HUMTUM (RTMC FF) - Page 9

Originally posted by: prahelika

hi riya...😊
plz give us an long romantic update on 14th😊...plz plz plz
as sweetsanyo requested...we wanna celebrate this day like this😳...plz😊

hi prahelika don't worry i'll give u long update.

thanks all of u for ur lovely comments
part 7
next morning(in the office)
veer to rudra-"yeh accounts ka kaam kaun dekhta h?" while turning the pages of file.

Rudra-"mamaji or agni hi accounts ka saara kaam sambhalte h kyun? Kya hua?"

veer-"nhi kuch nhi bs aise hi''he put the file on table n went to jai n agni's cabin,whose busy with some files,to saw veer both of quickly stand up n closed their files.

Agni-"veer tum yahan kaise koi jaruri kaam tha to bta dete mein khud wahan aa jaata"

veer smiled at him n said-"koi baat nhi agni mera tumjse or mamaji se milne ka bhot mann kar rha tha to mein khud hi aa gya,waise aap dono koi jaruri kaam kar rhe the kya?"

jai quickly interrupted n said-"nhi hum koi jaruri kaam nhi kar rhe the tum btao tumhe koi kaam tha kya?"

veer-''han wo aaj mein accounts ki file check kar rha mujhe thodi gadbad lagi to mein aapko btane aa gya''

jai n agni shocked to hear this n sweating badly,
jai-"nhi aisa kaise ho sakta h meine khud saari files check ki h lagta h tumse koi galti ho gyi h veer''

veer saw their face expression n said-''ho sakta h mujhse koi galti ho gyi ho mein ek baar phir check kar leta hun...waise agar koi gadbad hogi bhi to aap chinta mat kijiye me gadbad karne wale ko bhi jaldi dhund lunga"n he about to move when he turn n saw their faces n said-''aap 2no apna pasina saaf kar lijiye aaj garmi bhot h" n finally h leave with a smile.

After sometime tanya entered in the office n looked here n there 4 veer n finally find him in the meeting room chatting with dhruv. She moved toward him n sat next to him

tanya-hi veer kaise ho?

Veer turned to saw her n smiled at her-"thik hun''

tanya-"veer aaj shaam ko tum mere saath shopping par chaloge thik h?"

veer-"nhi mein shopping par nhi jayunga mujhe shopping karne nhi aati tum sapna ko le jao''

tanya-"sapna bhot busy h tum mere saath jaa rhe ho n thats final.''n she leaves.
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in evening

veer n tanya reached at shopping mall..tanya excitedly came out from the car n veer went to part it
after sometime he came back n then both of them entered in shopping mall...tanya looked here n there for gud dresses n moved towards a stall...veer simply follow her as he didn't like shopping n all that.

Tanya was very excited n said to veer-"veer yeh dress kaisi h?''

veer-"acchi h''he didn't wanted to spoil her mood
suddenly a female voice strucked in his ears which was very familiar n he turned to looked at her...he smiled as he wanted her at that moment...she was none other than his dreamgirl...he was gazing at her black hairs,her black,her pink lips n rosy cheeks...unknown by his gazed she was busy in selecting the dress with her sister.n said-"di yeh kaise h '' she quickely picked up a blue colour chudidaar suit n placed a dupatta on her shoulder n moved toward the mirror...n shocked to saw the image of young n handsome boy...she turned back n he was still staring at her...she felt shy by his continous gazed she quickly turn her face toward the mirror...
Veer changed his face expression n rejected her dress.

She feel sad n picked another dupatta n stand in front of mirror n waitinp for his answer...veer said to tanya-"tannu tumhe green colour accha nhi h ye mat lena''

tanya was surprised to hear this n said-"veer yeh red colour h green nhi''

veer turned to looked at her n said-"han mein keh rha tha ki green mat lena tumhare upar accha nhi lagega.

Neha picked yellow dupatta n put on her shoulder n looked at him through mirror with curosity
veer looked at her n again rejected the dress n said-"yellow bhi accha nhi h''
tanya nodded n smiled at him

tanya-"veer tumhi btao ki mujhpar konsa colour accha lagega''

now neha very upset n throw all the dupattas n said-"dii mujhe kuch nhi lena chalo yahan se''with anger
she was about to move when she heared his voice n stopped

veer said loudly-''pink colour tumhare upar bhot accha lagega''n gazed at her without blinking his eyes

pooja-''neha chalo ruk kyun gyi''

neha-''di ek baar phir dekh lete h ''she quickly picked up pink dupatta n saw in mirror...veer smiled at her n said-"mene kaha tha na pink colour tum par accha lagega''n both of them looked at each other continously.she blushed by his staring n lowered her eyes...

Tanya shooked veer n said-''veer kahan kho gye btao kaise lag rha h pink colour''

veer come to his senses n looked at her-"accha lap rha h bhot accha h''

pooja to neha"neha ye colour tujhpar bhot accha lag rha isse pack kara lete'' n both of them leave

veer turned back to saw her but she was not there n he felt sad n soon veer n tanya also finished their shopping.

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outside the shopping mall neha standing with so many bags n waiting for her sister...veer n tanya also came outside n suddeny his phone rang veer said to tanya-"tannu tum chalo mein car lekar aata hun''n he hastely moved toward parking alongwith call n strucked to

Originally posted by: tejjo

thanks all of u for ur lovely comments
part 7
next morning(in the office)
veer to rudra-"yeh accounts ka kaam kaun dekhta h?" while turning the pages of file.....office aate hi banda kaam par lag gaya...impressive)



veer saw their face expression n said-''ho sakta h mujhse koi galti ho gyi ho mein ek baar phir check kar leta hun...waise agar koi gadbad hogi bhi to aap chinta mat kijiye me gadbad karne wale ko bhi jaldi dhund lunga"n he about to move when he turn n saw their faces n said-''aap 2no apna pasina saaf kar lijiye aaj garmi bhot h" n finally h leave with a smile. ......(🤣...veer is really amazing...i love him...band baja di ...unki...)

After sometime tanya entered in the office n looked here n there 4 veer n finally find him in the meeting room chatting with dhruv. She moved toward him n sat next to him(...tanya stay away from him...😡...voh sirf neha ka ahi...😳...kya chipku ladki hai yeh tanya, ...bhagao isse koi)

tanya-hi veer kaise ho?....(zinda hai...tumhe sahte sahte mar jayaga)

Veer turned to saw her n smiled at her-"thik hun''..(veer , say her straight to go away.)

tanya-"veer aaj shaam ko tum mere saath shopping par chaloge thik h?"......(i hate her man)

veer-"nhi mein shopping par nhi jayunga mujhe shopping karne nhi aati tum sapna ko le jao''(try try, but never cry)

tanya-"sapna bhot busy h tum mere saath jaa rhe ho n thats final.''n she leaves.(zabardasti hai kya)
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in evening


suddenly a female voice strucked in his ears which was very familiar n he turned to looked at her...he smiled as he wanted her at that moment...she was none other than his dreamgirl...he was gazing at her black hairs,her black,her pink lips n rosy cheeks...unknown by his gazed she was busy in selecting the dress with her sister.n said-"di yeh kaise h '' she quickely picked up a blue colour chudidaar suit n placed a dupatta on her shoulder n moved toward the mirror...n shocked to saw the image of young n handsome boy...she turned back n he was still staring at her...she felt shy by his continous gazed she quickly turn her face toward the mirror...
Veer changed his face expression n rejected her dress.( yeh scene dil ke ek dum paar gaya hai...loved it...sooperb...jaise hi maine ismain rtmc ko imagine kiya...haye!...mar javan...kya sweet lag rahe hain dono)

She feel sad n picked another dupatta n stand in front of mirror n waitinp for his answer...veer said to tanya-"tannu tumhe green colour accha nhi h ye mat lena''( good veer , help her...and ignore dat tanya...)

tanya was surprised to hear this n said-"veer yeh red colour h green nhi''( don't disturb...veer is busy with his jaan-e-maan.)

veer turned to looked at her n said-"han mein keh rha tha ki green mat lena tumhare upar accha nhi lagega.( oye hoye...tumhe bada pata hai...ki tumhari neha par kya accha lagega.)

Neha picked yellow dupatta n put on her shoulder n looked at him through mirror with curosity
veer looked at her n again rejected the dress n said-"yellow bhi accha nhi h''......( lagi rahi neha aapne handsome hunk ko impress karne main)
tanya nodded n smiled at him

tanya-"veer tumhi btao ki mujhpar konsa colour accha lagega''......(bolana ...don't disturb veer...jab do javaan log baat karte hai...though eyes talk...budhe log bich main nahi bolte)

now neha very upset n throw all the dupattas n said-"dii mujhe kuch nhi lena chalo yahan se''with anger...(don't be sad sweetie)
she was about to move when she heared his voice n stopped......(hey diwaani, hey u rani, ruk jao rani, dekh jaara piche mudke, chali kaha aise ud ke...gili gili aapa...gili gili aapa...)

veer said loudly-''pink colour tumhare upar bhot accha lagega''n gazed at her without blinking his eyes....(yeh! ...mera bhi fav pink hai)

pooja-''neha chalo ruk kyun gyi''.....(rukegi kaise nahi)

neha-''di ek baar phir dekh lete h ''she quickly picked up pink dupatta n saw in mirror...veer smiled at her n said-"mene kaha tha na pink colour tum par accha lagega''n both of them looked at each other continously.she blushed by his staring n lowered her eyes...(muhaaa...loved it, ...so romantic yaar...amazing, dil kush kar diya...)

Tanya shooked veer n said-''veer kahan kho gye btao kaise lag rha h pink colour''...(tanya kyun nahi kahi kho jati ,)

veer come to his senses n looked at her-"accha lap rha h bhot accha h''

pooja to neha"neha ye colour tujhpar bhot accha lag rha isse pack kara lete'' n both of them leave......(lagega kaise nahi...choice kiski hai...)

veer turned back to saw her but she was not there n he felt sad n soon veer n tanya also finished their shopping.(sad)

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outside the shopping mall neha standing with so many bags n waiting for her sister...veer n tanya also came outside n suddeny his phone rang veer said to tanya-"tannu tum chalo mein car lekar aata hun''n he hastely moved toward parking alongwith call n strucked to......( i wish, . i wish,, i wish...yeh neha ho...pls.)

awesome update...👏

nice update😛

lovely update dear😊...

thanks sweetsanyo 4 ur lovely comment n yeah veer is very sensible person,thats why he is my fav
love u

Originally posted by: SonaliDhone

nice update😛

loved that shopping scene n their Indirect talks 😆

n must be Veer

strucked to Neha...😳

waiting for next😍

continue soon dear

hey thanks dear
lets see veer strucked to whom

Originally posted by: ridzzi

awesome update...👏

ate hi veer jai aur agni ki pol kholne main lag gaya...kaha tha na ye veer tedi kheer hai...to ab dekh bhi lo...😆

n this tanya...well i m not going to say anything to her...couz jaane anjaane she is helping our veer n neha to meet...😉

n pink...haan haan ab to veer ki pasand ki hi dress achi lagegi...dusari kiu...😉

''...he hastely moved toward parking alongwith call n strucked to...''

neha hi hogi...kiu ki wohi mall ke bahar wohi khadi thi...bags le ke...aur agar humare hero n heroin ek hi jagah hai to milna to banta hi hai na...😳

update soon...

luv u...😊

thanks dear 4 ur comment n yeah our veer is so intelligent na.,
will update soon
luv u too

Originally posted by: prahelika

lovely update dear😊...

so overconfident jai and dumbo agni thought they'll never get caught😡...

little did they know that veer maybe too young but much more shrewd and intelligent than these two buggers...he'll catch them red handed very soon...😊

now this tanya is a big problem🤔...even veer's family is very fond of tanya...🤔

but veer can't avoid her after all she's his childhood buddy😕...i hope he comes to know what kind

of desire this girl nourishes in her heart for him😕...if she doesn't cum b/w veer and neha i won't hate her but if she does...😡but tanya did one thing good...

she dragged him to the shopping mall...😳otherwise we couldn't have get such a beautiful veer-neha scene😍aww...neha was trying one dress after another and waiting for veer's approval every time😍...so cute...this scene reminded me of prc😊...the difference is that prithvi was just a figment of imagination of sanyo there...

just bcoz veer didn't like any dess neha decided to buy nothing😆... and when veer said about pink dress she changed her mind then and there😆...poor girl..pyaar mein kya kya karna padta hai ise😆

now i guess the next update will be on 14th❤️😳...i m waiting for it😍

thnx for the pm riya...

thanks dear 4 ur comment
will update soon
ur welcom
love u