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Posted: 12 years ago
original posted by
sweetsampa39

Very cute and lovely,ruthna-manana update.

Loved it.

maaniqra
awesome partget well soon

thanksss
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Posted: 12 years ago
original posted by
kareena32
very nice part
get well soon


fariya20
love this cant wait for update sorry for late yaar i am bizzy beee now a days


its ok @fariya dear...
thanks both of you
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Posted: 12 years ago
original posted by
sundasnaz

awesome updates

bhanu_rekhag
awesome part .

dolly10
Nice update

Ash1991
amazing update...


thanksss
Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
original posted by
sukklover


...😛
4 PMing me ...😃
ur all updates r dear...😳
ur update .....
really ...😃
u really done dear..👏👏..
dear...4 ur hard work...👍🏼
lots of 4 u dear...
lov,❤️
Tama

NOTE: SORRY FOR THIS TOO SHORT COMMENT AS MY NET IS IT"S CRTICAL CONDITIONAM..don't know when it'll be fixed & also MY EXAM..

NOTE: SOMEONE ASKED ME WHOM FAN I AM...THAT ANS IS ONLY SUMIT KUMKUM & HUSSAIN JUHI..NONE OTHER ANY OF RESENT ON TV..




i loved ur comments and piccc

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Posted: 12 years ago

MG FF- Kaisa ye pyaar hai Part 57 (b)


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Part 57 (b)

Maan: geet khi nhi hai...kha gyi...
.
.
He noticed terrace door open...
Maan: is waqt terrace ke door kyun open hai...
.
.
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Maan: geet
.
Maan: geet
He turns and takes step to go, but his eyes catch someone stand other side...he go this side...

Maan: geet
Tum yha andhere mein kyun khadi ho
Niche chalo...


Geet:
He hugged her from back & placed his chin on her shoulder.
Maan: geet
Dekho jaan yha bhut thand hai...hum niche jake baat krte hai
He turned her by shoulder... and shocked...
Maan: geet why are you crying?
Geet:
Maan: geet tum kuch khti kyun nhi
Tum mujhe btayongi nhi...to mujhe kaise pta chalenga...tumhe kaunsi baat pareshan kr rhi hai


He cupped her face.
Maan: kuch to bolo geet
Geet: maan mein thik hu
Bs wo ase hi aansu aagye...
She looks down .. not face his questioning eyes.
Maan: misthi ...tum jhoot kh rhi ho
Geet: nhi maan
Maan: to fir mujhse nazre kyun chura rhi ho
She looks into his eyes'
Geet: asa kuch nhi hai
Maan: acha thik hai
Pr niche to chalo
Geet: nhi
Maan: geet tum bimar ho jayongi jaan
Geet: maan aap mere sath chaliye''..
Maan: geet
Tum bacho ki trh zidd kyun krti ho
Geet : Mr. maan singh khurana "I am not kid"
Maan: oh really
Pr tumhari harkate to bilkul kid jaisi hai
Geet: Maann
Maan: ok jaan, ab tum bolo mein pakka dhyan se sunuga
Geet: hmm
********************

Maan: geet mujhe kuch dikhayi nhi de rha hai
Open this blindfold.
Geet :maan bs 5 minute
Maan: geet tum krkyarhi ho''..
Pichle 15 minute se tum bs yhi kh rhi ho bs 5 minute
Geet: sb aapki galati hai''..ydi aap time pe aate to mujhe ye saari mhnat dobara nhi krni padti
Maan: geet maine tumse is baat ke liye kitni baar sorry khdiya
Fir bhi tum
Geet: chup bilkul chup
Bilkul patience nhi hai aap me

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Maan: yha to kuch bhi dikhayi nhi de rha
Ye geet bhi naa ajkal phliyo mein baat krne lagi hai
Saaf saaf nhi kh sakti''
Phle wo blindfold''..aur ab ye sb
Khud na jane kha chli gyi
.

.
He rues that there is nothing ''.he turns to leave'' 'but stops''.


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when he gets to see some object covered with shining cloth''.which is shining like star in dark night''


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He moved towards it and removes the cover'..


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soothing smile delight his face'''


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when he gets the sight of beautiful crib''.which is decorated with flowers & lights and also placed some toys in this''


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He bent to crib and round the jumar' small smile came to his lips.


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All terrace shining with lights''''
She sees maan playing with toys and nihorifying the crib''


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Geet: maan


He turns to see her'
Both see into each other eye''''
She came near to him and hugged him; he also hugged her back'


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Mahi mein mahi mahi ve''''''.


Maan: geet'..ye sb tumne kyun kiya'..asa kya khehna tha tumhe mujhse''

She came out from hug and see into his eyes lovingly'
Geet:sshhh
She hugged him and placed own head on his chest' and said

" maan''..
jo sapna apne dekhatha'.uski shurhat ho gyi hai'hmari zindagi mein ek chothi se 'nanhi si khushi aane wali hai'."

He tries to understand her words'
She came out from his embrance' and said


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" jo aapko papa ' aur mujhe mama khke pukarengi'''."
He placed both palm on her cheeks' and said " tum sch kh rhi ho geet"


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Sch me''.
She nodded and said: ha maan''.. I am pregnant'


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Maan: geet''..bina kuch bole.. hum dono ek dusre ki baat smjhne lag gye hai'.mere mann jo khwab dekha tha wo aaj tumne pura kr diya'''.


Geet: aap hi khte hai na ki hum do jism ek jaan hai


He nodded.
Maan: ha geet
Both hugged each other''..


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precap : maaneet moments

next part 58 on page 104

Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 12 years ago
shri12 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow geet surprised maan by gifting crib and told him that she is pregnant
maan is enlighted with the news
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Posted: 12 years ago
original posted by
shri12
wow geet surprised maan by gifting crib and told him that she is pregnant
maan is enlighted with the news



yes dear...thanksss



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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww finally maan know .. Gr8 update
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
fabulous
liked a lot dear
continue soon
waiting
happy new year

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