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Posted: 13 years ago
no worries piya :)
ur story is diff and i like dat abt it!
cont soon
piya27 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh yeah we do trust u
and believe that u will write a g8 story
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved all the updates...continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
maan 😡 apne heere ko pahchano
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Posted: 13 years ago
completely trust u..
continue the story the way i hv planned it...
although it wud be difficult to see maan in this avatar bt will get use to it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Maan ko hum is character mein dekh to nahi sakty but let see
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for your love and support dear friends. Here is the next part I hope each one of u would like it
I am happy that all the confusions regarding Maan's character has been solved if at all any one has any queries then do let me know I will surely clarify ur doubt
love-Piya
PART 8
Maan was feeling restless something was bothering him he was not able to decide what was the actual reason that was troubling him
It was late night Geet was standing near the window looking at the moon
She was sharing her grief her sorrows with her loyal friend the moon
Moon: Tum Maan ki zindagi ka hissa nahi ho Geet wo bus tumhare jasbaat k saath khel raha hai [U r not a part of Maan's life Geet he is just playing with ur emotions]
Geet: Shayad tumhari baat sach ho par maine Maan ko wo haq diya hai unhe mere jasbaato ki izzat karne ka ya unhe tukhra dene ka pura haq hai issmein unki koi galti nahi unhone mujhe aaj tak uss nazariye se kabhi dekha hi nahi main hi bus unse pyar kar baithi [U might be speaking the truth but I have given him this authority he can respect my feelings as well as he can be unaffected by them I will never blame him as it was me who fell in love with him he never showed any emotions towards me]
Moon: Iska matlab tum uski har galat baat sar jhuka kar maan logi uski har zyathi ko sehthi rahogi woh tumhe apna best friend kehtha hai kya sachhe dost yun kisi ka dil todthe hai? [Does that mean u will never oppose him u will continue to tolerate his injustice? He calls u his best friend do true friends break the heart so ruthlessly?]
Geet: Unka pyar shayad meri kismat mein na ho par unki berukhi mein hi main unke pyar ko talashthi hoon main aur waise bhi main kyun kisi aise cheez k peeche bhagu jo mujhe kabhi mil hi nahi saktha najaane wo mere saath kal ho na ho par iska matlab ye nahi k main kal k darr se apne aaj ko jeena chod du [I may not be lucky enough to get a taste of his love but I try to search his love in his rude behaviourand why should I run behind something which will never be mine it is true that tomorrow Maan might not be there with me but that doesn't mean that I should stop living the present in the fear of tomorrow]
Moon: Kis mitti ki bani ho Geet? Tum ek heera ho karodo chahnewale mil jaayenge tumhe kyun iss pathar se apna sar takrane ki koshish kar rahi ho? [ What r u made of Geet? U r a diamond and I am sure u will get crores of people who will keep u as a treasure why r u trying to injure ur head by hitting it against a stone?]
Geet: Ek baat puchu chand sach sach jawab doge? [Can I ask u something O moon would u answer me truthfully?]
Moon: Pucho Geet [Go ahead Geet?]
Geet: Agar chakor ne tumse muh pher liya toh kya tum uske bagair reh payoge? Kya tum uski jagah apni zindagi mein kisi aur ko de paayoge? [If the partridge ignores u completly would u be able to survive without it? Would u be able to give someone else the place that it harbours in ur heart?]
Moon was speechless
Geet: Tumhare khamoshine mere sawal ka jawab de diya hai chand kuch kehne ki zarurat nahi hai tumhe [Ur silence has answered my question o moon u need not give me a reply now]
Geet: Tum dono ka milan toh kabhi ho hi nahi saktha phir bhi pyar ka rishtha aaj bhi tum dono k beech hai mere aur Maan ki kahani thodi alag hai humari kahani mein bus main unse pyar karti hoon unhone toh mujhe koi sapne nahi dhikaye aur na hi koi umeed di toh phir main kyun unse naaraz rahu sach kahu toh unhe mere jaise laakho mil jaayenge par main unki jagah kisi aur ko nahi de paayungi [Both of u can never meet but still the love is present in between the 2 of u in my love story there is a slight difference I am the one who loves Maan he never promised me anything then why should I blame him unnecessarily? To be frank enough he will get lakhs of better options than me but I would never b able to give someone else the place that he holds in my life]
The moon was trying to understand the divinity of her love by reading her face when all of a sudden he could see a strange emotion in her eyes
Geet: Wo aa rahe hai [He is coming]
She was right Maan entered her room
He placed his hand on her shoulder Geet closed her eyes immediately to engrave his touch in her heart
Maan: Geet mujhe maaf kar doh [I am sorry Geet]
Geet turned to face him
Geet: Kya hua Maan tum mujhse maafi kyun maang rahe ho? [What's the matter Maan why r u apologizing?]
Maan took her hand in his and bowed down his head
Maan:
POEM BY RITUJA [mishtiritu]
"Dosti toh tumne humesha nibhayi hai maine hi har baar tumhe takleef di hai
Tumne toh humesha mera saath diya hai maine hi har baar tumhare saath ko dhikaara hai
Mera gussa humesha dosti par haawi ho jaata hai aur phir meri har baat tumhe takleef de jaata hai
Main har baar aisa karke tumhara dil dhukata hoon par ye bhi sach hai k ye main jaanbushkar nahi karta hoon
Mujhe maafi maagne ka haq toh nahi iss galti k baad par phir ek baar maaf kardoh iss dost ko aap
Maaf kardoh mujhe dekho kaan padatha hoon main
Iss dost ko gale laga lo gusarish karta hoon main"
[ U have always been a true friend but it is me who always ends up hurting u
U have always stood by my side it was me who always left u all alone
My anger overpowers our friendship and I always end up hurting u
I always end up breaking ur heart but this is also true that I never do this intentionally
I don't have the right to ask for forgiveness but if it possible then do give another chance to ur friend
Forgive me pls I am ready to hold my ears give me a friendly hug this is a request of mine to u]
Geet had tears in her eyes she immediately hugged him
Maan: Main jaanta hoon maine tumhara dil thoda hai Geet par main kya karu uss waqt main gusse mein tha aur mera gussa tumse badkar aur kaun samjsaktha hai tum jaanti hona gusse mein main kuch bhi galat bol detha hoon bus issi wajah se maine tumse wo galat lafz kahe [I broke ur heart Geet pls forgive me but I was not in my senses my anger was so dominant that I just went on talking rubbish u know na I am a completly different person when i get angry]
Geet: Pehchanthi hoon main tumhe Maan aur waise bhi hum dost hai aur dosti sirf khushiyaan batne k liye nahi gum aur ek dusre ka frustration nikalne ka bhi naam hai [I know u very well Maan and let me remind u we r friends and in friendship is meant not only to share ur happiness but also to share ur sorrows and frustration]
Maan: Tum kafi special ho Geet aur main bhi kafi lucky hoon jo tum meri friend ho [U r indeed very special Geet and I am really lucky to have u as my friend]
He separated her from him and placed a kiss on her forehead
Maan: Good night Geet
Geet: Good night
Maan goes to his room but Geet was really happy this was the first kiss that Maan had gifted her
Geet: Jo zakhm aapne iss dil par lagaye the uspar itna pyara malham agar aap de jaayenge toh zindagibhar inn zakhmo ka intezaar rahega mujhe [If u continue to heal my woundsin such a beautiful way then I would always wait for the gift of pain from u]
She smiled at her own thought and drifted off to sleep
Next day
Shikha: Suna hai Prem Singhania apni pehli movie launch karne jaa raha hai [Prem Singhania is launching is first movie]
Naintara: Tab toh woh zarur humare ghar k chakar katenge sab kaan kholkar sun lijiye Prem Singhania ek bade hi raiyees buisnessman hai unke khatir mein koi kami nahi honi chahiye hume ye movie har haal mein sign karni hai [I am sure he will come to meet me very soon listen everyone Prem Singhania is a rich buisnessman he should be given a royal treatment I want to bag this movie at any cost]
Shikha: Par movie ki actress already finalize ho chuki hai [But the actress has been fianlized already]
Naintara: Prem Singhania ki pehli movie aur usmein Bollywood queen Naintara ka naam shamil nahi hai aisa kaise ho saktha hai? [Prem Singhania's first movie and it does not have Bollywood Queen Naintara's name how is it possible?]
Shikha was silent
Naintara: Hum kuch nahi jaante tum jaakar khud Prem se baat karo aur unse kaho k Naintara ka naam bhi agar movie mein aa gaya toh movie khudbkhud hit ho jaayegi kuch bhi karo par hume ye movie har haal mein chahiye [I don't want any excuses go and meet Prem and convince him that if Naintara's name is included in his movie then automatically the movie would b a hit I want this movie at any cost did u get it?]
Shikha : Yes Mam
PRECAP 1: Prem: Kitni ajeeb baat hai na Maan jo tumhare paas hai uski tumhare nazro mein koi keemat nahi aur jo tumhare paas nahi hai usse tum apne sar ka taaz banakar baithe ho [It's quite strange Maan u r least bothered about the precious thing that is within ur reach and u running behind something which is not even a part of ur life]
PRECAP 2: Shooting begins
Thanks Ritu for the poem😃
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ALL THOSE WHO WANT A PM ADD ME TO UR BUDDY LIST
Love-Piya
Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

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are yaar koi muje chivti kato me koi sapna to nahi dek rahi...khud hi caat leti ho...uhh..ae hai ye sachi hai...un beleivel Maan singh khurana ne geet se maafi magi😳...o hoe aur vo bhi poem ke jaria...haw me mar java pini kha ke😆... ye kase ho sakta hai...but bahot acha laga..


and thank meri vo chand aur geet ki talk wali tamana puri karne ke lia...wow ajj ka update lag hai kuch jyada hi special tha..do thama offers😆...geet and moon ki talk bahot hi achi thi...me to kahogi ke geet ka best fend moon ko hi hona chahi...but jo maan ne ajj kiya uske baad uske saath bi na insafi nahi kar sakte na...chalo geet ko maan ki hi best frend rehne do😳


geet ka best dailogue to moon ke kya tum chakoor ki jagah ki aur ko de sakte ho?nahi na to me kase kisi aur ko maan ki jagah do😳...hai geet me pehle tumhari kam fan thi jo muje aur apni fan banai ja rahi ho[i mean piya di]

ye jatka naintara ko bahot bada lga hoga ke prem singania ki pehli movie me naintara queen of all duffers nahi hai...😆..ye naam kasa hai is duffer naintara ke lia

precap same...
plz cont soon
eagerly waiting for ur precap become true😆
love u alot
ur's bacha


Edited by -knirwal- - 13 years ago
tamanna1391 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
love the conversation between geet and moon and maan tells sorry naintara want movie






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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part...
geet and moon convo was very nice...loved it ..
thanks for pm and update...
cont. soon...

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