IPK FF:Broken Mirror-Chapter 10 Pg 109 Upd-16/06

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Soumya

@Siaa_Rickman

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#441

Amazing update..Though these kind of situations are very tough to handle and rite down, you've done a fantastic job :D

Arnaav when it comes to his sister looses all his sanity..the result is what he's done with Khushi now...feel so sorry for her..Though she's lost her virginity to her husband, I think at that moment she must have felt like a W****!! Pity her..Finally Anjali choked out the truth!!

The big Q is now what is Khushi gonna do??

'twas a fab update :D Cont soon :D

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Samiya

@SamiyaIPKKND

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#442

OMG please please update soon... dying to read the next part

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MsCeylon

@MsCeylon

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#443

No I wont blame Arnav though I believe no woman should go through such an ordeal but he only wanted an eye for eye coz Anji is the most precious being for him in his life...

So after Anji's confession things change and he starts hating himself for his doing... that's worster than his actions...

i wonder whether Khushi would ever forgive him but I'm sure Anji would sort out things for them :)

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RadheKrish1

@RadheKrish1

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#444

A very emotional chapter from many angles Anjali-Arnav, Khushi-Arnav and the pain that Anjali, Khushi and now Arnav is going through!

You did an awesome job can't wait for chapter 7!!!

No, I don't hate anyone not you nor Anrav 😊-it seemed that the situation got out of hand and goes to show he is human. He was hurting before he knew the truth but anger took over and now he is hurting 1000 times more and is trying to mend things with Khushi and that says a lot!

Khushi not letting him touch her and hates him that is killing him every second in a day as is.

I feel sad for all!

Again you did a great job writing this story especially writing chapter 6-tastefully done! Appreciate the warning too beforehand!

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Siham

@sihu

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#445

You've done a really good job of writing how the snake turned the whole thing...very true to his character on the show and we should expect this & more on the show, I feel...

The rape was a really devastating thing...It was horrifying reading it, so I can imagine how it was for you while you wrote it...

Really creative Hiru...continue pls...

Usually when these PMs come to my inbox, they lie there for days before I read it. But your FF has got me hooked. I wait to receive the PMs for ur updates.

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aura9

@aura9

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#446

Really this is the second time I am commenting after the 6th chapter. But, I couldn't help myself.

Looks, like both Khushi and Anjali are sailing on the same boat. Both of them have been very much disappointed by the men, they loved with their whole heart and soul. But, the difference is that Anjali has Arnav and the whole family on her side to support her and heal her wounds where as Khushi is all alone, she has nobody to lean on not even Payal.

Would love to see an emotional conversation between Khushi and Anjali. Arnav is the most hurt but he had to be as he is responsible for Khushi's pain.

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meluhan

@meluhan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#447

The update was amazing Hiruni. 👏

I agree that no woman should have to ever go through such horror.

I hate Arnav for what he did to Khushi without even giving it a second thought, We all know he
loses it when he is angry and to top it his sister was almost dying. A little reasoning would have helped him.

But I don't HATE Arnav and def love you. I understand this was very important from story point of view. You did a good job and the remorse Arnav has been feeling since he got to know the truth,i know he is dying a hundred deaths a min.

Thanks for the PM

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sharneil92

@sharneil92

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#448

HIRUUU!!! WHAT ON EARTH!!! That was worse than ANGST! gaaah! I'm a baby hiru! I should have paid heed to your warnings... but I ignored all of them! NOW I SUFFER! 😭

are we gonna see any happy moments anytime soon? 😭