IPK FF:Broken Mirror-Chapter 10 Pg 109 Upd-16/06

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tinsel

@tinsel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#421

Very intense & well written update.Poor Khushi..

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HaRul-lover

@HaRul-lover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#422

😭 Poor Kushiii OMG im already seeing the next scene her being scared of him 😭

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ChocoBloc_12

@ChocoBloc_12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#423

You wrote this chapter brilliantly... :) thanks for the PM

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thecraze92

@thecraze92

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#424

aighty, so atleast anjali figured it out! but darn it! Arnav could have waited for the revenge after seeing his di, so he was too much in a fury and messed up big time! I mean BIG TIME! (sorry for the caps). I hope he punched shyam's brain out...that would make me happy lol

But I totally loved how you did not make it too graphical, cuz it would be too hard to write and read with all that pain included! But really hope, nothing of this sort happen in real episodes.

P.S. Thanks for the pm!

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Madia

@kawkabon

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#425

.firstly cant believe u updated in such a short span of time That deserves and applause👏 and a big THANKS!

secondly i feel so horrible for khushi😭but also am very glad that anjali is fine and the truth came out pretty much immediately.

lastly i juat cany wait to read what happens nxt and fingers crossed that ull stay on a roll updating fast!😃

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jenshad

@jenshad

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#426

UPDATEEE Pllzz 😳

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imran78

@imran78

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#427

OMG That was really intense. I've already suspected in chapter one, that he raped her, but it was really hard to read. It will be even harder for him to cure her wounds, if it is possible at all. I really feel sooo bad for Khushi.

Please continue soon

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aditi07

@aditi07

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#428

brilliant piece of writing👏👏...the way u have described the thought process of arnav in the beginning where shyam's words and flashbacks of anjali's words and her love are flashing in his mind simultaneously is simply superb!! It is not possible to justify rape for any reason might so ever, but still u hv described arnav's condition so well that readers still can not hate him. As for him...his family...his whole world has just one meaning i.e. his sister!! ...she is the only one he lives the most for!! knowing that her life is in a severe danger his anger..his pain & anguish is totally justified...but of course not the action he took to vent it out!! Really liked the way u described the rape scene...by not going into graphic details but delving into the emotions that khushi was going thru at that time...kudos to u for depicting such a difficult scene in such a sober fashion!!...Really wonder how arnav would ever be able to amend the situation and make things better as he really has done a terrible thing!!