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nats0101

@nats0101

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Posted: 13 years ago

#91

awesm updt

lotsa emotions..

enjoyd reading it all

waiting 4 d father-daughter meet!

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Anu

@anuandavi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#92

Awesome. But ye kya, is her father going to die?

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Little_Mermaid.

@Little_Mermaid.

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#93

lovely

sorry like button is not working

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mchopra

@mchopra

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#94

woha her father's POV was fab...like not working yaara...sry.

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Shimmerr

@Shimmerr

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#95

sorry, but still cant press the like tab!!
continue soon!!

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sanu3108

@sanu3108

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#96

amazingly written ... loved every bit of it ...

plzz give the next part soon

love

Sana

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RaDMG25

@RaDMG25

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#97

amazing update so glad maan is there with geet

you have really portayed their support and the whole emotional scene well 👏

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mysteriousmilli

@mysteriousmilli

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#98

Excellent update as always...
very emotional too...
precap sounds very scary😲...
waiting to know the next...
like button is not working , so I can't...😭😭😭

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Sara Khanna

@$ara_$hachi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#99

gosh, marvee sweetie👏 ... i am still crying *happy tears*😭🤗

"beautiful" the word which came to my mind when i read the last word of the whole part ... amazing ... you really did justice to the emotions in each line ... what to say ?????? ... everything was damn awesome ... the first 2 paragraph, where Geet's thought was presented in such excellent words - Maan not trusting himself to be calm in front of his sexy wife - Geet's finally being a normal wife, admiring her hubby (actually trying not to attack him just the way he was trying) - two of them finally feeling complete, free & alive with each other - Geet's thought about her daddy - emotional & proud fill paragraphs where Geet met her mat uncle, where mat uncle felt so happy to have her back, where he was so proud to see Maan as her hubby - Geet's Daddy's POV ... i mean all was damn "beautiful" ... truly awesome😊😳👍🏼😍 ... but the precap is scaring me & i am missing Jannat more now ... though you keep her present in all the parts

do cont soon & do PM me