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Posted: 13 years ago

Wow.

Beautiful update
Who's this Balvant??
Maan told evryone the truth n accepted his mistakes.
But Geet has gone with that man.
Now wat will Maan do?
How will he save Geet from brij n Sam.

Luved it.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Varsha...
Last update was really a good and thrilling one...😊😛

How Maan pleading for his love Geet not to go with tat Balwanth!!! 😭 😭 (but to forgive Maan is not a easy one for Geet)
Cant believe it!!!!!!!!!!! 😲
I think Geet went with him to find all the truths...

Waiting to know more truths or call it secrets 😆😆
U ve wrote it beautifully 👏 👏 👏
I love all ur updates... Continue soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART- 29

How can she go no..no she knew very well..i am her balvanth…he remembered when they played blind fold in party…when he save her …she smelled him that he is balvanth…when ever he touch her she felt he is balvanth...he lived in her dreams…he present in her each blood cells. she knew very well who I am…then why she went with them…maan pushed everyone at one jerk and he ran out…its already too late….balvanth car already disappear from his eye view…

He dropped down as he lost everything..he didn't expected such a big punishment from her.. "oh geet…why you went with him..why you cheated yourself…"

Don't know what to do…ye kaise saza hain….his eyes flowed tears…he felt like there is no meaning living without geet in his rest of life. He moved inside the KM with heavy mind…dragging his legs…still dadima, dev ,arjun and anni standing there…maan once gazed everybody…he couldn't understand their expressions..all moved to their rooms. Arjun went out…only anni remained…she is trying to tell some thing. when maan try to move from there anni hold his hand…"bhai I believe you…but I didn't understand why geet went with that guy..i think some thing wrong…sorry bhai bcoz of me you become a monster now I can't hold the truth any more…it may dangerous to geet life…."maan gazed her…what she want to tell him…the pure betrayal in her eyes ..she is exploring truth first time in front of maan only to save geet..she is braked all the walls which is erected around her…"sameera ruined my life…"she didn't completed her words…maan head started to spin…another shock…

"anni you know what are you speaking.."

"yes, sameera had a relation with brij…I found this truth that's the reason she want to kill me..she is taken brij help..but brij and other's …"she cried bitterly…her cry is breaking his heart …another truth the real truth is in front of him today. He suspected some one ,punished someone…but the real culprit is sameera..how much he trusted her…it's a truth he didn't loved her but as a friend he respected her…he adore her..but …his eyes turns red..he tightened his fist…at one jerk he dragged anni and try to sooth her pain caressing her back…she is sobbing…

"maan bhai , ether deko…yetho geet ka note pad..dekho na how she circled sameera name…I think geet had doubt on her….she is trying to track her..that's the reason she went with him…pls save her before her life some one ruin it…I am sure every thing is happening by brij and sameera…maan bhai pls save her..save geet…"

Brij calculated everything by professionally. He forget to think personally…may be he don't know how to think by heart…this is the big mistake happened from him. he didn't understood the relation between geet and anni how much deep it went. he didn't expect that anni tell the truth with maan. he thought anni only fear for their own family but he didn't expected that geet is more then everyone for her now..he thought just he can close her mouth using his old trick. But anni and geet relationship is grown more then everything.

Maan left a deep breath…its means geet wontedly went with those culprits…it means I am not wrong she knew me very well…he went furiously leaving anni.

Now his car travelled towards sameera house..his mind just thinking about geet..why you didn't tell me about your doubt all these days…before going at least you might give a small information to me. not only you baby is also with you why you taken such a big risk in your life…his eyes filled with tears…without caring her life she is trying to catch those culprits…only for anni … he dipped his head once again down feeling shame him self. the way is blurring due to tears. When he is about to reach sameera house…he found sameera car leaving her house. He can find her in driving seat next to her who is that…yes it is brij. He tightened the grip on staring wheels with angry…how badly she cheated him…he is not bothering that she cheated him..if she want to be with brij let it be..but why she ruin his anni..its true she is grown up but still she is a child…anni's hotel situation rushed in his mind….he raised the car speed…if anything happens to geet and baby…I won't leave anybody to be alive…

After one hour travelling sameera car reached big bungalow which is in remote area…maan followed them very carefully maintaining some distance.

After few minutes maan entered the bungalow by backside door.

Arjun receive the message from geet…its fourth message about her move with balvanth. She is giving continues messages to arjun that where he is taking her and also asking him to follow her with police..arjun following her with police battalion.

Brij and sameera entered the bungalow. Geet sitting on couch with balvanth. Once she saw brij she stood at one jerk…her eyes splitting fire…

"geet how are you…"he questioned her….

"how can you expect that I will be fine.…brij veerji why you are doing all these illegal activities …already I left cores property on your name. still why you are hungry for money ..why you are playing with innocence life…."

"geet bus..bus geet..i am really bore listening these lectures..this world standing only on money…you know very well about me…"his piousness smile vanished her patience.

She hold his shirt colar. " you are the reason for ruining anni life. what did you get it ….not only her even me..brij veerji can I tell you one thing I knew very well you and your family bothering me only for my property. Still I respected you all. Knowing all the truths I surrendered my self to you all…but today no…you should pay for it..being your sister I ashamed my self…now what you planned…to kill me also.."

"no..geet I am not such heart less brother…you just go with your husband to abroad and you can spend rest of life with him. I am ready to full fill all your wishes.." she knew very well his intension. Her angry raised…slapped on brij cheek force fully…till her hands pain…

"you are such a culprit where you are not forgivable for any coast…did you think I am such a fool to agree some one as my husband. May be I am a fool but not so much…you should a shame for your self for sending your sister with somebody…I agree I am not your own sister but we are belongs to same family and same blood. Even animals have some concern with their own belongs…..maan sir better then you…he done everything for his sister…but you… "she spited saliva on his face…again she lifted her hand…brij got angry when geet turned reverse …he had different plan …just he rubbed saliva by his hand….he hold her hand and thrown forcefully on couch. Geet lost her balance she rushed to hit herself to couch edge. Before she reach the couch maan hold her in his arms. Her hand went on tummy make shivering nothing is happen to her baby.

Maan turned at brij…holding geet in one hand securingly. Now maan not even remained as human bee. He is become a demon spitting fire in his eyes. he is shivering in anger at one jerk he attacked on everybody at a time. he lost a sense he become a hungry lion which is trying to capture his prey…actually a normal human bee can not be so much strong…. but all these days what he eaten the pain inside…it made him too strong. Geet and anni pains were motivated him impossible to make possible. All the goons were one by one dropping down…brij feared …sameera try to run away…but no one can escape by maan singh khurana. The pain what he given to geet..the guilt what eaten by him for each day …all were cursed inside at a time. each goons bones were broken with horrible noise. Geet just stood like dumbfounded …this maan is totally new to her..he is not even caring for wounds which is happened to him or he is not caring for bleeding of his own body. only his aim to destroy the evil which is present in front of him. now he attacked brij like wounded lion…don't know how much he hit or how long he lost himself hitting him but finally when arjun entered with police inside brij dresses were drenched with blood. Some where brij left a deep breath realizing that finally some how he escaped from maan.

Now his gaze turned to sameera…she is almost faint looking this horrible maan…she never expected such a monster alive inside him. she is above to move from there maan hand hold her neck tightly…he forget that she is a women…being a women she ruin anni life…remembering anni he went worst and worst…police and arjun tried to loose the grip..no its not a so easy…her eyes stuck on top…her tongue came out..there is a small bone breaking sound from her back.

Now geet came in sense..she run to maan hold his hand tightly.. "maan sir..leave her..leave her…"

Without gazing at geet he roared "no geet ..never…she cheated me…"

"maan sir don't take such a decision without thinking… what you have taken on me…pls leave her… anni and dadima is waiting for you.. police will take care..don't take law in your hand…"his finger grip still tighten on her neck. geet try to loosen the grip…"maan sir… there are many of them depending you…pls leave her….still law and order is alive …" maan once again he saw her…she is now five month pregnant..very little baby bump showing his baby presence in her tummy..his fingers loosened on her neck…he pushed her angrily. Police cached her…all goons including brij and sameera arrested. Police grabbed everyone. Before moving brij roared once again…"geet I want to be nice with you..but you helped police to arrest me…I won't leave you. very soon I am coming back . you should pay for it in your future." Geet shivered hearing those words…the chill air passed in her entire body. she is about sink….maan stood next to her holding her hand.

Maan stared at her…how much pain she bared all these days…His tears are not ending…I married her…I promised her but what I did her..nothing I have not even keep up a single promise..but geet …no she is an angel..she joined me…she faced all the problems before it reached me .without knowing truth…she full filled all the promise which she is taken in our sathphere…she is with anni when her life is in danger…she is with dadima when she need moral support…she guided dev to go in proper way…she done everything without knowing the relations between us. But what about me…only I tried to give her pain , I tried to ruin her entire life…oh god how can she forgive me….

"geet…"he called her painfully. She can recognize his honest pain in his voice…"geet can you for give me…."he kneeled down in front of her and he buried his face on her tummy….his hands moved hurriedly on her tummy to sense his baby… her hand just moved to brush his hair …but its stopped in mid..even her eyes were poured tears….

PRE CAP: geet "aaj apko maine maff kardiya tho ….iss duniya ka koi be ladaki muje maff nahi karegi Mr.Maan singh khurana."

Hi buddies,

I am very sorry to say that after this update I can't give next update for some more days bcoz as you all know I am suffering from back pain…now it is too much where I couldn't control it..may be very early ill be hospitalized. Pls forgive me for the inconvenience. Pls don't mistake me that I am high jacking you peoples for like buttons…are comments. I given my updates when I receive 60 to 70likes also.

You know one thing even I am eagerly trying to give updates to you all . as a writer I can't sit quietly without giving updates and without knowing your response. when I type next part hundred percent I will update you.

Imp thing thanks to all your supports, like buttons and also valuable comments.

Byee see you all,

Varsha.

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Posted: 13 years ago

I don't know how to thank you dear for your writing ...

Inspite of your health issue u have given this lovely update...
I will pray for your health ...
hope you feel better soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...
really loved it...m happy maan came to knw abt d truth n sameera n brij is punished...but d precap make me upset...dont knw wht will happen nxt...
its amazing...
thank u fr d lovely update...
waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...
continue soon plz...

but before dat tk cr of urself...coz if u r fine we will get d updates na...so plz GET WELL SOON...tk proper rest...back pain is very bad thing n can b severe also...so relax...
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Posted: 13 years ago
now update u give is very very emotional tear in my eyes also
maaneet suffer to much in their own way
even geet suffer most
precap is also good get well soon and give us more and more update
love you
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update..
finally brij n sameera are arrested..
luved geet... awww maan's anger...
precap looks interesting...
take care... get well soon...


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Posted: 13 years ago
aamzing part dear
really i love ot
wow how much risk geet took
it means geet knew that maan is balwanth dear
even though she comeplted all the wows she had taken
very well written dear
and what about the precap dear
waiitng for that dear
pls update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
great update dear i love it finaly maan know the truth abt sameerah and brij and they are arrestedwaiting eagerly for next update i hope you get well very soon dear take care
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Posted: 13 years ago
happy to see brij and sameera in jail...forgive him geet...

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