KriYansh Oneshots (OS) || ch3 prt5 pg57 jun'10

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Shukti_19

@Shukti_19

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#441

Finally Rey's dream has come true... Perfect & beautiful ending.. Loved it as usual.. But m gonna miss this story for sure! Come soon with a new one

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Shweta

@Shweta-kriyansh

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#442

wow...thats all i cud say...a perfect epilogue...the excitement ,nervousness is matchless...loved the way rey was confused abt whom to love more-his dream gal or kria..and kria's excitement to dress up for rey...aww/////...

loved it to the core...and the confession and the kiss was megical...roaking epilogues...looking forward to more works from u...

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chetna

@crazysky

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#443

it was awesome

will miss this ss of urs...n u ended it so soon...😭

i personally liked these lines

Draping herself in a beautiful white salwar she pulled up duppata which calmy stood gracing her neck area.. simple white thin bangles danced on her hands.. she wasn't much of accessory lover. She always wore very simple items or sometimes left her hands and ears blank rather than covering wid any ornaments.. but today she felt different.. she wore a small twinkling white pearl earings wich shined brightly on her cute ears.. completely covered in white she was just an epitome of angel on earth.

this description was awesome

loved it