IPK FF:Broken Mirror-Chapter 10 Pg 109 Upd-16/06

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desisweetheart9

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Thanks for the PM. Loved it. Good job.

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BSRaizada

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Posted: 13 years ago

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v v well written.. take a bow for such a balanced piece of writing.. n pls update soon Thanks for the PM

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renee

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Posted: 13 years ago

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his behavior is unacceptable and i would not go into defending his actions...no matter whatever was the reason...losing your mind is one thing...marital rape is another...although after knowing the truth i hope he shreds that slimy b*****d to bits...he has a lot of making up to do and nothing he does will be enough to compensate the wrong he's done...but speaking about Khushi i guess she will give him another chance...how why when...we just have to see...coz ultimately this is a love story...and they have to be togethr...;-)

thanks for the PM...:)

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Juicee Sushie

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Chapter 6 - I loved reading it, I think you wrote it extremely well, I know it would not have been easy as you don't want to offend delicate sensibilities, but I thought it was excellent and it made me experience a range of emotions & only something written very well can have that effect!!!

Well Done, can't wait for the next part!!!

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trina2010

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Wow Hiru. Its awesome.Loved it.

I loved the way you described the violent Rape scene without going into too much detail but at the same time made sure to describe it soo clearly.

You are a great writer.

Keep it up.. CHEERS👍🏼

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mimi

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Posted: 13 years ago

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amazing man!!!!

jst amazing!!!!!

m so happy that anjali is alive...n she has told arnav the truth!!!!

n arnav shud nw repent a lot...fr wat he has done is an unforgivable sin!!!

pls cntinue soon!!!

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Yazzy91

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Wow! What an emotional update! Feel sorry for khushi, your right no woman should go through that, but at the same time can't hate arnav! xx

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kajal

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Posted: 13 years ago

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no wrds ...jus superb...👏perfect dr...muahhh

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kajal

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Posted: 13 years ago

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perfect dr...superb...very well written..loved ur wrk...muahhh👏

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Jalebi

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Posted: 13 years ago

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That was so heartbreakin update.
So so so feel worry 4 kushi.
Arnav s hw unthinkable nd dumb while it comes 4 hs sister.
Hw he didnt even think little abt his love kushi.
So sad 4 her condition.
Bt urs was awsme writing wch made me feel as though happnd n real.
Thanks 4 pm.