IPK FF:Broken Mirror-Chapter 10 Pg 109 Upd-16/06

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goguma

@goguma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#771

that shelter for women could just be THE place for kushi to air her grievances.
its so obvious she is still carrying a heavy burden on that fragile shoulder of hers...

same goes with arnav...
he cant use anjali as a 'shield' forever...

looking forward for the next update..
how will arnav and kushi get out of this mes...

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#772

I hope Khushi find some happiness now...she is soo broken..I want to cry for her

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arshia

@ashvez

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#773

Hiru...this was brilliant.

I have to pat ur back to bring such agonizing emotions so flawlessly.I am sure it must be so hard for u to pen down the words and it put through the readers.

You know, I enjoyed Mamiji here...coz it was a break from the heavy gloom which Khushi is carrying.But, I really hope the rehab which Khushi is planning to contact will not lead her to think otherwise.Hope she understands ...although I am totally against what Arnav did...it's unforgivable! but, I hope she does understand that he is now repenting his act...and maybe she can slack a bit.atleast, she starts talking to him ..and doesn't turn death white...physical relationship between the two is a long way.Hope some connection is met...want Arnav to work in his relationship as he did for his DI.Maybe Anj can sort something between the two...here I would say more on Khushi's end.

Commendable Hiru!!!

Love u for this effort..Muaanh!!

Ash.

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AllSmiles86

@AllSmiles86

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#774

My heart went through a roller coaster of emotions reading your story, but one emotion that stayed throughout the ride was numbness. Numbness at the fact that you portrayed Khushi's plight so dramatically yet so real that I couldnt get over the feeling that seared through my heart. It was like as if I know Khushi and this happened to her and I cant do anything but watch her go through this ordeal.

Its quite a feat to evoke such emotion in a reader. Well done!

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Luckyforever

@Luckyforever

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#775

Brilliant.
What a heart aching portryal of emotions.
Keep it up.

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nareshSV

@nareshSV

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#776

WHAT ARNAV GOING THROUGH IS NOTHING CCOMPARED WITH KHUSHI'S HURT...ALTHOUGH HE IS WITH HIS SISTER WHO IS SUFFERING...BUT WHATS TH POINT OF GETTING ANGRY AND BEHAVING LIKE A MANIAC...THATS UTTER DISGUSTING...

AND WHATS GOING ON IN KHUSHIS MIND

AND ONE MORE THING...KHUSHI EVEN DID NOT UTTER A WORD AGGAINST ARNAV AFTER THAT INCIDENT...HOPE SHE GIVES HER PEUCE OF MIND TO HIM WHEN HE RETURNS...

ONLY IF HE WOULD HAVE TRUSTED HER...ALL THI THINGS WOULD HAVE NEVER HAPPENED...SO FACE IT ARNAV...

YOU SAY YOU WILL WRITE U R DESTINY RIGHT...? SO THIS IS UR DESTINY...U HAVE WRITTEN WITH UR OWN DEEDS...GO HOME A TSUNAMI IS WAITING FOR U...

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AND A BIG CHEERZZZ...FOR UR WORK...IT REQUIRES A LOT OF EFFORT FROM UR SIDE TO MAKE THIS GOING ON...

AND PLEASE UPDATE SOON...SOON...SOON...