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Posted: 13 years ago
character sketch please update first part so that can jusge the story
but concept is intersting 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely prologue and tx for the CS

pls update soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
congrats on new ff...
interesting story line...
waiting for the update
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Posted: 13 years ago

pihu superb characters yaar...iska to charactersketch itna intriguing h ki mujhse update ka wait ni ho raha ab update k baad kaise wait karoongi...jaldi karo sweetu cant wait much...hehe
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awsome charecter sketch dear...
Very interesting.
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Posted: 13 years ago

great character sketch dear

eager to read more
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Posted: 13 years ago
really a diff theme.very interesting
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Posted: 13 years ago
BANNER CREDIT: SHIVANGI
Thanks for your love and support dear friends. Here is the first part of this FF I hope each one of u would like it.
love-Piya
PART 1

Her eyes were fixed on the painting that God had created flawlessly

The painting was the night sky she was waiting for God to beautify the sky with its final ornaments the stars and the moon

She was waiting patiently to get a glimpse of the incomparable nature as this was her sole companion which knew all her secrets

She had shared all her feelings that she possessed for him with the moonlit sky but today something was preventing her from sharing the secret with her friend the moon

The clouds embraced the moon in its folds and torrents of water started racing with the breeze

As the cloud released the pearls of water from its arms the dried earth embraced those pearls

As soon as the raindrops kissed the earth the scent of their union started becoming evident in the breeze sending messages that today u may not be able to meet your friend

But she did not lose hope how could she give up so easily she has been waiting for him from such a long time she knew he will never understand that she loves him but her heart was not allowing her to lose her hope

If she could wait for him for such a long duration of time then she definitely possessed the endurance to wait for her friend the moon which has been loyal to her in every phase of her life.

Yes her love had bestowed this quality on her she is still waiting for him and her eyes are still weaving dreams for him

Her foolish heart still feels that someday the one who resides in her heart would understand her feelings he would pay attention to her breathing pattern and he would realize that even just to breathe she always required him

A gust of wind just lifted the locks of her night black hair she could feel a different sensation she knew her loyal friend is coming to meet her

She was feeling like the queen of the night as her patience had emerged victorious

Finally the moon emerged

It was an intoxicating and captivating moment

The moonlit night was sending out 1000's of blessings

So many dreams were hidden behind the fringe of her eyelashes it seemed that the sparkling stars and the divine light of the moon were giving her signals that today all your dreams will turn into a reality as splendor of love would conquer all the odds today

A magical fragrance started tantalizing her heart was this really possible would he understand her devotion and her unconditional love?

The stars started gleaming in happiness and the moon told her that my dear friend your life will not pass in the shadow of his memories alone but u deserve much more and today all your dreams would be fulfilled

She was unable to understand what the moon was trying to convey the coolness of the moon was forcefully dragging her into an ocean of dreams

No this is not possible he can never understand her love she was about to question the moon when all of a sudden the cool breezes started swaying and circling around her sending chills throughout her body

But before the cold waves could embrace her completely she found herself in someone's warm and strong arms

There was no need for her to see his face she knew it was him

Geet: Maan'

Maan: Haan tumhara Maan [Yes your Maan]

Geet could not believe her ears

Geet: Mere Maan? [My Maan?]

Maan goes and stands in front of her

Maan: Yakeen nahi ho raha k mere sheeshe k dil se tumhe apne naam ki dhadkan kaise sunaye de rahi hai? [My heart is made of glass and u might be finding it strange to hear the heartbeat of your name from here isn't it?]

Geet looked at him innocently

Maan took her hand and placed it on his heart

Maan: Pyar bhi kitna ajeeb hotha hai Geet aaj jab mujhe tumhari ahemiyat pata chali tab mera bejaan dil bhi zinda ho gaya [Love is so strange Geet today as I realized your true importance my lifeless heart got a new life]

Maan: Main manta hoon k fizayon k rangeen jalwo k chakachaund ko dekhkar main bhehek gaya tha [I agree that I got attracted to the beautiful temptation that came my way]

Maan: Ek aise kaufnak sapne ko saason mein samakar baitha tha jiski wajah se tumhari saadgi ki khusboo ka mujhe ehsaas ho na saka [I had embedded a nightmare in my breath due to which I couldn't feel the fragrance of your simplicity around me]

He kissed her eyes

Maan: Jis pyar ko main bahar dhund raha tha wo toh humesha se hi mere andar saamayi hui thi haan aaj mujhe ye ehsaas hua k mujhe jo kami kaye ja rahi thi wo tumhari mohabbat hi thi [The love that my heart was searching outside was always present within me today I have realized what I was lacking was u and your love]

Maan: Jaanta hoon maine apne jazbaato ko samajne mein kafi waqt laga diya par shayad ab bhi itni der nahi hui shayad main tumse utna pyar na kar saku jitna k tum mujhse karti ho par agar tumhara saath mil jaaye toh wafao k khushboo se humare rishte ko mehekane ka vaada main tumse karta hoon [I agree that I took a lot of time to realize my true emotions for u but I feel maybe I still have a chance it's true that I won't be able to love u like u love me but I promise if u give me a chance I will beautify our relationship with the fragrance of loyalty]

He takes her hand in his and looks directly into her eyes

Maan:

"Khwabo mein barso tarasha hai jise ho sake toh uss sangemaramar ki tasveer bankar mere zindagi ko ek nayi disha de doh

Tanha raaho mein bhatakthe hue mere kadmo ko jis sahare ki hai talash ho sake toh wo rangeen sahara bankar mera saath de doh

Kehne ko toh sab kuch hai mere paas phir bhi ek daulat ki kami hai ho sake toh Khuda ki inayat bankar mere daaman mein apni mohabbat ki daulat bhikher doh"

[I had sculpted an image in my dreams if possible take the appearance of that image and give a new direction to my life

My legs that are wandering on lonely roads in search of a support if possible be my beautiful partner and give me a new strength by staying with me forever

Although I have everything but still a precious wealth is missing if possible u become the blessing of God and disperse the wealth of ur love in my life]

Geet had tears in her eyes

Maan takes a red rose and places it in front of her eyes

Maan: Yun toh aaj tumhara janamdin hai par agar tumhe lage k main tumhare pyar k kaabil hoon toh iss gulab ko lekar mujhe meri zindagi ka sabse khoobsurat taufa de doh. I love u Geet would u be mine? [Although it's your birthday today but if u feel that I deserve your love then accept this rose and give me the most beautiful gift of my life. I love u Geet would u be mine?]

Geet hugged him immediately

Geet: Mujhe yakeen nahi ho raha Maan k aapne mujhse ye baat kahi kya wakai mein aap bhi mujhse pyar karte ho? [I can't believe it that u confessed your feelings today do u really love me Maan?]

Maan: Tumhe yakeen kaise dilau Geet? [How should I make u believe?]

Geet: Mujhe aapki har baat par yakeen hai aapne keh diya aur maine wo maan liya ab toh maut bhi aajaye toh koi gum nahi hoga aaj aapki baho mein khud ko paakar meri saari tamanna puri ho gayi hai [I trust each word of yours I am so happy that today I am ready to embrace death as after finding myself in your arms every wish of mine has been fulfilled]

Maan: Main tumse vaada karta hoon Geet aaj se humari zindagi ka har ek lamha ek duje k baho mein hi beetega humara pyar yuhi barkarar rahega humesha humesha k liye [I promise u Geet from today onwards we would reside every moment of our life in each other's arms our love will live forever]

Geet: I love u Maan

Maan: I love u too Geet

The moon started hiding its face behind the clouds as Maan slowly started reducing the distance between their lips

PRECAP: Geet: " Kitna achha sapna dekh rahi thi kya zarurat thi mujhe jagane ki?" [What was the need to wake me up I was having such a beautiful dream]

So Guys this was the first part do tell me your opinions regarding this part😳😳😳

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Love-Piya

Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update dear...
i knew it...its simply a dream...maan aur itna akalmand...hohi nehi sakta...thokkar khayega tabhi sachhi pyar k ehmiyat pata chalrga...itni zaldi kuch nehi honewala...geet hav to struggle to get her love...dont knw whn dat dumbo will undersatnd geet's importance in his life...
really loved it...
thank u fr d lovely update...
waiting fr d nxt prt...
continue soon plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice start...

ahh..plz dont tell me this was a dream.....i thought ki past me story jayegi...😆

seems like..🥺..

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

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