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avani sharma

@avani_sharma02

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#211

i am speechless...step nupur took was rite...she stood before mayank and poured her heart out...mayank is being stubborn in not accepting the fact that he still loves nupur and cares for her...but i hope that now soon everything will get settled and mayank will understand nupur and accept her in his life...as mayank is not complete without nupur...😳.

WISH U A VERY HAPPY HOLI...!!!!!!!!!!😊

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mahek

@Star_001

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#212

mayank ko nervous breakdown ho sakta hai

beautifully written suja👏

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Auroni

@Auroni.92

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#213

Totally beautiful update suja apu...
I loved how nupur questioned back to him this time...She made him feel that how much he loves her...otherwise things wudnt effect him this much...
Enjoyed it totally...
Now just want mayank's final realization and confession...Aab bohut ho gaya yeh ladai jhagra...
Cont soon...

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drmaha

@drmaha

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#214

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omg suja cant tell u hoe mch i loved this part...😊

nupur has said it all to mayank and mayank sumwhere realises his love for her... gosh cant believe this so write it so well dear...

mayank has taken out all his fearness, angerness noe he will feel bit relax...

suja awsome piece of work...👏🤗

loved it dear...

Edited by drmaha - 13 years ago

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

@Shafy_Kaira_MN

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#215

That was very very nice update finally all emotions which were

buried in his heart from past five years are coming out...

tHAT WAS VERY VERY NICE UPDATE

next time please do update soon...

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

@Shafy_Kaira_MN

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#216

Aasoo-on ke chalne ki aawaz nahi hoti,
Dil ke totne ki aahat nahi hoti,
Agar hota khuda ko har dard ka ehsaas,
To usey dard denay ki aadat nahi hoti!

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#217

the pain in them was quite visible... Nice update Suja... Update soon 😊

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shria19

@shria19

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#218

Very very nice update😃

continue soon:)

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parul_bansal

@parul_bansal

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#219

omg!!! wat an update..loved it

hope everything gets on the ri8 track between mayur

thanks 4 the pm

may god bless u

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

@Shafy_Kaira_MN

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#220

Hume Tumse Pyaar Kitna Yeh Hum Nahin Jaante
Magar Jee Nahin Sakte Tumhaare Bina
Hume Tumse Pyaar

Suna Gham Judaai Ka Uthaate Hai Log
Jaane Zindagi Kaise Bitaate Hai Log
Din Bhi Yahaan To Lage Baras Ke Samaan
Hume Intezaar Kitna Yeh Hum Nahin Jaante
Magar Jee Nahin Sakte Tumhaare Bina
Hume Tumse Pyaar

Hume Tumse Pyaar Kitna Yeh Hum Nahin Jaante
Magar Jee Nahin Sakte Tumhaare Bina
Hume Tumse Pyaar