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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 4

Beautiful update Piya.
Loved MSK's attitude.
Waiting to read about the new entries.
Pls continue soon.
Thanx for pm dear.
Edited by Mehek25 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
what an update.
the scene b/w maan n geet in the begining was so dreamy.
The poetry was awesome.its xpressed geet state beautifully.she loves maan unconditionally n selflessly.she knows that maan will not be there with her in the future(don't worry geet piya is there for u)

naintara is so rude n mean .maan ka gift municipality ke dustbin me.i just wanted to kill her.
n that director also janta nhi ki woh maan nhi The MSK hai kal ka superstar.
waiting for the 2 enteries wow shahid is coming n adi also.

waiting for the nxt pm.
piya for u
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part
loved it
this shows the difference between geet a innocent n sweet girl n naintara a rude n arrogant girl
waiting for more
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for your love and support dear friends.
Each one of u is feeling bad about Geet's condition well let me clear one thing Geet's love for Maan is unconditional but her love is not her weakness infact it is her biggest strength. Maan is indirectly hurting her feelings but I ensure u the day Maan realizes Geet's worth his condition would be much worse than that of Geet. As I said before this is a complex story having loads of emotional stuff in it hence I would be introducing lots of twists and turns in the coming updates. The pace of this FF would be really fast.
Pls do give me your valuable suggestions as this is the first time that I am writing an emotional FF which is decorated with the colors of love.
love-Piya
PART 5
Along with Geet another boy also rushed to help the old lady
Both of them together: Maaji aap thik toh haina? [R u alright?]
Both of them lifted their eyes to see each other
For a few seconds something changed Geet felt a strange connection with that boy but she immediately cleared her thoughts and gave her attention to the lady
Lady: Haan bete main thik hoon [Yes child I am fine]
Boy: Par maaji aapko chot lagi hai aapko hospital jaana chahiye [But Maaji I can see some bruises on your body I think u should go to the hospital]
Geet: Aap thik keh rahe hai chaliye main aapko hospital le chalthi hoon [U r right, Maaji I will take u to the hospital]
Boy: Suniye inhe kafi chot lagi hai aur mere paas car hai agar aap bura na maane toh hum inhe mere car se hospital lekar jaa sakthe hai [ Excuse me I think this lady is badly injured if u don't mind we can take her to a nearby hospital in my car]
Geet: Ji mujhe koi problem nahi hai chaliye hum inhe hospital lekar chalthe hai [No I don't have any problem let us take her to a nearby hospital]
Lady: Bachho aap dono ek anjaan aurat k liye itna soch rahe ho [Children both of u r thinking so much for an unknown women]
Both of them together: Aap ki jagah agar humari maa hothi toh kya hum usse takleef mein chodkar chale jaate? [Our mom could have been in your place so would we have left her alone in such a condition?]
Both of them share an eyelock there was certainly some unknown bond that was connecting both of them
Boy: Chaliye maaji [Let us go Maaji]
Both of them help the lady to get up
Lady: Tumhara naam kya hai bete [What's your name?]
Geet: Mera naam Geet hai [I am Geet]
Lady: Aur tumhara? [And what about u?]
Boy: Prem
Prem: Geet aap inke saath rukhiye main apni car lekar aata hoon [Geet u stay with this lady I will just get my car and come]
Prem goes to get his car.
After few minutes Prem comes back and all 3 of them go to the hospital
The doctor does all the necessary treatment and prescribes some medicines
Prem purchases the medicines and since the injuries were minor the doctor allowed the lady to go to her house
Prem once again drops the lady to her house Geet was also there with him
Geet could make out that the financial condition of the lady was not good
She removed her purse she had in all 2000 Rs/- with her.
She herself was a struggling actress but she had this habit of saving money so that she could use it in times of need.
Without any second thought she gave the entire amount in the hands of the lady
Lady: Bete iski kya zarurat hai? [There is no need for all this]
Geet: Maaji aapki beti aapko kuch de rahi hai ye samaj kar rakh lijiye aapko inn paiso ki zarurat ho sakthi hai [Maaji don't hesitate consider me as ur daughter and accept this u might require this money sometime]
Lady: Par bete main tumhe ye paise shayad itne jaldi lauta na saku [But I may not be able to return this money so soon]
Geet: Wo toh aap abhi lauta sakthi hai wo bhi sudh samed [U can return me this amount right now and that too with interest]
Lady: Wo kaise? [How is that possible?]
Geet: Mujhe apne aashirwaad ka khazana dekar [By showering me with the treasure of your blessings]
Geet bends down to take her blessings
Lady: Teri har tamanna puri ho bete bhagwan teri zindagi khushiyoon se bhar de [ May all ur dreams be fulfilled may God bless u ur life with happiness]
Prem was observing this from his car
Prem:(thinking) Geet jitna khoobsurat aapka chehra hai usse kayi guna khoobsurat aapka dil hai [Geet ur heart is more beautiful than ur face]
Geet: Achha maaji main chalthi hoon aur haan agar kisi bhi cheez ki zarurat ho toh mujhe iss number par call kar dijiyega [ Okay Maaji I need to go now but if at all u need something then contact me on this number]
She gave her cell number to the lady and starts walking
Geet: (thinking) Abhi toh mere paas paise hi nahi hai main audition k liye kaise jaayungi? [I don't have any money right now how will I go to the audition?]
She looked at her watch
Geet: Audition ka time toh khatm ho chuka hai ab waha jaakar kuch fayda nahi chalo ab seedha ghar jaate hai paidal hi jaana hoga ab toh [The auditions must be over by now so it is better that I go back to my apartment I have to go back walking there is no other choice]
Geet started walking when Prem stopped her
Prem: Geet agar aap bura na maane main aapko aapke ghar tak chod saktha hoon wo kya haina yaha aapko koi bus ya rickshaw nahi milegi aur aapka akele jaana shayad theek bhi na ho [ Geet if u don't mind then may I drop u at your residence actually it is not easy to get a bus or a rickshaw in this area and I don't think that u should go alone as it can be dangerous]
Geet would never had accepted such a help from a stranger but Geet could see sincere feelings in Prem's eyes, moreover she had a strange power of recognizing people and their intentions she knew Prem was a good guy
Geet gave him an assuring smile and got inside the car
They were silent throughout the ride after some time Prem stopped his car infront of her apartment
Geet: Prem aap yaha tak aaye hai toh coffee peekar jaaiye [Prem why don't u come in for a coffee?]
Prem: Phir kabhi Geet filhaal mujhe apne ek dost ko lene jaana hai wo aaj hi Pune se pehli baar Mumbai aa raha hai agar kismat menin hua toh aapke haath ki coffee kisi din zarur peeyunga [Sometime later Geet actually I need to pick up my friend from the station he is coming to Mumbai for the first time but if my destiny blesses me again I will surely taste the coffee of your hands]
Geet: Aap kismat bhar bharosa karte hai? [Do u believe in destiny?]
Prem (with a smile on his face) Pehle toh nahi par ab vishwaas karne ka mann kar raha hai [Not initially but now I feel like believing in it]
Prem: Bye Geet phir milenge [Bye Geet hope to see u soon]
Geet: Bye
These simple words of Prem had a deep impact on her mind she enters her apartment still lost in his thoughts
Meanwhile,
Adi: Ye Mumbai toh Pune se bhi zyada khatarnak hai yaar najaane mere jaise bhole bhale insaan ka kya hoga? [Mumbai is more dangerous than Pune what will happen to an innocent soul like me?]
Prem: Innocent aur tu lagta hai innocent word ki defination change karni hogi [Innocent and u it seems I need to change the defiantion of this word]
Adi had a huge smile as soon as he heard Prem's voice
Adi goes and hugs him
Adi: Kaisa hai yaar? [How r u dude?]
Prem: Ekdum fit and fine
Both of them break their hug
Adi: Prem tu khud kyun aa gaya railway station mujhe lene mujhe laga k shayad tera driver aayega [Prem I was expecting your driver to come what was the need to trouble yourself yaar?]
Prem: Tu mera sabse jhigri dost hai main driver ko kaise bhej saktha hoon tune aise soch bhi kaise liya yaar? [U r my best friend how could u even think that I will send the driver?]
Adi: Par Prem tu itna bada businessman hai aur main ek mamuli sa.. [But Prem u r one of the topmost businessman and I am an ordinary...]
Prem hits him on his forehead
Prem: Khabardaar agar tune mere dost ko ordinary kaha toh aur koi bhi insaan bada ya chota nahi hotha mere liye toh sachhe rishte karodo k heere se bhi zyada keemthi hai [Dare if u speak any wrong word for my friend and by the way let me tell u no individual is big or small and for for me a sincere relationship is more precious than diamonds]
Adi: Tu bilkul bhi nahi badla [U r still the same]
Prem: Aur mujhe badalna bhi nahi hai yaar tune woh A.R.Rehman ka gaana nahi suna kya "Rehna tu hai jaisa tu" wo song mujhse inspired hoke hi toh likha tha usne [I don't want to change myself do u know that A. R. Rehman composed the song Rehna tu hai jaisa tu as I was his inspiration]
Adi: Haan haan jaanta hoon chal ab baate banana chod aur mujhe ghar le chal zoro ki bhook lagi hai yaar [Ya ya I know very well common stop making stories and take me to the house as soon as possible I am really hungry]
Prem: Chalo [let's go]
Singhania Villa
Prem: Kaka Adi ka saaman mere bagal wale room mein rakh dijiye [Uncle keep this luggage in the neighbouring room which lies next to my room]
Servant: Ji bete [ok son]
Adi goes to his room and after sometime he comes down for the lunch
He could not find Prem and hence he went towards his room
Prem was busy sketching a beautiful pair of eyes
Adi: Prem ye kiski aakhein bana raha hai? [Prem whose eyes r u trying to sketch?]
Prem: Tu kismat par bharosa karta hai Adi? [Do u believe in destiny Adi?]
Adi: Ye tu mujhse puch raha hai tujhe toh kismat par kabhi bhi yakeen nahi tha [U r asking me this question from when did u started believing in all these things?]
Prem: Aaj se [From today]
Adi: Kya matlab? [What do u mean?]
Prem: Inn aakhon ne mujhe kismat par yakeen karne par majboor kar diya kaash meri kismat ek baar mera saath de de aur inn aakhon k deedar phir se mujhe ho jaaye [These eyes forced me to believe in destiny I wish my destiny stands by my side and atleast one time I become fortunate enough to get a glimpse of these angelic eyes]
Adi: Tujhe kisise se pyar toh nahi hogaya? [Have u fallen in love wit someone?]
Prem: Pyar pehli nazar mein kabhi nahi hotha Adi. Pyar dheere dheere hotha hai. Mujhe abhi toh kisise pyar nahi hua par dil mein tamanna hai k kaash iss bheed bhaad k duniya mein koi apna mil jaaye [I don't believe in first sight love True love grows with time. I have not fallen in love with someone but yes I wish I can find someone who would belong only to me]
Prem gave final touches to his sketch
Adi: Zarur milegi [This will surely happen]
Prem: Achha bata tere movie ka kya hua? [Okay tell me what r your plans regarding ur movie]
Adi: Story toh hai mere paas aur tune khud mujhse kaha hai tu meri movie mein paise lagayega ab rahi baat lead actor aur actress ki toh mere 2 dost hai aaj unse shaam ko jaakar milthe hai I am sure wo mera saath zarur denge [Story is ready and u r going to give me the financial help now regarding the main leads well I have 2 friends I am sure they will help me and accept my proposal. We will go and meet them in the evening]
Prem: Pakka milenge yaar chal usse pehle achhe se lunch kar lethe hai phir der saari baate bhi toh karni hai [Yes we will go and meet them but before that let us have our lunch and then we will chat with each other for some time peacefully]
Adi and Prem start walking downstairs
Prem turns his face and looks at the sketch
Prem :(thinking) Kaash tumse ek baar mulakat ho jaaye Geet [I wish we meet again Geet]
PRECAP 1: Maan: "Kuch bhi toh nahi hai Geet ki aakhon mein" [There is nothing special in Geet's eyes]
PRECAP 2: Prem: "Ye aakhein ek kahani bayan kar rahi hai" [These eyes are narrating a story]
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Love-Piya
Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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main first main first main first... yay yay yay!!

first of all sorry di...for ditching u in Ad Contest...😭... shorry...!

okie...coming to the Update...

Awesome... now what... this Prem's gonna fall for Geet or what? ... dunno...couldn't catch up with this FF... I gotta read it all over again...koi nahi... 5 parts hai...jaldi khatm ho jaane hai...lmao!!

awesome Update di!

continue soon...

-Shivu
Edited by CIDMaaneetNaksh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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kamaal ka update the
loved prem's character
and geet is too good with her helping nature
apna money lady ko dia and then auditions bhi nahin gayin
so sweet of her
and prem is too good
loved his and adi's talk
precap also superb...
maan ko kuch nahin dikh raha and prem is realizing
continue asap
lovely one


Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
I loved the update...!!!!!!!!!!!

And I loved prem sooo much...!!!!!!

It was sooo sweet of geet & prem to help that lady...!!!!

Chalo Prem ki ye icha puri kar do piya.. usse geet se mila do...😉

Bhai prem u ko hi to aage chalkar kuch karna hai... !!!!

It was mindblowing... Fantastic update...!!!!!!!

Luv ya sooo much...!!!!!!!!
Edited by mishtiritu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update dear...
loved it...
aww geet n prem r soo nice they helped the old lady n geet gave her full money...
thats so nice...
continue soon dear...

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Posted: 13 years ago
geet is so sweet prem ko pehli nazar main pyar haye addi goingt to meet his friends hope tyhey are maneet
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ossum dear
prem.buissness man
lovely prt dear
waiti.g fr the next ort desr

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