HUMTUM (RTMC FF) - Page 6

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Originally posted by: SonaliDhone

very nice Part , yr

phirse mulakat

hmm mulakat pe mulakat n then pyar

you r awesome yar ,

n I really loved ur story

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Originally posted by: sweetshera

Awesome ff

sry for catching up la8

luv Veer n Neha

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Originally posted by: sanyogitaprc

nice parts dear😊...

first meeting of neha & veer was superb😉...their cute fights r always enjoyable😆...also looking forward to see the story of dhruv & pooja😍...

plz plz update soon...

will update soon dear😊

part 6

neha move towards the car n sit next to him n close the door...veer start the car...car runs to its average speed...there was silence between the 2... neha turn to see him n said-''thank u''

veer-''its ok''

again there is silent between them...neha turn her face n see him n said under her breath-''waise itna bura bhi nhi h yeh''n smile...as veer turns his face to see her..she quickly turns her face towards the window...veer remove his glance n said-''apni seat belt bandho''

she tried hard to tied seat belt but it is too tight...she's unable to stretch the belt n said-''bhot tight h mujhse nhi ho raha''

veer stops the car n turn towards her...as he turn she's scared n stick to the seat...veer come more closer...she got nervous n said-''yeh kya kar rhe ho''...veer stretchout the belt n tied around her n said-''seat belt bandh raha hun or kya kar raha hun''n back to his seat

now she feel relax n veer starts the car again...after few seconds veer asked her-''kahan jaana h''

neha-''city hospital''

veer shockingly staring her n said-''mein to mazak kar raha tha tum sach mein hospital ja rhi ho waise sahi bhi h tumhe doctor ki sakht jarurat h''

neha angrily said-''mujhe doctor ki jarurat h kyun kya hua h mujhe?''

veer-''tumhe ladne ki bimaari h...koi tumhaari help kare to bhi tumhe problem hoti h or help na karo to bhi''n busy in driving

neha-''tum apne aap ko samjhte kya ho...mene kaha tha tumhe ki aao or meri help karo'' n fuming with anger again.

veer-''arey wah! bhalai ka to zamana hi nhi h ek to meine tumhaari help ki upar se tum mujhse se hi lad rhi ho''

neha -''meine kaha tha ki meri help karo''

veer-''tumse to baat karna hi bekaar h ''

neha-''han to kyun kar rhe ho mat karo ...mujhe bhi tumse baat nhi karni''

both turn their faces in opposite direction...suddenly veer's phone ring...this is dhruv-''veer kahan ho tum?tumhe pta h dad kitna naraz ho rhe h tumhe 8:30 office aane ko bola tha ab 9 baj gaye h or tumhara abhi tak koi pta nhi h''

veer-''dhruv mein bas 5 min mein aata hun tab tak tum sambhal lena plsss

dhruv-''thik h jaldi aao''

now veer run his car fastly...neha scared n said-''dheere nhi chala sakte mujhe darr lag rha h''

veer still driving fast n said-''tumhare darr ki wajah se mujhe der ho jayegi chup chaap baithi raho samjhi tum''
due to fear she close her eyes n stick to the seat ,...veer see her scary face n reduce the speed...neha open her eyes n see that car run slowly as she wants...veer busy in driving n she continously looking at him as he looking smart in his blue shirt but their is something missing...what is that ...yeah that is tie which is not there...she's enquired about that when she found that there is something in his pocket...that is tie...she smiled n said-''log aksar tie ko gale me bandhte h''

to hear this veer quickly check his pocket n see tie hanging from his pocket he quickly fold the tie n again put in his pocket n said-''accha mujhe to laga tha ki ise kamar me bandhte h''

neha-''arey tumne use pocket mein phir se rakh liya wo bandh ke liye h bandho''

veer don't want to listen her n said ''han...han bandh loonga jaldi jaldi me pocket mein rakh liya tha office jaakar bandh loonga''

neha -''abhi kyun nhi bandh sakte ?''

now veer irritated with her n said-''tumhaari problem kya h jab mujhe bandhni hogi bandh loonga''

neha-''han to thik h na bandh lena gussa kyun ho rhe ho''

veer staring ta her n said-''sorry...wo kya h na mujhe tie bandhni nhi aati''

to hear this neha burst into laughter...she's try to control her laughter but again she laughing loudly...veer continously looking at her as she look beautiful while laughing...soon he come to his senses n said-''to kya hua tum has kyun rhi ho''

now neha stops her laugh n said -''itne bade ho gaye ho or abhi tak tie bandhna nhi aata...laao mujhe do mein bandh deti hun

veer give his tie to her..she quickly winded the tie n give back to him...veer wear his tie but his collar is not folded...she said-''tumhara collar''

veer try to fold but is not completely folded...to see this that due to busy in driving he's unable to fold it...she moves her right hand and fold his collar...for few seconds both of them lost in each others eyes...soon neha come to her senses n see outside the window n said-''bas yahin rok do''

veer stops the car...neha come out from the car...veer don't want to let her go...neha moves n want to see back...but she refuses,veer also waiting 4 her 1 glance...as she moves 1 more step she realised that he's gone from there so she quickly turn to see him...n see he's still there,,,she feels embarassing ...but veer smiling to see her n then leave from there with a cute smile...she's confused to see his smile...but soon she's also smile n continously looking at the road as he n his car invisible soon...

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veer quickly entered in he office..every one happy in the office to see him after very long period...shubh waiting for veer but he's late on the very first day of office...every1 welcomed him in the office...
dhruv-''veer kahan the tuma/''

veer-''sorry thodi si der ho gayi''

rudra-''koi baat nhi chalo dad tumhara intezaar kar rhe h'

all of 3 entered in the cabin n veer said-''im sorry bade papa thodi der ho gyi''

shubh-''thodi der ho gayi ?tum poora 1 ghant late ho or ye sab hame pasand nhi h aage se ye sab nhi hona chahiye''

veer-''ji dad nhi hoga''

shubh-''dhruv tum or rudra jaakar veer ko poora office dikhao or kaam bhi samjhao''
rudra n dhruv noded n leave with veer

siddarth feeling happy today becoz his son come office first time n he's also very happy...

dhruv tntroduced veer to all the workers n members of the office n went to agni's room whose busy in checking files...to see veer he quickly stand up from the chair n smile actually putting fake smile becoz he n his father don't like malhotras...n veer also don't like both of them but due to his family he behave normal in front of them

agni with fake smile-''arey veer tum london se kab aa gaye'' n moves the hand to shake

veer with raised eyebrows-''2 din pehle-''he refuses his hands to shake n sit on the agni's chair n said-''hmm... to yeh tumhara cabin h accha h

agni's father just entered in the cabin n shocked to see veer whose sit on his son chair...he manage himself as he's eyes filled with anger n said-''veer bete tum kab aaye hme to kisine btaya hi nhi nhi to hum tumse milne ghar aa jate'

veer standup from the chair n said-''uski jarurat nhi h mein khud hi aapse milne aa gaya mama ji'' or ab se mein roj yahin rahunga jitni marzi ho aap mujhe dekh saktr h thik h na n all of 3 leave

agni-''papa mujhe iske irradethik nhi lag rhe h agar usse hmaare baare me sab pta chal gya to kya hoga???''

jai(agni's father)-''kuch nhi hoga tum chinta mat karo itne saalo me ye sab milkar kucch nhi kar paaye to ye akela kya kar lega''curled his lips into smile

now veer entered in his cabin which is very beautifully decorated..he's very happy to see that...dhruv n rudra leave...veer enquired everything n check all the account files...then suddenly someone knocked the door..he stand up n said while holding a file-''come in''

this is none other than his childhood friend tanya..he's happy to see her..she run towards him n hugged him tightly...she waiting for him since 6 years...she'still hugged him while veer is feeling little uncomfortable as he put 1 hand on her shoulder n slightly step backward...(actually he feel uncomfortable becoz he did't hugged any of the girl like that)n said-''kaise ho tanya''

she's smiling n said-''acchi hun par tumhe bhot miss kiya meine''

veer-''accha to mujhse milne ghar kyun nhi aayi?''

tanya-''office me kaam hi itna tha ki tumse milne ka time hi nhi mila but ab roz hum milenge agle project par mein or tum saath me kaam karne waale h''

veer-''ok i hv to go mujhe ek jaruri kaam h baad me milte h''
she nodded n veer leave...she's happy to see veer n said-''mujhe pta h veer ki tum bhi mujhse pyaar karte ho isliye tumne mujhe itna miss kiya par koi baat nhi mein tumse kahlewake hi rahungi ki tum mujhse pyaar karte ho

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in the evening

veer comeback to his house n went to change...as he move he saw himself in the mirror...looking at his tie n collar n touch the collar...soon a cute smile come to his face n he closed his eye n remembered everything happened today...again a beautifull face come in front of him...he quickly open his eyes n said to himself-''ye kya ho gya h mujhe kyun uska chehra barbar mere saamne aata h...kyun?''he remove the tie without opening the knot n continously looking at tie n put in the cupboard aftersomtime.

now lying on the bed he thought something n smile...

awesome update...👏

Originally posted by: ridzzi

awesome update...👏

their car convo...amazing...

''...veer stops the car n turn towards her...as he turn she's scared n stick to the seat...veer come more closer...she got nervous n said-''yeh kya kar rhe ho''...veer stretchout the belt n tied around her n said-''seat belt bandh raha hun or kya kar raha hun''n back to his seat...''

neha tumhe kya laga...??????????...😉😆

''...veer asked her-''kahan jaana h''

neha-''city hospital''

veer shockingly staring her n said-''mein to mazak kar raha tha tum sach mein hospital ja rhi ho waise sahi bhi h tumhe doctor ki sakht jarurat h''...😆

well that was amazing...🤣

veer staring ta her n said-''sorry...wo kya h na mujhe tie bandhni nhi aati''

eha stops her laugh n said -''itne bade ho gaye ho or abhi tak tie bandhna nhi aata...laao mujhe do mein bandh deti hun...😆

o veer itne bade ho gae ho...aur tie bandhani nahi aati...😆

n veer is waiting to see her...n she is desperate too...o hooo...😳

hmmm...this tanya seems to be a trouble for our veer n neha...😡

n agani n jai mamu...don't say like this...couz veer is not that much innocent...he is type of tedhi kheer...he will bring tough time for u evils...😈

n our veer is remembering neha...ooo...😳

MITWA MUJHE KYA HO GAYA HAI...

MITWA MUJHE KYA HO GAYA HAI...

MAIN CHAHOON KUCH AUR BOLO KUCH AUR...

MAIN DEKHU KUCH AUR SOCHO KUCH AUR...

MERA MANN KIU RUKTA NAHI...-2

LE JAYE MUJHE KIS ORE...-2...😍

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