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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#621

Very awesome update...but short one...I liked it very much...your twist is like new start for both of them...he is trying to change and wanted her to be with him...very nicely he asked her to be friend with him so that he could start from first...nice twist...update soon...waiting for geet's answer... Like button is not working form last 4/5 days...😡

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Tamanna_TJ

@Tamanna_TJ

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#622

the letter was really very sweet...
loved that Maan is trying to change...
But i even dont hope to give in so easily...
coz her pain is too much...
but 1 chance is always granted by everyone...
so waiting to know, wht Geet does...
continue soon...
wud be waiting...

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Atiffa

@Atiffa

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#623

awesome

i just love it

right questions ask by Geet

Maan is understanding and nice when they start their relationship with friendship

Cont soon

Luv

Atiffa

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maaneet5

@maaneet5

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#624

nice update i can understand geet pain how she felt then the punch dilogs from geet to maan really hardful
She stands near him and holds his collar...

"how could you let another man touch me?" These bites, marks will remain on my body and soul forever..why? Because you were being selfish!

when she ask him all these i really touched by my heart how could let another man touch me

perfect answer gave by geet to maan

"Do you have answers to these questions? No you don't!" She holds his collar.."Why not! You want me to talk to you? I will once I have my answers..."

simi the all pain geet has within her heart was really heart broken

Geet laid on the bed crying...it pained her to see him in pain but she wanted to know...she needed the answers to her questions...she felt disgusted at herself...she couldn't look in the mirror without thinking about Dev...she couldn't look at the wounds that he inflicted on her...his hands that touched her body on the areas that was only reserved for Maan...

highlight pf the part

she was more mad at herself then at Maan for letting Dev touch her..

maan ka letter was osum good thing is he realised

best thing he wanted to rewind the clock

remembering whne he saw her first

these line r touched my heart

finally maan open up with his feelings

I wish I could change the time, rewind the clock to when I first saw you practicing your dance in the gym, I wish I could and make you mine all over again in a different way. I have been myself for so long, I was so used to get what I want, being a shetan in front of the world made me loose all senses of ability to think. I can't even say sorry to you anymore after what I did..but believe me Geet, I never loved anyone as much in my life before.

so maan want to be geet frnd 1st nice move

and nice care of wifey pilss and juice

and breakfast ke saath maan bi hi bahar

bookshelf for pregnacy period books wow maan bahut change aagaya

nice update simi u take right decision to ive chance to both to know about each other

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mrs.msk

@mrs.msk

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#625

Originally posted by: maaneet5
nice update i can understand geet pain how she felt then the punch dilogs from geet to maan really hardful
She stands near him and holds his collar...

"how could you let another man touch me?" These bites, marks will remain on my body and soul forever..why? Because you were being selfish!

when she ask him all these i really touched by my heart how could let another man touch me

perfect answer gave by geet to maan

"Do you have answers to these questions? No you don't!" She holds his collar.."Why not! You want me to talk to you? I will once I have my answers..."

simi the all pain geet has within her heart was really heart broken

Geet laid on the bed crying...it pained her to see him in pain but she wanted to know...she needed the answers to her questions...she felt disgusted at herself...she couldn't look in the mirror without thinking about Dev...she couldn't look at the wounds that he inflicted on her...his hands that touched her body on the areas that was only reserved for Maan...

highlight pf the part

she was more mad at herself then at Maan for letting Dev touch her..

maan ka letter was osum good thing is he realised

best thing he wanted to rewind the clock

remembering whne he saw her first

these line r touched my heart

finally maan open up with his feelings

I wish I could change the time, rewind the clock to when I first saw you practicing your dance in the gym, I wish I could and make you mine all over again in a different way. I have been myself for so long, I was so used to get what I want, being a shetan in front of the world made me loose all senses of ability to think. I can't even say sorry to you anymore after what I did..but believe me Geet, I never loved anyone as much in my life before.

so maan want to be geet frnd 1st nice move

and nice care of wifey pilss and juice

and breakfast ke saath maan bi hi bahar

bookshelf for pregnacy period books wow maan bahut change aagaya

nice update simi u take right decision to ive chance to both to know about each other