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zafi

@zafi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Absolutely awesome.⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Loved it. So beautiful and exciting. Well done.

Continue soon. Thanks.😉

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Kuku

@lankan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

I loved it Mary ! It was simply beautiful. I liked how Arnav finally opened himself up to him, great job!

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hkhb17

@hkhb17

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

loved it. please do continue!

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TeleFan

@TeleFan

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Wow I loved the ' I don't care' interaction. That was so passionate and very well described. Loved how you played out kushis emotions very well written and gripping I was holding my breath reading it. If you do continue pls pm me. Tks

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Marybarton

@Marybarton

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+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: kdkumar
It was really beautiful!!! Loved it!!

Thank KD! So glad you liked it.

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Marybarton

@Marybarton

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+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: LyssaPie
aww wonderful start!!

The way Khushi kept denying it and the way Arnav didn't give up made my heart melt 😍

and when he said she can come to pool side whenever she wants as they're related and she thought of something else was too good👏

Do continue!

I am glad you enjoyed it. Did you like the symbolism?

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Fatima

@desigirl_18

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Beautifully written!! Loved the ending especially the way he had the pearls in his pocket too!!😳

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Marybarton

@Marybarton

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: -Mayuri-
Awesome start! Continue soon! Loved it!

Sorry, this might be a one time thing. I will write other pieces I hope 😃

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glamourbird

@glamourbird

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Marybarton

Thank you for first comment! You made my day! Did you like the symbolism? I tried to keep it very PG13 by putting symbols.

LOL!! I know how it feels to recieve the first comment...been there already!!😆

But yea the symbolism was great... in fact it was mind blowing.. loved how it was passionate yet very suttle!!

please continue soon!!