Arhi FF: Retribution (part 11 updated pg 55)

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sRistee

@crazy44

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Posted: 13 years ago

#281

so thats what hapPend!
i was so curious!
brilLiant update dEar! you write amazingly!
loveD it !

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Homeslice

@Homeslice

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#282

It was simply fab!!
Love it how arnav can't make up his mind and is frustrated, Poor Khushi so much hopes and love for him but he doesn't even come to see her!
And the ending was sad! He was going against her will!

Loved the entire update!
DO CONTNIUE PLEASEE!

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pc17

@pc17

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#283

Originally posted by: cute_rockstar
oh i thought u'll never update!!!
*sob*
was waiting for this like anything huh!

anyways for the fab update...forgiveness given!!

it was a fab update preity!

ohh this arnav!
poor khushi..:(

the flashback was amazing...<3

thank u so much for the pm!!!

i hope u continue very soon...

will wait desperately ...:D

Thank you 😊 *bows down* thank you for forgiving me. I know it has been ages! But uni is literally sucking the life out of me! I will try to update as soon as I can though dear xxx

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#284

I can totally see Arnav doing that.. As it is part of his character.. Well written..

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Bhavapriya

@Bunny_Bear

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#285

Totally loved the update. The story o their marriage and the final part was good too.. Thanks for the PM>

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medha

@medha16

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Posted: 13 years ago

#286

this was awesome!!!i loved d update...i think it is characteristic of ASR to act like this...he wants everything under his control...he loves her but considrs her as his own personal possession...that makes him d dark anti hero n i honestly love this streak in him...continue soon!!!

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-Devanshi-

@-Devanshi-

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#287

It was kinda painful..!!!and yes it definitely has raised more question about the past !!wanna know more about it...update soon!!

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indy12

@indy12

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#288

yes i am confused, but like it! hopefully the next one clarifies things?

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pc17

@pc17

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#289

Originally posted by: Nici0306
I can totally see Arnav doing that.. As it is part of his character.. Well written..

Thank you I'm glad you thought it in keeping with his character. 😊

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pc17

@pc17

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Posted: 13 years ago

#290

Originally posted by: medha16
this was awesome!!!i loved d update...i think it is characteristic of ASR to act like this...he wants everything under his control...he loves her but considrs her as his own personal possession...that makes him d dark anti hero n i honestly love this streak in him...continue soon!!!

Thanks so much 😃 I'm so glad you're on the same wavelength. Me too, yes he really does get blinded by rage and possession and does some pretty stupid things. But that is ASR for you and when he repents, he really repents.