FF ArSh: Devil's Bride..!! NOTE pg 88 - Page 24

Originally posted by: luv_kash

DAB I LOVE U SO MUCH
n ofcourse u sonbull for creating such a character.
where should i start from,ok the sword fighting,omg!!!!! only thinking about it is giving me goosebumps*drools*,it was so superly described...d way he teaches her d lessons,his teasing her n thier bickering is so sweet yet so hot...n d way he calls her 'wild cat' man itz too sexy...i m in love wid dis cat n devil.!!!!!
wow d scene with those doors was so horrible...it seemed as if was seeing a horror movie...very well described.
there r so many secrets...why were those women behind those doors n who d hell e they...DAB has a self healing power...i m really curious about that blue eyed guy...he didnt even tried to harm shilpa.
n what has armaan killed shilpa's grandmother... oh man i m so impatient:P
THNX A LOT FOR DIS UPDATE
WILL BE WAITING FOR MORE:))

Originally posted by: moonlight2630

hey dear great update i love it totally fida and latu on ur FF .

i love ARSH sword fight the scene was so hot and u described so well .

love shilpa's attitude and arman's arrogance they r perfect match made for each other.

and who is this dark blue eye guy and the close doors mystery with each passing updates ur FF getting more and more interesting and thriller and also horrible .

specially the door scene and her sister scene and change voice is so scary .

I think I have become addicted to your FF.

you r an amazing writer.

thanks 4 pm and lovely update plz update ASAP i can't wait 4 next update and update soon.

Originally posted by: Laila.N

OMG girl !! I read your part yesterday on my bed, via my mobile, just before sleeping, and when I did, I was so scared that I actually had to watch KASH scenes because I was afraid I would be having nightmares :O

And in the morning when I got to school I told my friend and I made her read your part, so much i was thinking about it !

It was so wonderfully written, the first scene with Armaan, I loved their closeness ☺️ and how you described the training, it was awesome and i could so well pictured it !!

And then the last scene with the women behind the door, and the blue eyed-guy, and the fearless Shilpa 😲 so realistic ! Really ! I was amazed ! I could hear the women's giggle, just like I was watching a horror movie in live, so it was well described !

I could really go on about that part, I just loved it and your writing, thanks for making it longer and please please update soon !
I'm dying to know what will happen between the both after DAB stopped her!

Oh, and did I mention I'm in love with that hot and dark DAB 😍

Ah, thanks for that piece, wonderful work 👏

Originally posted by: Amadora

Thank you so much❤️

ohh dear, you got scared..

uhmm I will update soon

Remember you will not have nightmares...

...because you will not sleep

ahahha just kidding😛