MG ff.This life is yours Pt 29.Pg136.aug 7 - Page 6

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wow.amazing update.
love it
sorry my like button is not working..
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#52
ossum part dear
waiitng for the next part dear
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#53
nice part..
but jaanvi s spoilinga bhi...
i think maan vl loose the deal,rt?
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#54
Amazing ...lovely update.
Loving the family bonding..they all are so sweet. 😃
Continue soon di..waiting for the next part !

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awesome update didi...
what a lovely family...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
part 2
nice part...
who is this Arjun?
Abhi is so spoilt...
cont soon...
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THIS LIFE IS YOURS
PART 3
Hai friends.
thanks fot ur cmnts n likes .
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wait for few updates u will get ur maneet as youngsters..

The next morning started as usual,till the phone came.geet took the phone.

Hello bitiya..came an old maans tone cracky..

Haan ramsingh kaka..mein geet bolrahahoon..

Bitiya..he stopped..ur mother passed away.

Geet stood there numb..tears started to flow from her eyes.the phone slipped from her hand.

Seeing her position.maan took the phone.

Hello.. maan speaking..

Beta..bitiya ki mother passed away.

There was a silence between both.

Do her father wants us to join in her mothers anthim yatra..

The old man doesn't say anything.

It means u r giving us the information.

Yes beta..her father has not still forgiven her.i thought,she must know about her mothers death.the decision depends on u both.

Ramsingh kaka kept the phone.maan hugged geet.

Geet,u know.every people has to leave this place n go to god...n ur mother has joined there.samhaal apne aapko…geet,we will go there..

Geet looked at maan with teary eyes.

No maan.i have never given her peace.atleast let me give her last peace.if we go there,my father will not like it.n I don't want anything to happen ,that will spoil my mothers last yathra.

Geetu,don't u want to see ur mothers face last time.

I want to.but I cant go there straightly.

She switched on the tv she changed the channels n stopped in a channel.it was a direct telecast of a certain state,which was showing her mother n the last preparations.her eyes was fixed only on the tv with tears.

Maan went on consoling her.she never talked later.they heared the knock on the door.

Maa..papa..

Maan..

Yes geetu..

I don't want our childrens to know about it.

he know the reason why she is saying like that.she don't want her childrens to know about their past.

Ok..i'll not tell them.but what will u say them…see urself..ur teary puffy eyes n ur face will make them ask questions.

Tell them not to disturb me today nor try to speak to me..when I get control of myself,I'll be out of this room.

Hmm..ok..

Maan opened the door n went out .he blocked the way of jaanvi,so that she did not enter the room.

Gud morning papa..u looked worried..what happened..where is maa..today I'm earlier than mama..i want to talk to u both..

Ok.jaan we will go to ur room n talk..he took her to her room..

Jaanvi looked maan puzzled..

Ok.jaan what u want to talk..

Wo..papa..i want u n mama to meet arjun..when shall I bring him here..he is also eager to meet u .do u n mama have time today.

She said shyly..her cheeks were red.

Jaanu..not today..i'm busy..n ur mama..

He stopped.

Jaan..if I ask u anything u will do na..

Yes papa..dont try to disturb ur mama today.she will be in her room.wait till she comes out.

What happened papa..

Someone close to her passed away.she is missing them.dont disturb till she comes out.n ask others also to stay away from her today.give her sometime .she needs to be alone.

Ok..papa..i'll say ..

The morning was usual for all.when the kids were not there maan said about geets mother to dadi,Vicky n vishali...noone disturbed geet.

As usual all went to their work.dadi came to maneets room.geet hugged dadi n cried .dadi made her lay on her lap n consoled her.

Geet.noone can stop or change the fate,whats written. this is reality.u know it n u have experiences in it..i don't want to say u.i always say u n maan.see the future .if u cry like this u will fell ill.u have to be strong for ur children.what will u say to them why are u crying.ur mother will never be back.but, she will be looking at u.

I cant even see my mother for the last time..

Ur mothers soul will also be expecting u .but,what can u do.its all fate.U r seeing in tv..feel lucky for it.just pray for ur mother in ur heart.let her soul rest in peace. whip ur tears. be strong at least for ur children n maan.

She left her room,leaving geet alone. after several hours of crying,she felt better. she took a bath n came down.all were present there except abhi.geet was coming down the stairs.she felt dizzy.she fell down from the stairs.

All ran to her.

Maaa.Geeet.

Bhabhiii diii.. badimaaa..

they immediately called the dr.dr.came there n checked her.

Jaanvi n Maan was sitting next to geet .he hold her hands in his.he was unable to see geet like that.his vision was blurring. tears were whelled up.

Dr. how is geet ..

Nothing to worry MR.Khurana.she is alright.she has not taken her food.n her bp has shooted..i wonder.she was fit in last master checkup.what happened suddenly.her bp raised high..

Mama s close one passed..so,she was worried …jaanvi said inbetween her sobs.

Mr.khurana..give this medicines. This will control her bp. she needs full rest specially no office..keep tensions away from her. do things whatever that make her happy.if she gets tension again n her bp shoots,I cant say what can happen to her..make sure she has something to eat.

We will take care of her dr…

Dr.went away…vishali went n made some liquid food for geet n came to maneets room.

Geet gained her conscious. she saw the whole family looking at her with worried face.

How r u beta..

Fine dadi..she tried to get out of bed.

No geetu..maan stopped her.

Haan maaa…you will not get out of bed atleast for 10 days..

Haan bhabhi..u take rest completely..

Badi maa..we also will not fight..we wont trouble u..

Didi..have this…vishali started to feed her.

Geet opened her mouth n had it..

she looked at her family..

How much they care for me..

How much they love me..

Dadi was right..i made myself sick n made all of them worried thinking about myself..

Dadi:Ok now all of them leave geet..let her take rest…

She looked around for abhi,…

Maa..wo..abhi has went out with his friends..I'll inform him now.

All left their room n jaanvi went to her room to take her cell.

Maan was waiting for that moment .When all of them left,he hugged geet tight..

Don't do this again geetu..u don't know what I went through..

Sry maan..i'll not repeat it…

I was scared..

Maan singh khurana is scared..

Yes..his family is his weakness.dont u know..n u r my life…my wife..

I know …

I love u geet..i need u n this family too needs u..

I love u too maan..i know how much this family loves me..i said sryna..i'll take care of myself n wont repeat this...

I'll take care of u.. …he tighten his hug.

Maan u r crushing me..

Let it be.u deserve it..i want to feel u..i want to hold u like this..i want my heart to know u r safe with me..

Maaan…I'm fine..she encircled her hands around him making him feel her..

Jaanvi who was standing at the entrance of their room walked away silently seeing her parents love towards each other.jaanvi always says maneet is made for each other.They were her roll model..if its studies,sports,business or love..in every aspects maneet are the best..

She too wants arjun n herself to be like them..she went n joined her family after informing to abhi..

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31.1.2012...1.40pm..

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awsem jahnvi saw maneet romance



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Lively
hope abhi wont be in any danger
dear
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THIS LIFE IS YOURS

PART 4
Hai friends.
thanks for the friends who gave cmnts n likes.
.i know u r not loving maneet in middle aged..
i can get it from the low likes n cmnts i get as response..
wait for few updates u will get ur maneet as youngsters
i'm waiting for ur cmnts n do hit like buttons if u like it...😊

Maan gave geet her night dinner n her medicines.when she slept he came down to join his family for dinner..all were there except jaanvi n abhi..

Maan:where is jaanvi .n abhi...

All said they don't know. Nakul said,he saw jaanvi going out few minutes before .she looked tensed..

Maan:why didn't u inform us.

Nakul:I thought she would have said u..she never goes out without informing anyone.

Maan took out his phone.he was about to call,when his phone buzzed.

Maan:jaan..where are you..is this the time to go out..u must have informed us..

Jaanvi:pls papa..dont ask any questions..just come to xyz police station..i'll be waiting for u..pls don't inform maa..

She kept the phone without even giving maan time to speak..

Maan was in shock.

Vicky:bro,where is jaanvi..

Maan:she called me to pick her..i'll be back n say the details later.

He rushed to the police station.jaanvi was pacing out there.seeing maan she ran to him.

Maan:why u called me here..jaan'u must not come to police station..whatever it may be..

He said in an angry tone..

Jaanvi:pls listen to me papa..if its not abhi,I would have never come here..abhi had some fight with his friends in hotel..the manager called the police n abhi n his friends were arrested.he called me.already all were worried about mama..so I came here without informing u all.i tried to sort the problem without informing you.but,the police are not believing me..even after I said we are khuranas..

Maan went into the police station.the police went shocked to see him..

Mr.khurana..aap..if you have called me,I would have come to meet u..

He said shivering.

Maan saw abhi n his gang inside lock up.they had some bruises.abhi s head hung down seeing maan there.maan came straight to the point.

Maan:abhidhya is my son.

Abhis friends looked at him in surprise n shock.they didn't trust when jaanvi said they are khuranas.they looked at him in respect.they took steps back from him.

Ur sister was telling the truth..

Yes..

You are multi millioner ,business tycoon,maan singh khuranas son..n jaanvi di is his daughter.

Yes..abhi accepted silently.

Why didn't u say this to us before.

Its papas decision..we will not be in limelights.otherwise we will be treated specially.see u all now.u stepped backmaking distance.

The gang which they all fought with was looking at maan n abhi.

Maan:I want my son out now.

Police:sir,knowing they are all college students,I have not filed fir.if I did so,their future will be affected.i want to see their parents n warn them to take care of their childrens.so that,they may not make nuisance in public places.u can take him home.he is not at fault.its the other gang who fought with him n his friends.

Maan:what about his friends.

Police:if u want u can take them also with u'but..sir..what should I do with the students who fought with him..

Maan:u only said..the students future will affect'so,leave them also,when there parents came...(Maan did a big mistake by leaving them free..) i'll take abhis friends with me.

The other police has already opened the lockup,when maan said abhi is his son.abhi n his friends came out.

Police:mr.abhi..dont let ur family pride down.bcoz of u ..ur father n ur sister is standing here..i'm sry miss jaanvi..i didn't trust u..

Its ok sir.

Abhis friends looked maan thankfully.abhi was not able to face maan.jaanvi hugged abhi..

Abhi:di,how is mom?i want to see her..

Jaanvi:she is fine now..she was expecting you.now she has slept..lets go home.

Frnds..wo..sir..thank u so much..

Maan knotted his bros..angrily..jaanvi noticed it..

Jaanvi:u idiots .u all are fools..whom u r thanking.,abhis father..ur friends father..u must call him uncle not sir.see my papa got angry with u..

Frnds..sry di..mam..

Jaanvi:u r treating me also like someother..call me as usual..i'm same for u all like before.

Frnds:..sry di..sry uncle..pls forgive us..we will never behave like this again.

Maan can see the difference in their behavior.they are not with abhi.abhi looked at them worriedly.

Maan:its ok..i forgive u this time.but,I want one assurity from u guys.

Frnds:yes uncle.

Maan:u will be friends with abhi as u all used to be.no differenciation in ur behavior,after knowing he is my son. u all will keep this away from ur other colleagues too.

They were happy with maan.,the way he treated them.

Abhi came n hugged maan..

Abhi:I'm sry papa..i'm really sry for making u come here.i ..i..he mumbled.

Maan:ok.have a chit chat with ur friends.say gud night to them.i'll be waiting for u in car outside.

Abhis friends made a group hug with abhi n jaanvi.

Frnds:we don't believe it yaar..we are friend of msk's son.

They said in pride.

Frnds.:u r so lucky abhi..u have a wonderful father n sister.

Jaanvi:what will u all say if u all see our mother.you will love her more.

Abhi:di..lets go home..i want to see her..she will be missing us.she needs us now.

Abhi said while thinking about geet.

Abhi:bye guys..we will see later.gud night.

Frnds..:ok yaar.gud night.gud night di..n thanks for everything.

Jaanvi n maan were walking towards the car.they saw flashes over them.before they knew whats happening,they saw maan pulling the camera from the media person n removed the negative from it.

Reporter:U r messing up with press mr.khurana.

Maan:N u dare to mess up with maan singh khurana.

Rep:I took only urs n ur childrens photos..

Maan:N I don't want it to be published.

Rep:y.sir...the people will be interested to see ur family photo ...it will be a hot news in our tomorrows edition to see u n ur kids in police station.bade gharki bigde hui bache.

Dare u.. they are noy spoilt children ..just stay away from my kids...or I'll make ur life hell

Lets see mr.khurana.

If the police did not interfere them.maan would have ended punching him..

Maan took out his frustruation on him.he was angry for leaving geet n here for the press questioning about his children.

Jaanvi n abhi took maan home.abhi was continuosly saying sorry to maan through out the ride back to KM.maan asked him to stop apologizing as he knows his kids will never be wrong.

They reached km.abhi entered km with his head down.what will he say his family.bcoz of him khuranas name was spoiled at police station.

Dadi and all looked at maan for answers.

Maan said what happened.they all looked at abhi.

Abhi:I'm sorry'mei jaan booch kar nehi kiya..wo..i got angry ..n I punched him..

Dadi:we know it abhi'but,u have to control ur anger.a mans first enemy is anger.anger can make do things that a man doesn't want to do..next time remember it.

abhi:yes dadi..i'll try

maan:dadi.he is saying he will try..he himself is not sure if he can control himself.

Dadi:atleast he said he will tryna..abhi,wash ur hands n come.lets have dinner.

Abhu:I'lll go n see mama..

Dadi:she is sleeping.u have ur dinner n then go n see ur mama.

Abhi:ok dadi.

All had their dinner quietly.

Then abhi n jaanvi with maan went to maneets room.

Abhi took his mothers hnd in his..

I'm sorry maa for not being with you.he kissed her.maan took out the first aid kit n applied medicine on abhis bruises.

Abhi..

Ji papa..

She missed u..dr.s had said her to keep away from tensions.so,u will not say anything to ur mother.and before coming to ur mother hide these marks on ur body..

Sure papa..

Jaanvi..

Yes papa.

Call arjun tomorrow'let arjun join us in tea time..ur mother will be happy to see him..

Jaanvi was so happy..

Yes papa..

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31.1.2012...8.40pm..

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Edited by valli22 - 13 years ago

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