FF ArSh: Devil's Bride..!! NOTE pg 88 - Page 23

Originally posted by: AMMY12

Awsm part.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.

Originally posted by: DulceAmor

Wow, this part was really creepy in places but utterly enthralling. The sword fight between Armaan and Shilpa was like a beautiful dance and I just loved his attitude. The guy is arrogant, yeah, but irresitable all the same. I can totally picture his smirk. The part with the woman and the banging on the doors and all the voices was brilliant. It was like something out a horror film. It sent chills down my spine. Now I am dying to know what is behind the door and why the woman was so insistent on Shilpa opening. Do continue soon and thanks for the PM.

DAB I LOVE U SO MUCH
n ofcourse u sonbull for creating such a character.
where should i start from,ok the sword fighting,omg!!!!! only thinking about it is giving me goosebumps*drools*,it was so superly described...d way he teaches her d lessons,his teasing her n thier bickering is so sweet yet so hot...n d way he calls her 'wild cat' man itz too sexy...i m in love wid dis cat n devil.!!!!!
wow d scene with those doors was so horrible...it seemed as if was seeing a horror movie...very well described.
there r so many secrets...why were those women behind those doors n who d hell e they...DAB has a self healing power...i m really curious about that blue eyed guy...he didnt even tried to harm shilpa.
n what has armaan killed shilpa's grandmother... oh man i m so impatient:P
THNX A LOT FOR DIS UPDATE
WILL BE WAITING FOR MORE:))

This is getting better and better. What an amazing and interesting part. Hats of to you. The part was nice. Continue soon and put more ArSh scenes.

Awesome part! The sword fighting scene was hot! Luved it! The story is getting interesting! Do cont.soon..thanxx for the PM

awsome part want to see what happens next do update fast :P

wonderfull update...

wow,,
That was an amazing part,,
Continue soon