KriYansh Oneshots (OS) || ch3 prt5 pg57 jun'10 - Page 16

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update nams.
it was mind-blowing.
loved it.
i'm speechless.
amazing.
thanks for the pm.
Update next part soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago
thank you evry one for sparing some time and comenting.. and hitting like without fail THNKX a lot guys...

lov yaa all...
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CHAPTER 2 :PART 3

'baatein kuch ankahi si.. the unspoken words!! Do u love someone ??? haven't confessed yet ?? confusion ??? well here is the song for all those who are going thru dis phase.. jus dedicate this song to ur loved ones! Im sure they will also feel the same for u, if ur both r destined to meet..' the RJ spoke wid his deep rooted voice..

Both froze for what they just heard..!! always RJ's and songs do perfect timing in love stories! *sigh..

Baatein kuch unkaahe si

Kuch unsuni si hone lagi..

Kria looked out of the window and lowered the glass of window pane'

Rey looked at her.. and smiled wid a urge to get her in his arms..

Kaabu dil pe raha na

Hasti humari khone lagi..

Lyrics wer soo true as though it was exclusively made for their lives.. kria left a sigh..

As the car took a U turn and it went in high speed on the abandoned high way.. she felt serene.. thinking abt them.. wer wer they going.. wt had jus happnd.. wid a hope that their life wud change soon..

Woooh woooh wooo' shayad yahi hai pyaar 2

She opened her eyes wide listening to the lyrics.. he too looked at her.. and she stared at him.. as though asking 'do v love each other' ?

Kehde mujse dil mei kya hai

Aisa bhi kya guroor..

He looked at her.. who was busy enjoying the cool breeze hitting her face..

Tujko bhi toh ho rha hai

Thodi asar zaroor..

She turned to him realising he was staring at her.. he looked back to the road..

Ho yeh khamoshi jeene na de

Koi toh baat ho..

She looked at him as though pleading to end the silence and confess.. but he had something special in his minds..

Wooh woooh wooo.. shayad yahi hai pyaar 2

He smiled.. and looked at her.. she looked into him.. and gave a cute smile.. soon they looked away from each other feeling awkward..

Baatein kuch unkaahe si

Kuch unsuni si hone lagi..

Kaabu dil pe raha na

Hasti humari khone lagi..

Woooh woooh wooo' shayad yahi hai pyaar 2

So true in their place.. unspoken words.. unheard words.. no one has a will on their heart.. the same heart wich made them friends.. the same heart wich made them fall in love.. wich made them hide the feelings.. wich made them loose their senses at the mere touch.. the same heart wich cried and groaned for departing away.. the same heart wich chanted each other's name every sec..

***

He drove the car on the sea side and stopped it.. she looked at him.. and then out.. seeing the beauty of roads meeting sea.. those colourful streetlight looking like a necklace on the black sky.. it was perfect romantic place.. hardly anyone was there on the sight.. she ran out and stood at a distance inhaling the serene nature.. the pure essence of sea breeze.. the cool air hitting her wid the fastest phase.. her favourite place became more special today..

He leaned on the bonnet of the car and seeing her enjoying was a perfect bliss to him..

She turned to face him.. he was at a distance from her..

Sometimes the unspoken words are heard.. and understood.. but to get a confirmation of mind.. it should not only be acted out, it should be confessed by one self.. 'love' have to be confessed for the mind to relax and heart to celebrate..

She cud read his eyes.. how much he loved her was now evident on his eyes..

'kyun nhi kaha' she asked wid a pout..

'dartha tha' he said while taking one step towards her

'im an idiot but tum toh smart hona so y dint u tell ?' he asked

Wid each answers both wer taking a step closer towards each other..

'exactly tum idiot ho wo b sabse bada!!!!! Huh' she said wid almost moist eyes..

'toh mei idiot hoon ???' he asked making a baby face..

'haan ho tum!!!! Kitna tadpaya muje!!!!' she complained..

He stared at her expressionless..

'ab b tadpa rhe ho!! Abi b chup rahoge kuch nhi kahoge???' she said angrily standing ryt infront of him..

He kept staring at her.. she was waiting..

'u knw wat rehne do!! Accha hota agar mei ussi ke saat shaadi karleti jiska rishtha leke aayi hai mom ne!! tumse kuch expect karna hi bekaar hai!!!' she almost screamed at him and moved off'

He held her hands.. stopping her.. she wasn't facing him yet, she was one step ahead of him.. her hand hand held by him..

He bent on his knees and she turned.. wid his hand infront of her..

The scene was jus perfect.. jus the way she wished for! Jus the way she thought it shud be.. in her fav place.. beside the sea.. almost midnite.. wid him on his knees.. wid dem both making the moment more special..

'miss kria ghai I Love u wid all my heart, I loved u wen we first met.. I loved u wen we became friends.. I loved u wen u fought wid me for no reasons.. I loved u wen u laughed at my dumbest jokes I loved u when u manged to smile when u wer really sad.. I loved u wen u wiped my tears and thought me to b brave.. I loved u ..'

She interrupted..

'when u loved me..' she compltd nd smiled.. as she slid his hands in his.. he got up..

'I love u too rey..' saying wich both hugged tight..

The perfect moment for both..

To make the moment more perfect god showered his blessings for the couples..

He placed his chin on her shoulders taking in her sweet fragrance.. a drop of rain fell on her shoulders, thn on his nose.. on his hands.. he looked up..

She broke the hug and opened her hands wide.. it startd raining.. she enjoyed it by twirling around and jumping.. her tear filled eye was now filled wid joy.. her happiness was back in life,' she finally got her love..

He pulled her close to him.. rain drops falling from her forehead to lips.. he stared at her for a while..

It was midnite

12 am!!

He cupped her face in his hands.. and moved closer to fill the gap bw their lips..

He nudged his lip between her upped lip.. she placed her hands around his neck.. and caught in wid a kiss closing her eyes.. a perfect romantic kiss midnite near the sea on the rains..

He kept sucking the rain drops wich flowed between lips.. a lip lock kiss was perfectly made pefect like a cheery on the top in the perfect night wid the perfect couple and god's blessing as a rain to make them the perfectionist!!!

She thought how her weird dreams had come true.. she had nevr told anyone but she alwz wished that she wud get her first kiss on her fav place in the rains and midnight..!!

The life had taken a beautiful turn making all confusions clear unexpectedly wid a single stroke and making life a unpredictable dose of love wid mixture of happiness and angst.. they wer imperfect alone but they are perfect wid each other..

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*The ending of beautiful beginning*

do read 'epilogue' next page .. 😃

Edited by nams_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
yay..!
first one 2 comment..
will first read it..
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Posted: 13 years ago

CHAPTER 2: EPILOGUE

It was evening time.. she reached home still in the same thoughts of what had happened last nite.. she nevr stopped blushing..

As she reached home.. she saw her mom sitting wid a lady..

Wait.. the lady was the same whom she had met yday in neha's wedding..

'dammit!!!! No not again.. !!!!' she thought as she entered the living room confused..

'kria beta meet Mrs Priya..'

'MOM muje aap se kuch baat krni hai..' she said pleadingly..

' okay beta but yeh..' she tried to say something..kria interuupted again..

'MOM PLS ITS URGENT!!!' she said like a 5yr old baby crying..

'OKAY..' smriti excused herself and moved to her room wid kria..

'mom muje unki bete se shaadi nhi krni' mom I hav alrdy found one!! Nd I love him.. mom I loved him since college.. wo waisa hi hai jaisa aap chahthe ho. well settled.. and independent.. mom I love him very much..and wo b mujse bahut pyaar krta hai... mei aur kisi se shaadi nhi kr skti please mom please understand!!' she said non-stop..

Smriti once blinked her eyes trying to register what her daughter was saying..

'but I have promised priya..' she said confusingly seeing her daughter so despereate..

'haan toh kya hua say that im engaged. And kal b meine yahi kaha unse''

'haan yeh yaha..' she tried to speak but again cut off by kria..

'aap bas unke paas jao aur kehdo I don't want to marry her son or watevr!! pls..'

Saying this she pulled smriti along wid her outside..

Wid a big grin 'mom aapse kuch kehna chahthi hai' she said to the lady

Smriti looked at kria raising her eye brows'. And smriti lifted her hands in air indicating 'I don't knw'

Priya smiled..

'okay kria I knw ur engaged.. I jus came here to say smriti tat my son has found bride for himself..' she said wid a smile

Kria left a sigh while smriti asked sorry for her misbehavior glaring at kria..

Kria went move off..

'dekna nhi chahoge whoz dat lucky gal' a voice striked her ears.. she froze in for a moment..

She turned wid jerk to find him grinning near the door..

'W*F' she shouted at herself inaudible to others

He waved hii..

'rey' she muttered when she realised priya's son was rey himself..

Smriti suddenly said 'beta kria has alrdy found one for herself.. im sorry for the inconvenience..'

'what really?' rey asked pretending to be heart broken.. he looked at kria nd bit back a chuckle..

'NO' she screamed at top of her voice..

All looked at her confused..

'mera matlab.. its him.. matlab.. I love him..'

All ' we know '


leaving a sigh she said,

'wo wo wo muje iss rishte se koi problem nhi'

Smriiti immediately 'but tumne abi abi kaha that u love him'

'haan I love him!' (looking at rey) she said..

'toh how can u marry him (indicating rey) ?? smriti asked kria and then turned to priya 'im sorry meri beti alrdy kissi se pyaar karti hena so..'

'NHI' kria shouted

'pyaar nhi krti ???' smriti asked shockingly..

'matlab karti hoon.. lekin..'

'lekin kya???' rey and priya asked..

'MUJE AAP SE SHAADI KRNI AND MEI TOH AAPSE PYAAR KRTI HOON!!!!' she said at one tone like an announcemnt (completly forgtting to whom she was saying dis).. pointing rey and holding his arms on hers..

all looked at each other and then at kria...

all burst into laughter at once!!

Kria felt embarrassed as they wer playing game wid her, she blushed slightly..

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(kria nd rey in terrace)

Kria: yeh sab kya tha ???

Rey: back up plan!!!! Wo kya hena tum gals ko trust nhi kr skte !!

Kria: Hawww wat ??? uuu!!!

She hit him slightly on his arms.. he whimped and she tried to hit him again.. he caught her hands and pulled her closer.. his grip was soo tight she tried to move off but helpless..

Rey moved closer.. she stopped struggling.. and he leaned front aiming at her lips.. she closed her eyes.. he moved closer and whispered 'I made u confess infront of everyone!!' he ran after whispering.. her jaws drop down at his coment.. she ran behind him hitting.

~lived happily evr after~

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*END of chapter 2*


p.s: each chapters will be different story.. and it can so happen that each chapter may have few parts like chapter two or one part like chapter 1😳


THANK YOU EVRYONE FOR UR LIKES AND COMNTS..

and alwz been supproting me!! thnkx a lot..!

like evrytime im in hurry.. trust me i do read evryone's post.. i so wish i cud reply to each nd evry one of u bt im very too buys..

and my xams r ovr yday.. (it was mnthly internaly tests.. bt i need evrythn to be perfect u knw) so finally cleared all..

i still have clg and my routine is hectic so all pending updts of SS will b postponed to this weekend, hope u understnd..

luv ya..

nams.. ❤️

Edited by nams_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
super perfect...!!
n awesome endin !

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Posted: 13 years ago
Kriyaansh romance . . . Without being a couple ☺️ . . . . . Tabhi to I love them so much 😉 . . . . . . He never fails to grab special moments wid her . . . . . . . . 😃

rey is so quick . . . Bahar ka plan bhi bana lia . . . Ab to confession 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful update nams and d ending was superb and ya we will wait for ur next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update.
it was amazing.
perfect ending.
the proposal in the rain was so cute.
ans back up plan was amazing.

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