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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow... Lovely partss dear... Loved reading it :-)
And especially the name u chose for mugdha lol
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: neha_dubey1709

wow... Lovely partss dear... Loved reading it :-)
And especially the name u chose for mugdha lol
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww...such a sweet n super cute update..

loved it soo much..

dress scene n tie one was sooo sweet..

thnx for the pm...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat

awww...such a sweet n super cute update..

loved it soo much..

dress scene n tie one was sooo sweet..

thnx for the pm...

thanks dear 4 comment
ur welcome
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks dear 4 such a lovely comment
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 8

he hastely moved toward parking without saw here n there n strucked to neha...she loosed her balance n about to fall on ground when he immediately curled his hand around her waist n hold her tightly...by the fear of fall she quickly closed her eyes...her one hand curled around his neck n from one hand she grasped his collar very tightly becoz of fear...veer staring at her closed eyes which looked beautifull at that moment...he slowly pulled her towards him n gazed her...her pink lips n rosy cheeks made him mad n forced him to saw her...after few seconds neha feel something strange n opened her eye n saw him...for few seconds both of them staring at each other...he came more closer but a string of her hairs disturbed him to saw her...he lifted his hand n placed her hairs behind the ear...she feel the warmth of his finger n he came more closer...but suddenly horn of car broke their dreamland n they came to their senses
by lookinp at each so closed they quicky moved backward n feel embrassing...she lowered her eyes to saw her veer felt guilty n to change her mood he said-" tum dekh ke nhi chal sakti kya?''

she surprised to heared this as she didn't expected such type of answer from him at that moment,she said arrogantly-''mein dekh ke nhi chalti ya tum,mein to side me hi khadi tum jaldi jaldi aa rhe the or mujhse takra gye to galti kiski hui han...bolo chup kyun ho bolo''

now veer feel happy to saw her n said-''tum kitna bolti ho,kisiko bolne ka mauka hi nhi deti ho jab tum chup hogi tabhi to mein kuch bolunga na''

neha-''accha jab kuch bolne ko bacha hi nhi h tum kya bologe or mujhse keh rhe ho ki mein jyada bolti hun''

veer-''han tum bhot bolti ho or waise bhi meri koi galti nhi thi tum hi raste mein khambe ki tarah khadi thi yeh koi khade hone ki jagah h''

neha frowned at him n said-''mein kahin bhi khadi rhun tumhe isse kya tumhe to dekh kar chalna chahiye tha na''

veer-''nhi mujhe dekhai nhi deta mera bhot mann kar rha tha tumse takrane ka isliye me takra gya bas khush''

neha with anger-"han han mujhe to pta hi tha tum jaise ladko ko mein acche se janti hun tumhe to bas mauka chahiye hota h kisi ladki se takrane ka''

veer raised his eyesbrows n came more closer to her n said slowly-''aur kya kya janti ho tum mere jaise ladko ke baare me?''n started to moved towards her

she scared n moved backward n said-''yeh kya kar rhe ho tum...tum aage ko kyun aa rhe ho''

veer still followed her backward steps n moved towards her n
said-"kyunki tum picche jaa rhi ho,bolo na or kya kya jaanti ho tum mere jaise ladko ke baare mein''

neha-"mujhe jaana h mere raaste se hato''n she feel awkward.

Veer came more closer n said-''tum gusse me bhot khubsoorat lagti ho''

to hear this she blushed n sticked to the pillar becoz there was not other way to moved...veer gazed at her n put his one hand on pillar n blocked her way to moved n whispered-''waise pink colour mujhe accha nhi lagta par tumpar bhot accha lagega'' n step backward still staring at her n about to leave when he turned back n saw her with a cute smile n soon leave that place

neha still surprised, smiled n put both the hands on her face shyly n remembered him,when he came closer to her,when he placed her hairs,she continously smiled n suddenly someone shooked her...she came to her senses n turned to saw her sister..

Pooja-''neha kya hua kahan khoyi ho ghar nhi jana chalo jaldi bhot der ho gayi h''while hold her hand n moved

neha while moving turned to saw him but he was not there he already leaved...soon both of them also leave

...
Veer lying on bed n dhruv was busy in some work...veer came n sat next to him.to saw veer dhruv surprised n said-"veer kya hua tum aaj aise chup chaap kyun baithe ho baat kya h?sab thik h na?''

veer looked at him-''hmm... Sab thik h''

dhruv-''aisa to ho hi nhi saakta koi to baat h''

veer-''nhi koi baat nhi h bs thoda bore ho rha hun ''

dhruv smiled at him n said-''thik h ek kaam karte h aaj raat ko hum teeno late night party karte h disc mein thik h.''

veer-"party or wo bhi raat ko..agar badi maa ya kisi or pta chal gya to bhot daant padegi''

dhruv-''daant to jab padegi jab maa ko pta chalega'' n both of them smiled at each other
then nivi n rudra entered in the room

nivi to dhruv-"yeh lo chai "

dhruv-''choti maa aaj mere ek dost ka birthday h usne hum teeno ko aaj raat ki party me bulaya h to kya hum ja sakte h?''veer n rudra looked at him shockly

nivi smiled n said-''bilkul jaa sakte ho''

dhruv-"par maa'' nivi interupted n said-''unki chinta tum mat karo hum h na''all of them are happy now
veer said to rudra-''agar tum chaho to sapna bhabhi ko bhi bula sakte ho''

but he interupted by dhruv n said-''uski chinta mat karo veer tanya or sapna ko hum phone karke bula lenge''n both of them gigled to saw his face
...
Neha-''di pls mujhe nhi jaana''n sat on the bed

pooja-"neha pls" n sat nxt to her
Edited by tejjo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautiful update..!!
thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thnx for the pm dear!!!😊
Edited by prahelika - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update dear😊...
aww neha falling and veer catching and me swooning😍
but phir se ye dono shuru ho gaye😆...i love their nok jhok...and i loved the way veer gets naughty😆
neha blushing and veer loving the pink colour on her cheek☺️
and now veer,dhuv and rudra planning to go to disq
i think pooja is insisting neha for disq😳...now we'll see three couples rudra-sapna😳,
dhuv-puja😍and at last but not the least veer neha☺️ with the kabab mein haddi tanya🤢
plz let neha be a little jealous of tanya😳...coz veer has fallen for neha we can see that😳...
now it's neha's turn...
i m waiting for the rocking v day update😃

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