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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: hermoso
just loved it .

Thanks dear

Originally posted by: payalpari
amazing update but its a dream arghhh piya can't it true dear 😉

Hmm...filhaal toh ye possible nahi hai par jab bhi ye sapna sach hoga it would be 100 times better than this😃

Originally posted by: mishtiritu

Me Loved The update sooo Much...!!!!!!!!!!

Wow The Start was sooo nice...!!!!!!!

Ohhh If I m not wrong it is GEET's Dream...!!!!!

But Loved Each & Evry word of the Update...!!!!!

Ahhh that smalll words by MAAN were Awesum...!!!

Just Loved it...!!!!!!!!!!!

Luv ya...!!!!!!!!

Yes Ritu it was Geet's dream and it held some significance as it showed the longing that she has for Maan. Love u too dear

Originally posted by: Gcs-girl
Superb start👏
👏
awesome update👍🏼
loved it❤️

pls con soon😊

Thanks dear 😳

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: meena..
lovely dream😍

Thanks dear

Originally posted by: SONOMAKTER1
poor geet it was just a dream 😉 wait for my maaneet love story 😊

Thanks dear Maaneet's story will start frm the next update and this time it won't b a dream

Originally posted by: nahtani88
Superb Update
Continue Soon
Thank You For The PM

Thanks dear

Originally posted by: megh_piyashi
awesome update dear...

Thanks dear

Originally posted by: AIMAMSK
superb update dear...

Thanks dear

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: vibhashekhar
Loved it
Was all this geet's dream?...

Yes it was

Originally posted by: sweety095
if dream is this much beautiful wht would it be whn it comes to reality

I will try to live upto ur expectations

Originally posted by: zunaiba5
thnx 4 pm

i thought its real ..

dream :(

do continue

Don't b sad dear this was a small trailor actual mein the confession would b much better

Originally posted by: seemamary
Loved it.

Thanks dear

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: AbbyluvsMaan
wht a beginning Piya di...
Hats off to u...
Me loved it..

Startin from d vry beginnin... I absolutely luvd hw u described d nature.. Baap re.. Aapke andar to pkka wordsworth aur Shelley ki aatma aa gai thi.. Hehhe.. Amazin desription of d nature..
Hw she ws waitin 4 d moon 2 appear but d clouds wer clouding ova d moon..givin her signals dat she wnt b able to meet her frnd 2day..but hw she still kept her hopes up..n den d moon did come up 4 her smiling at her as her Maan came to her..
Though it was a dream.. But u described it with such serenity n beauty dat it all seemed soo real..

D way u described Geet's feelings.. Her strong will to meet her friend..her hopes dat Maan wud b wid her..though he wud neva undrstnd her love..all dis showed hw strong willed..n strong headed she is.. She might be soft n humble..but shes strong n determined as well...

I absolutely loved d update Piya di...
Beautifully written...

Love u Piya di..
Urs.. Falak...

O god mere andar aatma aa gayi aur mujhe pata bhi nahi chal no problem abhi bhi kuch nahi bigda Hanuman Chalisa padna shuru karti hoon

Falak u r my fav yaar u understood everything perfectly though it was a dream but the purpose of this update was to give a small glimpse of geet's character and u understood it perfectly👏👏

ye dream ko sach hone mein kafi time lagega par jab hoga toh it would b much better than this

love u too my falak

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: -maankimishti-
hey plz yeh dream na ho plz dear
nice update

continue soon

Sorry dear it is a dream par i promise actual confession isse bhi achha hoga

Originally posted by: srirad
Amazing update👏
Awesome start👏

Geet monologue superb⭐️

Maaneet dialogues are mind blowing👍🏼

Loved the poem⭐️

Continue soon

Eagerly waiting for next😊

Thanks dear

Originally posted by: Maaneet4eve
Beautiful

Thanks dear

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1
great part

Thanks dear

Originally posted by: nosi
awesome update piya

Thanks dear

Originally posted by: shah10
amazing

Thanks dear

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag
awesome part!!!!!!

is the precap related to this confession??? if yes then thank god there will b much more to come... r else there will not b thrill in reading past... once u know the present..

its real fun when we read the story with enthu waiting when maan really realise geets importance in his life... rather than starting the story in present...

though i loved this part its just my opinion ...

but if every one really want the story to move in past as FBs then u can also go tht way... bcoz anywayz u r expert in writing lovely dovely scenes filling with the essense of love n romance at its best..

Yes the precap is related to this confession. This part was only a dream of Geet nothing more and I totally agree with u atleast I don't believe in FBs if u know the present tab past padne ka maza nahi aata

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: ritzy09
A very different first chapter Piya...

loved it completely. It showed her yearning for Maan so clearly...her expectations and her hope that one day he will understand her love

Precap suggests it was her dream but nevertheless it was beautiful. It being a dream just suggests the pain and longing behind the dream

We will wait for her dream to become a reality because i know one day it will become on

Di this is what I wanted to show through this dream Geet's expectations and yearning for Maan and yes one day this dream will turn into a reality but before that both maan n geet would have to go through a lot of emotional phases in their life it would b a tough journey for both of them. I Love u Di