SS/FF: UnBroken Update Pg 13LAST PART - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome part pls continue soon
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awesome parts pls continue soon
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His eyes fluttered open hearing kushi voice,karan how are you feeling.
Kushi I need to talk to Arnav he said in a shaky voice.Still the pain was growing slowly in his heart.The hole was getting bigger as he was afraid.He cried on his luck,Getting an angel like kushi in his life, but the pity on her fake love and the thought of loosing her,she would never forgive herself.the innocence that grew on her face every time he talked to her about his heart which now couldn't even run on wires.

She walked out in silence, she so hope in arnavs eyes as he patted her back.he signaled her from his eyes.ensuring her that everything will just be fine.he was with her.

He bent down on his knees facing Karan eye to eye.Look Its Not like i havnt heard your conversation,
Arnavs eyes exploded.I no kushi will never love me as much as affection she has on only seeing you.Shes a sweet and a lovable girl.She cant face this cruel world alone,Her fate and destiny is slowly fading.She will be Nothing he cried.He closed his eyes on the thought of her hopeless.
Karan ...how how longer do he hesatated on the situtation that he was facing alone.He smiled I have only countless moments left.but the docter he said ..I think i no whats happening to my heart.I can feel the pain rising.Arnav looked him start in his eyes he was in pain, but carm on the thought of dying.He was afraid on seeing kushi alone , just like him...

He held his heart in pain as the sound of thunder raored from the window.I cant take any longer,he held his heart. fading all the memories of kushi.She was the only one to take care of me, she was completely aware of my broken heart.Yet she choose to give this heart alittle hope.before it stopped beating he smiled, finding his smile faded seeing the expression of a terrifedd kushi from the distance,She ran in horror.

Karan why!!..she yelled. touching his defencless heart as it beat for the last few moments.Life wa blur to him and the only path he so was kushi.Know i wont You to talk care of her.Her eyes wighed she looked in desperation on what he was saying,He fiance was handing her to her lover.Promise me you will love her as much and even more..
but karan arnav managed to whisper,He so the desire and his last which to be completed by him and only him.He held his hand and nodded as a tear fell in shock.Kushi touched his pale face as the skin was now hard and called.Still holding his heart as the beats slowly stopped.His eyes closed as his spirit faded away.
She looked at arnav in shock Her eyes looking deep in his eyes.Kushi It was ment to be ..he hugged her tight as a new beginning was about to start for all of them.

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she looked up at the sky clear as ever, only seeing 3 stars shining so brightly,Amma babuji i would like you to meet karan, the most amazing person i have ever met a voice said from bhind,Finding Arnav standing next to her.She hugged him tight on finally he was his and only his...
Love never Dies...

All Because of You


I awake each day with a smile
And greet it with a laugh;
The world is a treasure to me
Because of you.

Every time I think of something sad,
I replace the thought- with you!
My mind is instantly changed
And my heart is filled with gladness.

Every breath I take is meant for you,
I live this life surrounded in joy
And I bathe in the promise of your love,
My soul belongs to you.
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hope u liked the end sorry if its not good, BUT!!!..
Edited by HiraHasan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
amazingly written
loved everything of dis ff/ss
u r 1 of d best
appreciate ur work lot
gud job
bye
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
WOW so beautifully written...
Loved the last part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
awsome and a emotional ending😊👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
Very nice ending expexyted it to be in this way...loved the total story lot...
A Big cheerz for ur work...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Touching End :) 😳
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#59
awesome ss very nice begin to end loved it thanks for the pm
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Beautiful 👏 👏

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