Whisper Arhi SS Last Part Arhi - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
Arghhh wih i had known before commenting that the next would be yours with the next update...then i would have reserved the space and started stalking you!!!!

ha ha ha but anyway its nice a simple marriage and then... their moments together everything is very pretty
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks a lot for the pm :D Do pm me for the rest of the updates too :D

Just read the first chap...the concept is unique and interesting...will read the rest and comment later!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
Wow, that was a wonderful SS. I read chapters 1 to 4 in one go.
This is so different from other stories and the serial, brings a brath of freshness. Lovedit.
Please PM me on you future updates. I am sending you a buddy request. Thanks Jasmine.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
Hey i totaly lovd al the updates.
Very interestin story.
Want to read more.
Cont soon nd thanks 4 pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75

Whisper Part 5

Those who love Aamir-Kajol plz read my short SS Love fate destiny on them.There r only 4 parts.I just posted d part 1.plz read & comment.

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2728834


After a few months...
Shyam and his sweet heart Lavanya's wedding...
Everybody including Khushi felt that Shyam and Lavanya were made for each other.
Lavanya was perfect for Shyam.Like Shyam wished Lavanya was a professional Doctor,beautiful,stylish,modern and rich.

After 2 years...
Shyam and Lavanya's first wedding anniversary party...
Arnav wore a navy blue shervani.Khushi wore a cream coloured saree and pearl ornamnents.
Arnav and Khushi were pampering their little baby boy Rudra.
Lavanya had not come back from the hospital.
Shyam got a phone call from Lavanya.
L:Sorry Shyam..i am late.There was an operation.That's why.
S:It's ok Lavanya.
L:I will come now.
S:Party has already started.How can you come in the hospital attire?
L:Don't worry.I will change my dress and come.I had carried my saree to the hospital.
S:Ok.I love you darling.I am waiting for you.

L:Love you too.
Khushi overheard this by mistake.She smiled.
K:Perfect couple.They both love each other madly.

Lavanya wore a black saree.When she entered the party hall Shyam was relieved.
L:Shyam,how do i look in this saree?

S:You look gorgeous sweet heart.
She smiled:You are too handsome.
He smiled.
They cut the cake together.
The song
'Ow…ha…o….

Hey kash..
Kash yun hota..
Har shaam..
Sath tu hota..
Chup chap..
Dil na yun rota..
Har shaam..
Sath tu hota..

Guzara ho tere, bin guzara
Ab muskil hai lagta
Nazara ho tera, hi nazara
Ab har din hai lagta….

Haal e dil tujhko sunata
Dil agar yeh Bol pata
Bakhuda tujhko hai jata jaan..

Aaha tere sang jo pal bitata
Waqt se main woh mang lata
Yaad karke muskurata haan…

Woho…..o….ho…..o….ho……
Woho…..o….ho…..o….ho……'{Murder 2} was played.
Shyam-Lavanya and Arnav-Khushi danced.

Arnav got ready to go to Mumbai for a business need.
Khushi looked upset.Arnav gave her a red rose.
A:I will miss you.
She took it from him.Her eyes were wet.
K:I don't know how i will spent time without you.
He wiped her tears.
A:Only for a few days.It will go fast.
K:Without you time moves very slow.
He caressed her hair.
A:Bye Khushi.Take care.
She simply nodded her head with pain.

ISS PYAAR KO KYA NAAM DOON



Khushi put Rudra to sleep.She was getting bored sitting alone in her room.Nani was in Haridwar.Lavanya was having night duty.Somebody knocked the door.
She opened the door.
K:Shyam!
He got inside her room and closed the door.
K:What are you doing Shyam?
She sweated.
S:Don't be scared.I was trying to say something to you since a long time.But i could'nt say.Now it's the perfect time to say.No one is here.Only we both are here.
K:What do you want to say?
He looked at her eyes deeply.She felt awkward.
S:I love you Khushi.
She was shocked.
K:What are you saying Shyam?Are you mad?
S:I am serious.I was mad.That is why i rejected you due to a silly reason.I insulted you saying that you are an orphan.God punished me.Lavanya who was chosen by me thinking that she was the best choice cannot give me children.You are a loving wife.But Lavanya...She is always busy.
K:Lavanya loves you a lot.She is a sincere Doctor.You don't know how lucky you are to get her as your wife.I always felt that you both are a perfect couple and you are a loving husband.But...
S:You please understand my condition Khushi..I still love you.You please come back to me.I will love you more than Arnav.
K:Stop it Shyam.I never thought your mind was full of poison.You are disgusting.
S:Khushi...
He held her hand.
Immediately she slapped him.
Shyam was shocked.
K:I am not Paanchaali to consider husband's brother also as husband.Get lost.I will reveal your true face to everyone.Poor Lavanya.You are cheating on her.Poor Arnavji.He trusts you.
S:No Khushi.You can't tell this to anyone.
K:I will tell.You can't stop me.
S:If you do so,you will lose Arnav.
She was shocked.
K:Shyam!How can you think of destroying your own brother?
S:Everything is fair in love and war.
He smiled like an evil and left the room.
Khushi was shattered.
K:Oh God!What will i do?

I was upset when Shyam rejected me.But now i understand why God did that.Everything happens for good.If i had married Shyam my life would have been ruined.He is just a big crook.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
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edited:
ha ha ha i managed to back on stalker style oh when i was thinking all is rosy...the evil rises again...arghhh and now i feel bad for Lavanya also!!!!

God save both these ladies!!!! Hope Arnav comes to know soon!!!
Edited by uniquebluerose - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
i loved all the parts of whisper it was perfect and evil is always evil shyam the demon
loving the couple arhi and little rudra sorry for not commenting di i was away for the pongal days for a week plzz cont soon save khushi from that snake arnav come soon love u di for ur new SS
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
Thanks for the PM. Loved it. Shyam is a bad guy.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was superb..

I thought shyam bcum a good guy bt a creep s always a creep..

Nw kushi has gottn n trouble.
Nd hw she ll cum out frm that?

Very interestin so cont soon yaar.
Thanks 4 pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ohhh, the creepwa is back. I was thinking that Shyam would probably be a good guy in this SS, but no, he has to be the creepwa coz that is what suits him.

Awesome update Jasmine!!
Thanks for PM.

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