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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow. Awsome FF. Update Real Soon. Ok. (:
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part2-Happy Birthday...

Dev went into his room after he played for some time with Shanthi. When he was reaching into his room Chaya asked him wether he will eat or not. he nodded his head that he had no mood to eat and went into his room closing the door. Dev went to the music player to on it, when he saw the window of his opposite room getting opened. He saw at that place when he found Radhika sitting beside the window looking at the sky. The words of Shanthi "Docs told that she had a partial loss of uninportant people from her mind." As the light was off in Dev's room Radhika didn't see him. He sat on the porch like place near the window and tuned on the player. It was playing a A.R Rehmaan number. from Bombay.

Radhika got a smile on her lips listenign to the smooth song floating from some where . She turned her head to the side from where the music was coming from. She found that the window was open in the other flat. She saw to find who was there, but due to the dark ness she can't find any one. Dev who was smiling seeing the Radhika's reactions smiled and turned off the light and started to do some work off his own. Radhika figured that it was Dev who was there in that room. She first felt happy but suddenly a gloomy ness came in her inside. She silently took her diary and started writing

"Aaj maine tumse poocha ki mera destiny kya hain. Tum ne mujhe reply diya Kanha. I was really upset to not to see him tomorrw, but u made it possible to me. Thank u Kanha. I will wish him his b'day today. May be I will try to be the first one to wish him. "

t. Dev copleted his work and by the time he came back he saw the light was off in that room. but still the window was open.He thought to himself "Shayad so gayi hogi. Ye Radhika bhi na Really a perfect Mad girl.She even forgot to close the windows.He said that and turned off the light in the room and sat near the window for some more time. He then tried to look at the things there near the window in Radhika's room. He found that there was also a porch attathed to window just as it was here and he found two books along with some music cd's there. He tried to see what those books were, then he saw one was anote book while other was a diary. He smiled to himself remembering their college days when she used to write all those tantrums she had with others in a diary. Dev sat there looking at the moon . Dev thought to himself "What is there in u? Why her eyes always glue to u when ever she see u. At that times it looks funny and as a Over action to me, But now I am liking it. May be my mind is matured now. But why I hated it then, may be because of that lie? Its indeed a very small lie, why should I hate her that much ?????? She si really matured then only which we failed to understand.Whhen I searche to apologise her, she moved away from me. Becoz of my one word she kept it away from em for four years. Why? She loves me right. But when she love me how come she forgot me. Does love is that much unimportant in her life????? Some times were there when she died to talk to me. she found that special in me. But I was no where special. She was that special hich I failed to understand. She finds every thing lively in this nature. She even can see that beauty of ngiht on a no moon day too. she sees that beauty in stars, she see that beauty in plants. she even fin soem good ness in death too. Thiking of her he went into his sleep.

He woke up at jerk listenign some one shouting loud "Happy BIrthday Dear"

Dev woke up with that shock and looked the side ways, no one was there in his room. He looked to her room, where he found her talkign to osme one sitting near the window.

"Haan How come I not bother u when it is ur B'day"

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"So what, u are my friend"

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"Be col and Light. But I kept mypromise na that I will wish u first"

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"Blah Bla blah, meet u tmorrow. Bye bye"

Radhika hanged that phone and took her diary and started to write
"Kaha I wished him. U should watch his feeling when I shouted the wish, I can't stop my self from laughing, Any ow I did succeed Kanha. But My wish I fullfilled, now I needa fulill his wish.I won't talk to him. "

Dev was watching Radhika standing beside the window. Suddenly her face turned gloomy. She closed that book and went near her bed to sleep.

Dev thought to himself "Oh Radhika, U did fear me with ur phone. But u know what, with out knowing u wished me too, I don't knwo wether u remember my b'day or ot. But u wished me dear first. So I am sure this year will get me with u. Get ready for many more surprises tomorrow morning.

Dev was about to g to his bed when his Dad came to him and wished him "Happy B'day dear,. I am very happy today. U gonna enter Aiims on ur B'day. "

Dev with a smile "Thanks dad."

Chaya went to him and kissing him on his fore head "Happy b'day puttar"

Dev:Thank u maa

Pari and Nandu rushed to Dev and hugging him from either sides said "Happy b'day bro."

Dev also reflecting the hug said "Thank u monkeys,."

Pari was trying to say "Janmo don subh kaminey"

Dev catching her ear said "U will never learn to speak it. Its Janam din ki subh kaamnayein. not some don language u speak"

Pari:Oh bro its hurting please leave me.

Dev;Dad I would have been better if u joined her in mutt or gurukul. This girl is forgetting Hindi day by day

Hari was laughing and says that was upto u to learn her hindi.

Dev was smiling when Pari get her ear left from his hand and said "If i Didn't learn hindi, now world is not going to destroy okay."

Nandu:Haan haan lekin ur sasural ki people. they will die if u didn't learn hidni.

Pari glared at Nandu in anger and rushed towards him to beat him. they both starteing to run in the entire house. Nandu in order to get out from her opens the maindoor and gets out of the Flat into the path way. Pari also opens the door to come out when they find the lighting of diyas in the adjacent flat. Pari really loved it that she went inside and dragged Hari out to show it . Even Hari also loved the way Diyas are put. He asked Chaya "Kya vuss ghar mein kuch party yaa poja hain"

Chaya:Arey nahi, Vus ghar ki ek Ladki hain Radhika, she decorated the whole house withe diyas and she used to do it every night.

Hari:Really I don't believe so.

Chaya: Arey Sach, If u have doubt see tmorrow.

Hari:Lekin itne din nahi hain na

Chaya:Vo bhi hum jaisa naye shift huva na, vun logon ko apni ghar se saaman laane mein waqt laga. and also Radhika was not there, she was at her home only.

Hari:Ohhh.Lagta hain ladki badi sanskaari hain

Chaya:Haan U will never thin of having that girl in this time. But u can say her as a perfect.

Hari:Perfect aur tere muh se. Oh ab mujhe vusko dekhna hi tha. It was straneg to listen from u

Chaya"Jab ab dekhte hain. aap bhi yahi kahega.

Pari:Ab Andhar chalenge, varna humein kal college jaana mushkil hoga

They went in and closed the door. The diyas glowed wiht more bightness and a lucid colour wiht the radiant moon rays falling on it.
Edited by harianjana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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waukesha, masumasrilanka, thujaa, radha.avina, maia22, ushasri, meenaluma, goolab,

Thank u all for liking my update. and this was indeed special for me and I am laggign to get some good response to it.

and guys here is my next update. actually I updated it just for a time pass. I think u like this one too. Well many of u may have soem doubts after reading this oen. why radhika is acting? why Dev was thinkign of her etc etc. I promise to give u all the answers for all the questions, but u has to be patient as the story has to develop
Edited by harianjana - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@Meenaluma:Thank u dear

@Masumasrilanka Thanks a lot dear

@Maia22 wow thanks for the complement u gave. I don't knwo how producers stop, but when they stop some times it looks like a cliff hanger but nothing will be there, But me not like that I will stop when i feel I typed enough

@artenist u liked it glad to hear from u, and I did typed it yaar

@goolab Nice to hear fom u dear. Thanks a lot

@ushasri :Thanks didi
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
nice ff hari waiting for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
Hari,lovely FF & thnx for the PM. Pls continue.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thnx for the update. Waiting to know about RaDev's past life.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
😃thanku 4 ur beautiful FF 👏its really good👏waiting to know about the past also thanku so much 4 ur PM🤗
Edited by ak4423766463 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow nice yaar waiting for the next part dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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so happy the second part done so quick gret waiting for the next updte
looks like the letter --a-- gets stuck getting tired of going back and fixing the spelling am going ignor it

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