OS: Winner take all (3), pg 19

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mandira1

@mandira1

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Loveddd this update with both of them getting jealous😊

Please PM me the next update

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@lexaxel

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#82

Loved it Vidhya!!!!

Waiting for the 3rd update eagerly😛.

p.s: why do I get this feeling of deja vu...like as if I wrote the same thing in ur 1st update🤪.

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arshia

@ashvez

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#83

Vidhya...that was Khaboom!!

Felt like tearing ' that' girl...when he did a lip lock with her.I cldn't take that.Khushi must have really felt devastated.

Serves him right...NK just swooned her...and Mr ASR, cldn't take that eh?

This was totally intense ...battle..u have shown a True ASR , going to just any lengths to get a win ...though he wants to benefit Khushi...but by tearing her heart brutally.

Vidhya..Superb! As I was progressing through ...my heartbeat was increasing...I really felt sorry for Khushi.wanted to give her a hug.he knows to stab n twist the knife...Oh My!

Amazing work...Vidhya ..wanna hug u for this.

Ash.

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farheen75

@farheen75

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#84

its the best strategy for arnav to win ...loved it...thanks for the pm

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soni_md

@soni_md

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

*bursts out laughing*I love both of them... him for his move ... her for hers ... tit for tat, as it should be ... any less, and she couldn't handle him ...

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lara3110

@lara3110

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

What an awesome OS. So exciting. Enjoyed it thoroughly including the mustache and the kiss.

Waiting eagerly for the 2nd instalment.

Please PM me.

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nyxx

@nyxx

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#87

These two are going to be the end of me one dayy!

but revenge is always sweet and these two know it better than the rest. Wonderful OS, and in fact, i liked this one better than the other one just a tiny bit only because I could feel Arnavs and Khushis motif, the agony, the anger at seeing the other with someone elsee and the realization towards the end. Wonderfully written and I cant wait for the 3rd one :D