IPK FF:Broken Mirror-Chapter 10 Pg 109 Upd-16/06 - Page 73

All i can say is WOW. I just read the whole story from beginning to finish. HOW DO YOU DO THAT??? The horrific emotions written so beautifully, you had my eyes glued to the screen for who knows how long! Love love love love this story please PM me the next updates you write so beautiful!!!

Liked the way you are depicting Khushi's agony! That you are not just going over the surface and that you are stressing on the trauma she is undergoing makes this very realistic. Good going!!

Hi Hiruni just got a chance to catch up with this FF today being busy and plus the others that I read was just catching up on everything. This is one amazing gripping sad story. It is also a reality that can happen between a husband and wife. Some women never overcome the trauma and may end up taking their life, going insane or into deep depression. I really don't know how Khushi is going to get past this one or how their married life will be going forward. When your trust and spirit is broken like she has it's almost impossible to mend things. I really hope this does not result in a pregnancy at all. Hiding the truth or keeping silent is very dangerous. Martin Luther King Jr once said, "There comes a time when silence is betrayal. The day we see the truth and cease to speak is the day we begin to die. Our lives begin to end the day we become silent about things that matter." Anjali almost died because the truth was hidden and there is rift between two families. Shyam got away with attempted murder and he may be back to finish his task. What Arnav did to Khushi cannot be pardoned at all he's scared her and that is something that they will live with for the rest of their lives. I doubt he would have believed her if she told him the truth earlier. Love your story 😃

Hey hiru
So finally as I promised to you I have read the whole update
And it was amazing I loved this writing of urs
This FF is aptly named broken mirrors
Arnav really shattered Khushi by his deed and as u said somewhere m also scared for Arnav
If by some fluke Khushi manages to forgive him he won't be able to forgive himself
No doubt people says that one should not act in anger it never results in good of anybody which is happening to Khushi
I bow down to khushi's courage of staying
My first reaction towards relevation was like Arnav how could you
Don't you think abt pros n cons but then he can do anything for his sister and in anger
And at that time he was driven by anger and he himself was devil incarnate
The story may be sad but it's gripping and I am really looking forward to read the next update
So continue soon

Thanks a lot for the update. I guess I am not the only one who was eagerly waiting for the update.

great update..wonder how things will become right!