The Feather of Blue Bird#2 [MN] *Completed*

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Amrita

@Maahzabeen

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#221

NIce update...

Happy holi to you too

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Rumki

@rumki34

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#222

gr8 update suja.u have written mayank's pain anger everything beautifully
hope now mayank will change

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TheLeo_M

@TheLeo_M

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Posted: 13 years ago

#223

wow yaar what an update...

simply superb...mind-blowing...

you expressed all the emotions very very beautifully...
it seems i'm standing their and seeing all this live...

its too good...

loved it continue soon...

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: clustersofstar
mayank ko nervous breakdown ho sakta hai
beautifully written suja👏

idea acha hai...wah mehak

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#225

another mind blowing update..
fabulous..
i loved the way nupur was trying to make mayank to confess that he still love her deeply and madly..
but the ending was scary... but i know nups hain tou maynk ko kuch nehi ho sakta...
wonderful job Suja

Plz Try to update soon

Wishing u a very Happy HOLI

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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#226

Fabulous update

suja...ab to dono ko milla do

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ALIMA AFRIN KHEYA

@kheya-mayur

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#227

beautiful suja ...
i loved this ...

who is the writer of the main novel?

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ria

@ronojoy_ria

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#228

the up is good

so mayank and nupur are coming back home from the party

they both were silient but their mind had many thing to tell each other

when they reached their home nupur wanted mayank to say her something but he was quite as usuall so she also without saying anything goes into her room and started taking her dress but she was surprised to see mayank infront of her

mayank had the same anger in his eyes he was asking nupur why she sang in the party but today nupur was not ready to lose she wanted to face him to make him realise that how much he deny but the truth is that he too love her care for her

by hearing the truth from nupur mayank became furious he tried to clear her conception that he dont love her but neither his voice or his eyes supported his words

its really sad to see both of them suffering like this

lets hope that mayank soon realised his love which in now buried under his anger and ego

plz cont soon and pm me