IPK FF:Broken Mirror-Chapter 10 Pg 109 Upd-16/06

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Addie07

@Addie07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#411

oh god...plzz plzz update soon... shyam anjali shyam anjali.. the way u have described it all thru arnav's pov ios amazing... continue soon.. poor khushi...

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hararnav

@hararnav

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Posted: 13 years ago

#412

for a sec i thought oh no y shud it be arnav tht raped her...

but guess u r right, its so like arnav to react tht way...

well written..

the way u wrote shyams words, then anjalis and then arnavs thoughts justifies his rape... good job

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Krishna

@Krishna_12

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#413

OMG... that was really good. You write beautifully. Feel really bad for khushi but i'm glad arnav found out the truth. Update soon. Thanks for the pm

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Siva

@siva2901

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Posted: 13 years ago

#414

Its very emotional 😭 😭 😭 😭

but very well written 👏👏👏👏

Feeling Sad for Kushi

In anger Arnav mind never works 😔.

Thank god Anjali told the truth

Now Arnav pls take care of Kushi 😳

pls continue soon 😍

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@Chocoangel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#415

aww..😲..bt yea d part wuz well written..amazin work !!

Edited by Chocoangel - 13 years ago

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SanzBarbie

@SanzBarbie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#416

It was so brutal.. albeit I hated the rape scenario but it was justified with Arnav's character who has no conscience left when he breaks loose the hell of rage..But it was a sheer disgusting act of him.. I hate this brutal Arnav.

I would like to see Arnav's agony and self redemption to mend her damage..Like to see him suffer to the core..

I am so much compassionate with Khushi.. Oh how horrible it is on her part to live with the man, to be remain married with the man, who ravished her so mercilessly..
I seriously want Khushi to go back with her father and give herself a break from the hell she is living with Arnav..

In this case I do have a question .. pls clarify why did not Khushi go with her father in chapter 4 ?? I mean she was crying to Payal the previous night for going home to her parents and when the next day her dad came to take her with him from the hospital why did she refuse to go with him ??
did she felt for Arnav then as she was eyeing him with the corner of her eyes ?????
I could not get Khushi's POV to stay back at RM where all her gruesome memories come alive, where she cant sleep peacefully..
Pls CLarIfY..

And I sincerely hope that Khushi is not pregnant with his heinous act ; coz her low appetite, nausea and feeling sick indicate to that..

Oh and i sincerely admire your writing style.. so affluent and smooth.. Update soon...

Edited by Doc_Manaal - 13 years ago

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callyd

@callyd

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#417

I read from chapter one once and had tears in my eyes. I could feel both Arnav and Khushi's pain.

I felt like entering the story and hugging Khushi and making her feel safe and alright.

Hope Arnav is able to redeem himself and make Khushi feel loved and safe again.

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shaini rengarajan

@it.shalini

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#418

itsreally sadto see that the maniac succeeded in his wicked plan sotats y shes avoiding arnav!!!!!!

pl update soon cant wait to read the next part

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monsi08

@monsi08

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Posted: 13 years ago

#419

hmm.. I expected something like this.. and just in case if you remember when u sent ur first post.. I replied that my interest in the story will remain intact depending on what had happened to Khushi...
Marital rape or any kind of rape is a heinous act and there is absolutely no justification for it...be it anybody's past or present..
Even though your writing is flawless .. I wont be able to continue reading it.😭.

If it was Shyam who did this to her.. I would have liked to continue reading it.. I would have loved to see how Arnav's love is bringing back life to her as she is shattered to the core...

I am assuming that you are going to portray a reformed Arnav.. but I dont see it justified that a girl has to love the same person who raped her.. or remain married to him..

It doesnt matter if she betrayed him or not.. what he did is a crime.. !!!

These are only my views.. no offence meant at all .. I will look forward to your other FFs since I love your writing and narration 😊

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654772

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Posted: 13 years ago

#420

iI know what you mean about emotionally draiing scenes... they really take a apart of you out of you don't they. you feel like lying in the dark for hours just staring in to space not doing anything... wanting to be left alone for hours... sigh but it was well written and well executed. i loved the fact that i didnt feel repulsion for Arnav thanx to ur previous chapter. and i felt a world pf pain for Khushi who is a victim of Shyam's silver tongue and Arnav's uncontrollable anger. very very well done!