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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nams_arsha

will update by today nite 😳



waiting dii 😈
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Posted: 13 years ago
it was cute and hot update...

loved the shower scene of kriyaansh...

rey kissed her on cheeks and shower... aww 😳

update soon...

its more than month
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Posted: 13 years ago
wen r u gng to update nxt chptr
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Posted: 13 years ago
finally i will b updating today who all r interested ??? 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
yeh koi puchne waali baat hai... me
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Posted: 13 years ago
*SHOUTS*
Me me me ! ;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
nams pls update jaldi... this forum has bcum sunsaan... no PMs...
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART 6 [epilogue]

this story was always one of my favourite i know there was a little of confusion with character lining of kria and intro of Armaan Ridhima but any how we have reached the end of the journey.. hope u liked it till this update..! love ya all 🤗

In two days her whole life was changed.. she was getting married.. the whole house was indulged in preparations.. on behalf of which everyone left to temple but kria had refused to go.. she had her own thoughts to conquer..!! she wanted to digest the fact that they wer getting married.. !
Since last nite when his mom declared his marriage proposal he cudnt get slightest sleep.. all he could see was kria.. her smile.. her eyes.. nothing more.. somewhere he felt he knew her more than what he actually knows.. was that an illusion ? no it was reality.. he badly wanted to meet her..
Their parents were really smart when they decided to leave to mandir knowingly or unknowingly both kria and rey refused to go.. hence they thought this would be the best time for them to get close..
Rey had gone for jogging.. a sudden enthuisaism was all over him.. the excitement was reaching peaks.. he was dying to meet her.. while as kria was still trying to get oover her Blushy face..
For the first time she decided to wear a slawar for the day.. her heart was racing at its highest rate since she came to know about the marriage..
Draping herself in a beautiful white salwar she pulled up duppata which calmy stood gracing her neck area.. simple white thin bangles danced on her hands.. she wasn't much of accessory lover. She always wore very simple items or sometimes left her hands and ears blank rather than covering wid any ornaments.. but today she felt different.. she wore a small twinkling white pearl earings wich shined brightly on her cute ears.. completely covered in white she was just an epitome of angel on earth.. her rosy pink lips curved a smile wen she finaly saw herself in the mirror! Gosh was it her ?? or was she dreaming!! Kria was never this traditional but today she felt like doing all this for Him..
He ran near the gates and stopped in his tracks.. he cudnt go out of the house because the was snowfall, light though.. and it was still dawn.. he had to stay home or else he would fall sick..
'was there any need for them to go to temple this early ?' he thought.. he was still unaware of kria being at home.. he thought even she accompanied the other.. though he chuckled imagining kria in a traditional outfit and going to temple.. Gosh how his life changed ? till yesterday he was thinking about his dream girl and today kria had taken all of his heart ? naah!! He was still obssesd with his dream girl and had madly fallen for kria.. but both cannot be loved isn't it ? so now his main task was finding a way to get rid of his dream.. he really wished to see only kria in his dreams.. but he cant b any unfair for his dream girl who had gotten him mad! Oh boy how was he to deal with two ??
he turned around only to see the a girl stepping out towards the garden.. her long slender legs climbed down the steps with the ends of duppata flying behind.. he analysed her.. she was in Compelte white outfit.. suddenly the flashes of his dream girl striked his mind.. he again tried to see her face but he couldn't .. he went further.. he stood near a tree and looked at her..
the lips.. the eyes wer all similar he started starring at her from head to toe.. the situation was dead similar to his dream!!
She was in white.. there was snowfall .. she looked like angel..!
Hell she even opened her arms up and started collecting snow whirling around.. he shuffled his hair to gain look her.. she was a real beauty! Shit his heart had started doing all kinds of somersaults..!
The whistling breeze the snowfall wasn't that a perfect combo to be played with the angel on earth ??
Her hair danced on her shoulders.. her eyes shut tight in pleasure..
she suddenly felt an intense gaze on her.. his anticipation was racing..
she stopped on her tracks.. her back facing him.. he inched further.. at any cost he wouldn't let this be a dream.. he so badly wanted to be the reality..
a cute blush curved her lips.. it looked like the whole world had stopped.. there was nothing but the whistles of tree leaves.. the pleasant noise of snow and breeze..
her heart thumped hard on her chest.. she felt it would pop out any moment.. her breath rate also increased when she felt he was coming towards her. Her head tilted towards her shoulders on left trying to see him through the corner of her eyes' she smiled when realized it was Rey.. she lowered her eyes lashes and clutched her duppatta tigtly
She turned to face him.. opening her eye lashes up, making a wide smile on her face trying to cover the red shade had appeared on cheeks due to blush.. her ear rings rang a bell while her bangles added the chorus.. her anklet called its presence while her chain laid silently brushing her neck line..
The breeze seemed jealous of her.. of the situation.. it made the way thru her.. making her hair tune in the air..
the duppata flew upon his face making her face not visible to him..
He slowly removed the duppata off his face as if milli secs wer counted on his action..
Finally the duppata was pulled off..
Was he happy ?? or did he felt like he was the Most luckiest man on earth ??
His wishes had just come true.. god had pushed him out of his Bigges confusion all of a sudden.. she ws blushing seeing him.. her eyes locked on his.. how he prayed let It not be a dream or he would be seriously regretting!!
He inched forward with jus mms away from her.. her eyes widened and she smiled heartfully..
His gaze was completely stuck on her.. for wat seemed to be ages they kept staring at each other.. while the snow started praising them by flowing down slowly on its own..
Finally rey managed to touch her cheeks.. just to be sure it isn't a dream.. kria shuddered of his touch and closed her eyes .. she tilted her head on his direction..
He pulled his hand back.. slowly she opened her eyes.. he suddenly burst out of laughter [ laughter of happiness ] kria was really confused.. she checked herself again if she was looking like a clown.. he was still laughing.. she frowned.. the anger clearely lit her face.. she turned to leave but he caught her wrist and pulled her onto him.. she hit herself against his chest..
he fiercely starred at her eyes.. she felt week on her knees under his stare.. she looked down with a pout of him laughing at her earlier..
he lifted her chin up moved close to her.. 'beautiful' he whispered in her ears..
her eyes shot up and she smiled and blushed at the same time..
'kria har roz jis ladki ki sapne dekta tha wo tum ho..' he paused she smiled further and waited for him to continue.. 'ur my dream girl..' he again paused for a moment.. she was already lost in his eyes.. ' kya tum humesha ke liye mere life mei aur dreams mei rehna pasand karogi ??' she was in the state of bliss! He was proposing her!! Wat else did she want at the moment ?? she nodded yes.. she couldn't utter a word in her state.
He moved forward closing the gaps between their lips.. it sent a shiver down her spine.. she was taken by surprise when he suddenly kissed her.. but as he deepened the kiss she flung her arms around his neck.. he slid his hands down her waist and pulled her close.. gradually she reciprocated the kiss..
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So guys that was the end of the story! 😭 will come up wid new story soon.😛. but I will not update any on this thread anymore.. il update them separately..😃

so before ending this up i would like to Thank Each and Every one 🤗who read liked and reviewed!! 😳ur support makes me happie and encourages to do better!😎 hope i have lived up to ur expectations..😳

and haan dont worry y am i giving a thanku note 🤣 its because i loved this thread a lot.. c my first OS was posted in dis thread only...😳
hence.. anyways much more KR stuffs to come..😛
Edited by nams_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Res.. *Unres* me first one 2 comment...yay!!! Dhinkachika dhinka chika...m so happy...*dancing* phli baar first on any of ur works nams...yippee!!! Now coming 2 d update... It was fab!!! Dats what i call a superb epilogue... Loved it... Kriyaansh getting married...wow rey n kria dono ne ek saath hi mandir jaane se mana kar dia...destiny i guess... Kria in india...wow... Angel in white... Finally rey ka dream poora hua n he got his dreamgirl... Loved d way rey proposed kria...awesome... N den their kiss...haye!!!me drifting off 2 kriyaansh land... Every good thing comes 2 an end n same goes with dis one... I'll miss it... But m waiting for ur new works on our lovely couple kriyaansh...:) :D:D:D
Edited by puja_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

res

unres...

haw!!! this ended?

not fair... abhi toh shuruwaat hui thi... n u made it end...

anyways cuming to the update...

finally Rey ko apni Dream gal Kria mein dikh hi gayi...

and the last one... their kiss... that was awesome...

haw!!! puja... tune meri first position leli... chal koi nahi... m glad bina PM k... m second😉


Edited by shenz_kriyaansh - 13 years ago

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