SS/FF: UnBroken Update Pg 13LAST PART - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey like button isnt working since yesterday... a very intense and emotional update... n yet written amazingly well...
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww how sad... my hart was crying... this story is sooo emotional...pls update asap cant wait..thanks for the earlier pm...pls do pm me with next update ...looking forward to it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wohhh...its really so sad yo see the both of them broken hearted... Hope they will meet soon...oh well it is in ur hands anyways very nice update...loved it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing...
The emotional part is written beautifully...
Loved it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks for pm dear do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Your Writing Is SOOO Intense :) 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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So sorry for not commenting! I had a wierda** week... Nyways! Thanks for the pm, I loved your update!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome and sad update
thanks a ton for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Seeing once the house that had hidden glorious memories, searching for his arrival to haunt him, made Arnav want to jump, everything unspeakable happened in this very house.
He left not even daring to finish what had never started.

The white SUV pulled up at the entrance of Raizada Mansion
In these past months he had set his mind on clearing everything,Now, he was egar to find out what kushi had been aching to tell him.He took breathe, he had left midway with know explainable reason.As ASR stepped out of the luxurious car,seeing his family greet him with joyful and hope in there eyes..
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I was so excited on seeing my brother come back after all this while.Wondering on how he was,had he changed?
Anjali new she had to take this sensitive situation seriously.As he had mentioned to her on the phone that he is Not going back until he gets some answers, which he demanded from Every aspects.
She too new the passion Arnav had for kushi.But on what he had done, she had to be silent.
No, not yet, i must not tell him right now she ordered her mind.
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There was awkward silence in the room.Everyone new why he had made his way back to Delhi.Even threw none dared to even mention That name, that he had been calling out for Months.

As Night crept up, he made way to ones a room which Would have belonged to Him and His Kushi.The hopes and dreams left midway,He touched the bed remembering her goofiness

*Flash Back*

Arnav..Arnav JI wake up!...A familiar voice echoed in his mind, as it grew louder,
Arnav, please Get up!.
He flecked his eyes open realizing it was Her...

KUSHI he whispered in a low but yet dangerous voice,What are you doing here...
A small smile danced on her lips as her eyes got wider.
I missed you !..i ..umm i couldn't sleep with the thoughts of us, and This morning zooming around me, she blushed.Her face was now even more of a dark shade of pink then the pom poms on her Arms....I thought that you would be missing me, and having trouble sleeping like the affect you did to me..But here your busy taking your beauty sleep she chirped.He watched her blabbering for 3 minutes, finding a way to shut her up.

KUSHI CARM DOWN, his hand traced on her hand slowly holding on tight while bringing a gentle kiss on her soft check...
If you cant sleep with out me, then why not sleep WITH me...he gestured her to lay her head on the other side of the bed.

Hours Pasts like heavenly moments in just few seconds,talking for hours and hours.He hugged her tight in his arms...telling Promises they made would one day come true...
but fate had other plans for there Story...


FLASH BACK OVER*

he layed down were once her flesh was,A tear slipped from his eyes.He had promised after that incident, these eyes would never cry again for her.But yet another promise broken...
Tomorrow morning he Will go to the Gupta...He wanted no one to inform her as she would feel that same disgust the last time his harsh words wondered off i her ears.
But judging from payals face,he new that she had already spoken with kushi.
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The sunrise was amazing as kushi stepped out of the house,The aroma was full of different smells lurking around...
She took a small bite of her jalebi..which used to carm her nerves down, but now even in such a little object had many memories lurking around.She always demanded her self to never taste a jalebi of His name..But now it was a bad addictive habit,She couldnt control herself,it was a little tradition in her dictionary to always start with something sweet, with hope that the rest of the day would finish already.

She sighed on her plans with Karan...
Getting ready to go out and shop near the temple he had once banded her finger,switching back to the Real world, just wished everything would end soon.
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Chote are your ready,I can't be late the puja will start a angry anjali spoke.leading out of the door way came a smashing Arnav Sigh Raizada,today after her Di's wish came true, he would make way to the Gupta's.
wearing a handsome black suit,and leather shoes, and black silk vest and shirt.,also maroon shade of tie,he slipped his shades on and headed to were memories yelled his name out. Today was a new morning and Arnav singh raizada had set his mind to not leave Kushi kumare gupta until he got some answers.His destiny now as to wipe her tears away.
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My destiny is true
For all I had done
My destiny is you
For what you become

From time to time you came
My heart is broken
Upon the sadness
That you stolen

My destiny is gone
Without an answer
You came to me
With so much pleasure

I'm feeling hope
And sad for you
Don't tell me
Tell the truth

Destiny has come
Upon me and you
Don't you know
It's my point of view

Day by day
Destiny goes
Who am I
To say no

My destiny is here
Without no dought
Do you hear me
With your shout

I'm far away
From your love
Time to time
I must bust
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Impatiently Arnav waited as her sister prayed what so ever he walked out near the shops,wondering if he could find the huge
Are chote you here a voice from behind asked,

Nodding in silence making way over to the car.
Wait I need to make a wish at the tree she pointed were many strings hung from ..people making wishes and hanging he little red string to the old tree..Some took them of and thanked the man there . arnav amused it was the owner..confused of peoples acts he asked his di ...

Are chote you forgot, when me you and Mama came here, she told us about if you make any wish on the string and tie it on the tree the tree will slowly grant it.And when your done thank it and take the wish string out front he tree...
He smiled faintly, di don't tell me you still belie in this nonsense, letting his eye brow in surprise.
Shhh !!! Making her way to the tree she started chanting words..uff di

Arnavs eyes grew open seeing a familiar girl..well her back,she looked so beautiful and her body curves were perfect.If she looked this spectacular from the back he tried to glance the front of her face..but the girl wasn't working with him..he wondered and was in deep thoughts how beautiful ...


As the wind played with the silk black hair, made him jealous,A sudden wind blew so hard slowly removing the bow she wore.The ribbon slipped down As the girl turned her pale face around in surprise, only to meet his eyes widened in shock..
NO it couldn't be ...it couldn't be her...It felt like his mind was playing games, the past shredding up.Her lips quivered in fright,her eyes once again full of tears because of him...WHY did he hurt her, why did her pearl like tears come because of him...
suddenly getting out of shock and reality stuck him..it wasn't a dream she was here in front of him...
Lost for words as he was he moved forward, only to get a answer of her stumbling back in shock, a sudden river of pain reveled from troughs beautiful eyes...

She ran ..ran in the distance ...she ran from a him...
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Even if my heart should call out your name in the rain, even if these arms should want to embrace you again, and even if I'm all cried out and no longer in pain... I'll never fall in love that way again.

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SORRY it MIGHT be REALLY BORING but sorry, and so I will try make the next part better.COMMENT
Edited by HiraHasan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
that was very emotional arnav is back and he want answers
wonder how long khushi is going to run from him and who is karan anljali know something why does she not tell him awesome update loved it thanks for the pm can't wait till the meet
Edited by dumas - 13 years ago

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