchen door...
Rajbeer: mein thik hun Beeji
Beeji: waise Preeto tu kitchen mein kya kar rahi hai
Preeto: she comes to Beeji and excitedly says maine aaj pehli baar coffee banayi hai Beeji...
Beeji: surprised says tune banaya hai...Rajbeer beta Coffee acha toh hai na...
Rajbeer: smiles and says bahut acha hai beeji
Beeji: smiles acha toh thik hai...
Beeji goes back to upstairs room after greeting rajbeer...Rajbeer then goes and continues teaching sonu and Preeto back to stitching...
after sometime he telling sonu to study well decides to leave...
Rajbeer goes to Preeto...
she sees Rajbeer coming towards her but she pretends continuing her work as if she didnt see him...
Rajbeer: Preeto mein ja raha hoon...
Preeto:ha toh jao kisne roka hai
Rajbeer: bye nahi bologe
Preeto: ha bye
Rajbeer: thoda pyaar se toh bol sakte ho
this makes her smile...both say bye to eachother smiling...
At Evening 4 Rajbeer and Dhruv come to dhillon' s home..saying to beeji and papaji except sonu who has exam tomm remaining all start to exhibition fair...where already Jogi and Jassi waiting for them...
Its a big exhibition and pretty much crowd as it being sunday...Seeing the Giant Wheel Bani tells and so first all dhruv jogi Rajbeer pankaj sunny Bani Meeta Ishu Preeto Jassi go there...
dhruv went to take tickets...Sunny Bani Ishu already settled waiting for the remaining to come...
jogi Rajbeer jassi meeta Preeto still standing near to giant wheel and they asking preeto not worry and that join them all but Preeto refuses saying tum log jao mujhe yeh giant wheel chadna acha nahi lagta mein shopping karti hun..
Bani : Preeto di khud ko sher singh Preeto kehte ho lekin tum toh darpok nikle...
all laugh...Meeta says sahi kaha bani from childhood Preeto is scared of Giant wheel never went on a ride...kehti hai giant wheel chadne se chakkar ajatha hai usse...
seeing all laughing making fun of her Preeto says hasslo mein ja raha hun shopping karne...saying she goes from there to the stalls there...
Rajbeer somehow manages and comes to Preeto who is at ear rings stall...
Preeto: Rajbeer tum yaha baaki sab kaha hain...
Rajbeer: woh log gaint wheel ride ke baad wahi aas paas ke stalls dekh rahe hain...
Preeto: acha bolo yeh kaisa hai she putting the earrings asks him..
Rajbeer: utna acha nahi
Preeto: she picks up other pair of earrings and showing it asks him yeh wala
Rajbeer: ha yeh bahut sundar hain
Preeto: after trying some 4 to 5 pairs and by bargaining finally she takes 2 pairs for her which were rajbeer selection...along with it she took 2 more pairs of earrings for Meeta di...
Rajbeer and Preeto walk towards other stalls there...she buys some mix and match dresses for Bani Meeta di and some nice chunni' s in one of the stall...then as they move to other stalls he finds a book stall and says to her Preeto tum ek kaam kyun nahi karte cooking ka book kharid lo...
Preeto: nahi iski kya zarrurat hai chalo abh
Rajbeer: nahi preeto tumhe kharidna chahiye he asks the shopkeeper to give a bestt book...
Rajbeer gives the book to preeto saying Meeta di ya beeji ki sar khane se acha khud hi sikhlo...even the shopkeeper laughs...
tum phir se mazak uda rahe ho she gives the book to shopkeeper looking at him making a face says mujhe nahi chahiye koi book mein khud sikh sakti hun khana bannana...she leaves the stall and walks from there...
Rajbeer: Preeto ruko kaha ja rahe ho...
Preeto: mujhe akele karne do shopping
Rajbeer: acha abh maaf kardo sorry..
Preeto: Rajbeer niklo yaha se tang mat karo..
Rajbeer: thik hai ja raha hun lekin tumhare bags...
Preeto: yeh bags mein khud pakad sakti hun..aap jayiye yaha se...plz mere piche mat aao..
she goes to other stalls in the exhibition alone...she finds Kites so buys 2 for sonu who loves flying kites...After a while Rajbeer comes back to her...
Preeto: tum phir aagaye
Rajbeer: he nods his head saying ha yeh dene he gives her the plastic flowers boque with a smile...
when he gives flowers that brings smile on her face...both stare at each other for a moment...
Kehte hain khuda ne iss jahan mein sabhi ke liye
Kisi na kisi ko hai banaya har kisi ke liye
Tera milna hai uss rab ka ishaara maanu
Mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Preeto: she takes it smiling and says bahut sundar hain Rajbeer..
Rajbeer: thanku aur ek baat bolun tum gusse mein bhi bahut cutee lagte ho Preeto...
meanwhile Bani comes to them Preeto di tum yaha ho...mein dhund rahi thi aapko...Rajbeer bhaya aap preeto di ke saath the waha dhruv jiju puch rahe the...
Rajbeer: acha lets go..
Bani then looking at the bags Preeto di aapne itna kuch shopping ki hai mere liye kuch nahi kharida...
Preeto: buddhu kharida hai tere liye bhi dress...
Bani: saying oh thanku Preeto di hugs her...
then she noticies the flowers in her hand...Preeto di aapne phool kharida..Bani gets a doubt and asks aapko kabse phool ache lagne lage hain ha...
Preeto: woh ache hain na isliye...waise meeta di sab kaha hain...
Bani: waha food stall mein hai di aapki intezaar kar rahe hain..
3 of them go to the food stall..all sit there in the beds...
Dhruv: Uncle ji sabke liye tea
Meeta di asks Uncle ji samosa bhi sabke liye
dhruv asks aur kuch...
Preeto: Uncle Ji garam garam Jalebi hum sabke liye...
all after having food go back home...
At Dhillion' s Home
all come home...
Sonu seeing them goes to Preeto and asks mere liye kya layi hai di
Preeto gives her the kites..Sonu feels happy..
Meeta di asks Beeji Papaji kaha gaye hain Sonu
Sonu: says that they went to gurudwar
meanwhile Beeji Papaji come and say khush khabri hai...Meeta ki shaadi ka date pakki hogayi...
all feel very happy...its after 10 days..
Beeji: gurudwar mein kaha ki meeta pankaj ki shaadi ke liye yehi date acha rahega
all start saying congrats to Pankeeta...
Beeji asks Bani to Bring sugar in a small cup...
Beeji feeds spoon of sugar to Meeta and Pankaj
Sunny also feels very happy for pankaj
Sunny: Pankaj abh dekh tere shaadi dhum dham se manayenge..
Bani: Ha sab bahut masti karenge...
then Ishu leaves with dhruv...she goes back to home as she jus came to stay for 2 days in dhillon' s home...
Rajbeer also leaves saying Papaji and Beeji not to worry all work will happen well and that he will make sure about decorations and catering...😃
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Edited by snehapatro - 13 years ago
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