Arhi FF: Retribution (part 11 updated pg 55)

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Posted: 13 years ago

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aww poor khushi. really hope arnav makes up for her pain

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#162

nice..well written...update soon..😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#163

That was just superb... really felt for Khushi... I love this ff so much... read it 3times already... please update soon... am dying to read the next update

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Posted: 13 years ago

#164

i am so glad i found it now! other wise i would've gone mad waiting for update of your next part- especially for the update of 3rd part!!
so good!! gripping!! intruding! awesome!! loved it!!!

soo cute ya loved iT! 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#165

Amazing Man :) Very Emotional & I Hope He Heal Khushi's Pain 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

#166

amazing do continue soon plz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#167

very nyc part..it seems lots thr in thr past

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Posted: 13 years ago

#168

awww...wonderful update..i hope they get to converse a little more!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#169

Awwwh Khushi, My poor baby! I understand how she must be feeling right now to fave the family. It must be so awkward for her. This part was so emotional. Please continue soon. I can't wait for the next chapter. The story is beautiful <3 xxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: roseycheek
awww...wonderful update..i hope they get to converse a little more!

haha I know what you mean about the conversing. I read the chapters and realised there is an awful lot of crying going on! I think I have got the bulk of the crying out of the way but there are going to be more emotional parts to come. I want them to talk more but these characters are wounded and have never really had a relationship on a personal level so both characters are still rather reserved. I'm looking to build the level of trust slowly to the level where they can talk things out. Rest assured I am going to open a can of worms soon and hopefully there will be more happy and heartfelt conversations in future 😊