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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: arhi_maneet

AWESOME UPDATE ! LOVED IT !

Thanks dear

Originally posted by: t_areeb

no it was only dream :(

Yes only a dream

Originally posted by: Atiffa

awesome

loved it
i knew it was dream bcz we Maan is slow in understanding his feeling
but i just love the way you describe the whole dream sequence
Cont soon
Luv
TC
Atiffa

Thanks Atiffa u r right Maan will take some time to realize his feelings for Geet
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks dear

Originally posted by: maaneet5

Nice start piya i liked it geet ka pyaar pe barosa acha laga nice dilogs

Her foolish heart still feels that someday the one who resides in her heart would understand her feelings he would pay attention to her breathing pattern and he would realize that even just to breathe she always required him

maan is geet ka moon i mean geet moon me maan ko deke dream deki acha laga continue...
ye sara sapna hi hmm
PRECAP: Geet: " Kitna achha sapna dekh rahi thi kya zarurat thi mujhe jagane ki?"

Haan Sailu ye sab sapna tha par iss sapne mein Geet ki longing hume dekhne ko milthi hai

Originally posted by: hari21

wht a dream...😍
mind blowing update👏

Thanks dear
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: --Fairy--

Dreams are sometimes better then reality

Nice update
Thanks for PM

I agree

Originally posted by: namita25

awww I just loved it...

Thanks dear
Thanks dear

Originally posted by: frndz_is_my_lyf

awesum part ...

sapna? hehe geet sapna dekh ri thi ...lolz

hehe yes wo sapna dekh rahi thi
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kareena32

great part i was thinking that we will go through the past of the story but it was only a dream of geet me sad but please cont soon

Don't b sad Kareena the day this dream turns into a reality it would be much more beautiful
Thanks dear
Thanks dear

Originally posted by: shristi1

Nice part.
Upate soon.

Thanks dear

Originally posted by: disha_Maan.GC

amazing update dear...
loved it..

Thanks dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update...
too bad that it was a dream
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: preethia

loved the update...

too bad that it was a dream

Preeti this was her dream but the real confession would b much better
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Posted: 13 years ago

Thanks for your love and support dear friends

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Posted: 13 years ago

Banner Credit: Shivangi

Thanks for your love and support dear friends.
Many of u were sad that the confession was a part of Geet's dream and u wanted me to write the story as FBs but guys personally I don't believe in FBs I mean if u already know the present then there is no thrill left while reading the past. Hence I have decided that the confession would remain a part of Geet's dream but I promise u whenever the real confession takes place it would be 1000 times much better than this trust me😃
Another important thing this would be a complex story with lots of twists and turns and both Geet and Maan would have to go through a lot of emotional phases before their love emerges victorious. This FF is simply a journey how the yellow roses get converted into red ones😳
I have replied to your comments my reply starts from page 31 do have a look besides this if at all any one of u has any queries or suggestions then do let me know
Love-Piya
PART 2

The moon started hiding its face behind the clouds as Maan slowly started reducing the distance between their lips

She was breathing heavily as she could feel his warm breath on her lips

She closed her eyes and they were just about to kiss when she felt some water droplets on her eyes

She was cursing the perfect cupid the rain for disturbing their privacy

She held his neck more firmly and pulled him closer she could not allow anyone to ruin this moment

Their blissful journey was just about to begin when all of a sudden she felt a strong explosion of water on her face

Geet: Tsunami Tsunami help help

Maan: Tsunami nahi buddu isse normal tap water kehthe hai [This is normal tap water u fool and not Tsunami]

Geet held the pillow close to her heart

Maan: Lagta hai abhi tak puri tarah se jagi nahi koi baat nahi abhi puri tarah se jaga detha hoon isse [It seems she is still not fully awake no problem I will wake her up completely right now]

Maan goes and gets ice cold water from the refrigerator and without thinking twice poured the entire water on Geet's head

Geet and Maan together: Baraf pad rahi hai baraf pad rahi hai [It's snowing it's snowing]

Geet opened her eyes and saw the love of her life her Maan holding his stomach and laughing like a maniac

Maan and Geet were staying together in the same apartment from the past 3 years and every day Maan would wake her up in a similar manner

Geet: Maan tum has kyun rahe ho aur tumne aaj phir mujhpar baraf ka paani daala tum kabhi nahi sudroge [Maan why r u laughing u once again poured ice cold water on me u will never change]

Maan: Sudrogi toh tum nahi Geet najaane kaunsa sapna dekthi rehti ho har din aur uss pillow ko itne pyar se seene se lagakar baithi ho jaise k ussmein tumhari jaan basti hai ab batabhi de yaar kisike khayalo mein khoyi rehthi ho k tumhe subah utne ka mann hi nahi karta [Geet u have to tell me about your dream today and especially that pillow what is so special about that pillow that u hold it so close to your heart common Geet spill the beans and tell me about the special one who rules your dreams in such a way that u r not ready to get up in the morning]

Geet's monologue

"Humare sapno ko tumhare khayalo se sajakar rakha hai humne

Iss dil ko har ek nazar se mehfoos tumhare liye bachakar rakha hai humne

Pyar ki pehli khushboo ko tumhare naam se mehekane ki koshish ki hai humne

Apne jismo jaan mein bus tumhari parchayi ki jhalak paane ki chah rakhi hai humne

Humare rag rag mein bus tum hi tum chahe hue ho

Par iss baat se anjaan rehkar tum hum se puchthe ho k tum humare kaun ho tum humare kaun ho?"

[I have decorated my dreams with your memories

I have protected my heart from the world and kept it safe just for u

I have perfumed the first aroma of love with your name

I have wished to get a small touch of your shadow in my body and soul

U r the only one who is present in every pore of my skin

But u r still unaware of this truth and u still go on questioning me what significance do I hold in your life?]

Maan: Hey Sleeping Beauty kaha kho gayi? [Hey Sleeping beauty where r u lost?]

Geet: Agar main kahu k main tumhare khayalo mein khoyi hui thi tab tum kya jawab doge? [If I tell u that I was lost in your thoughts then what would be your answer?]

Maan: Main tumse ye kahunga k aaj 1st of April nahi hai [It's not 1st of April today]

Geet: Sahi kaha tumne [U r right]

Geet was really sad

Maan: Par aaj ek special day zarur hai yaad haina? [But today is a special day do you remember?]

Geet: Kya tumhe koi movie ka offer mila hai? [Did u get any new movie?]

Maan: Ofho Geet offers toh aate jaate rahenge par aaj ka din kafi special hai [Oh Geet offers would come and go but today is a very special day]

Geet: Kyun aisa kya special hai aaj k din? [What is so special about this day?]

Maan: Aaj meri jhali si friend ka birthday hai [Today is the birthday of my crazy friend]

He takes a yellow rose and presents it to Geet

Maan: Happy Birthday Sleeping beauty

Geet accepts the rose happily

She always waited for this yellow rose of his for the rest of the world it might be a very ordinary gift but for Geet this was more precious than a diamond

Geet: Thanks Maan

Maan: Aaj aakhri baar iss rose se kaam chala lo Geet next year jab main superstar bun jaayunga na toh tumhe ek achha sa keemti taufa tumhare birthday par present karunga [This is the last time I am gifting u a rose Geet next year I would present u something precious as by that time I would be an established and famous actor]

Geet: Par mujhe tho mera rose hi chahiye [But I want u to gift me a rose on my birthday]

Maan: Par kyun? [But why?]

Geet: Ye sirf ek gulab nahi hai Maan iss gulab mein humare dosti ki khoobsurathi chuphi hui hai aur humare iss rishte ko main kabhi bhi khona nahi chahthi hum chahe kamiyaabi k shikar tak pauch jaaye par humara rishta kabhi bhi badalna nahi chahiye tum mujhe kabhi bhula toh nahi doge na Maan? [This is not an ordinary rose this rose symbolizes the beauty of our friendship and I don't want to lose our friendship at any cost maybe tomorrow we would reach the highest level of success but I want our relationship to stay as it is Maan u will never forget me na?]

Maan: Ye kaisi emotional baate kar rahi ho? [Why are you being so emotional?]

Geet: Tum nahi samjhoge? [U will never understand]

Maan: Aur mujhe samajna bhi nahi hai chal ye chod aur ye bata k teri birthday wish kya hai? [I don't want to understand forget this tell me what your birthday wish is?]

Geet: Tum [U]

Maan: Kya? [What?]

Geet: Mera matlab hai meri bus yahi wish hai k tumhare saare sapne pure ho jaaye [I mean I just want all your dreams to come true]

Maan: Mera toh ek hi sapna hai k charo taraf bus mera hi naam ho main ek mashoor actor bun jau aur phir apni mallika Naintara se shadi karke khushi se apni zindagani bita du [I have only one dream to see myself as a famous and established actor and once I pursue my dream I will marry the queen of my heart Naintara and live happily ever after]

Maan: tumhe kya lagta hai mere sapne pure honge na? [What do you think would my dreams come true?]

Geet: Zarur honge [Yes]

Maan: Bus ab tumne keh diya toh God ko manna hi hoga waise don't worry ek baar meri shadi Naintara se ho jaaye toh main tumhare liye bhi ek Prince dhundkar le aayunga [That's it now God has to listen to u and I promise once I get married to Naintara I would search a prince charming for u as well]

Geet: Uski koi zarurat nahi hai Maan [There is no need for this]

Maan: Kyun koi already dil mein hai kya agar hai toh mujhe bata de main teri madat karunga uska pyar haasil karnne mein [Is there someone in your heart if yes then tell me I would help u in getting his love]

Geet: Tum meri koi madat nahi kar sakthe Maan [U can't help me Maan]

Maan: Par..[but]

Geet: Chodo na inn bato ko pehle ye batau mera birthday cake kaha hai? [Leave this aside first tell me where is my birthday cake?]

Maan: Wo toh humesha ki tarah tujhe hi banana padega [As usual u will yourself have to bake it]

Geet: Maan birthday mera hai aur cake bhi main banau ye kaha ka insaaf hai? [It's my birthday and u want me to bake the cake this is not fair]

Maan: Ab kya karu Geet bazaar se khareedi hui cake mein wo baat kaha jo tere haatho mein hai [The magic that is present in your hands is not there in the cake that we purchase from the market]

Geet: Thik hai main cake banayungi par tumhe meri madat karni hogi [Ok I will bake the cake but u will help me out]

Maan: Zarur madat karungana tumhara cake toh main hi khaunga [Off course I will help u after all I would be the one who would be eating the cake]

Geet: Kya ab toh tumhari khair nahi [What now you won't b able to escape]

Geet takes the pillow to hit Maan

Maan: Are iss pillow se maarogi toh tumhare sapno ka rajkumar naaraz ho jaayega [If u hit me with that pillow there is a strong possibility that the Prince charming of your dreams will get annoyed]

Maan hits her playfully on the head and runs towards the kitchen

Geet starts running behind him

PRECAP: Naintara: "Najaane humare kitne deewane hai par itna faltu gift aaj tak hume kisine nahi bheja" [I have so many fans but none of them have given me such a useless gift]

Guys would u like to see Shahid Kapoor or Hrithik Roshan in this FF? I f yes then chose any one and let me know

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Love-Piya

Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem geet love maan and maan nt ke peeche haye and love the friendship bod between maneet i want shahid kapoor if you are planning for a entry



Edited by tamanna1391 - 13 years ago
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Amazing update Piya di...
U knw wht.. Dis FF is goin to be anothr masterpiece of urs...
N m sooo sure about dat...

Ok.. Coming to d update...
I loved d way u started d update...
Lyk the way she was dreaming about Maan...
N unknown to that... Maan broke the dream spilling water on her face..

M sure.. Thea r gonna be loads of hidden situations n emotions in dis FF...

I loved hw u showed dose little little happiness n charm in their frienship...
Like hw Maan used to wake her up evryday...

I especially adored d part wer Maan asks Geet ki wo kiske khayalon me khoi rehti hain... N u wrote dat poetry describing her heart...
Dat ws a beautiful moment.. I simply fell in love wd ur poetry...
Its marvellous...

I loved d part whr Maan gives her d yellow rose lyk always n says nxt yr wen he'l b a superstar, he'll gift her a precious one.. To wich she replies.. Dat she wants d yellow rose only bcz it defines d sensitivity n purity of their friendship...
Geet's dialogue dat u wrote ova thea was beautiful n mesmerising..

Den i loved d part whr Geet asks bout her bday cake.. N Maan says ki har saal ki tarah she'l b d one making d cake.. Bcz her hands hv magic... Hehhe...
Kanjoos.. Paise bacha rha hai... Hahaha... 🤣

I rly love d purity and d livelines of their friendship...
N Geet plays a major role in preserving dat liveliness bcz she hasnt told Maan about her feelings...
Maan is sooo into his career n dreams.. Dat he isnt realising d gem he has n his own feelings...
I feel theas this hidden love in his heart that he himself is unaware of..

M really loving dis FF Piya di..
Ur brilliant...

Love u sooo much...
Muuuaaahhh...
Edited by AbbyluvsMaan - 13 years ago

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