Maan-Geet OS - An Inevitable Destruction

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Simran_14

@Simran_14

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Awesome

loved it dear

very touching dark story

thnx 4 da pm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

And i am going to go by the title next time. Rofl. I looked at the title and then didnt care much as i looked at the author. Didnt expect that from you. And dang i saved it to read later and guess what now, when i suddenly woke up at 4am in the morning i read this and i hate the day when I was born. Rofl. The story is depressiong but.. You succeeded as a writer for being able to stir some feelings in readers but I beg of you never to take breaks from revision ever again. Rofl. I hope your next OS be a light hearted one.

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ArSh_Maaneet

@ArSh_Maaneet

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

I really loved it. It was awesome but a very very dark and violent story.keep it up. I am follower of your FF's. I think you should publish a book of your own and I will buy a million copies of them, since i am a book and computer warm and I love and simple adore your stories. I am a Big fan of yours

with love

Mishti =)

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Ratna

@--Ratna--

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Fozi...awesomeOS ...but too dark for me 😭

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Le camp is divided!
Some of you enjoyed this rather dark & depressing OS. Yes, it is totally unusual to what I normally write.
I wasn't in a depressed mood that day I promise! I was actually in a good mood believe it or not 🤣
However the majority of you were left shaken & quite disturbed about it by your comments. But I feel that one important facet of a writer has to be that they can write a variety of stories.
This was just me trying out the dark side of my imagination 😆
I will endeavour to write a much lighter hearted OS next time!

Thankyou for all your likes & comments 🤗
And I uncovered some silent readers, ha! Now you've been discovered you can't shy away from my FF any longer 🤣

Edited by walkintomylifex - 13 years ago

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Dristi/twin/MK/D/dumbo/Drizzy

@DrashtiDhamiNo1

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

woah what a dark tale

nonetheless i somehow found myself to enjoy it 😆

nice os

its good to see different shades of your writing

keep it up

thanks for the pm..!! :)

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Sabmeratu.

@Sabmeratu.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

OMGG JEE what did you do?? :O
this was Frikking BRILLIANT!!!!!!!👏👏👏
I've never read anything like this! luvd this dark love story👏
this OS is one of the best ones I've read on maaneet :) x
Oooh I luv the characters of maan and geet, awww they both ended up falling for each other unknowingly but it was too late until maan realised his love :( arghh maan is such a kotha, he ruined his own relationship with his own hands
I just love love LOVEEE ur writing stylee it Just pulls me straight in😃
I've probably said this like 2610617961862 times but ur one AH-MAY-ZINGG writer👏😉
You should write more Os'z after ur exams jee cuz you rock at writing these short stories,eeeks imagine GHSP season 2 as a dark Love story😍 that would be so awesome na?! =P
Anyways jee loved the OS❤️
all the bestt for ur exams jee my blessings are with you =) ;D
Luv yhew sooo sooo muchh🤗🤗
Thanks for the PM :) x
Mwaaah xoxo'

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Sabmeratu.

@Sabmeratu.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Lool depressed and you?!doesn't sound like you 😉🤣
lmaoo oyy hoyy go on mummy catching all the new readers out🤣
Luvd this dark side of you ;) 😛
oooh new OS coming soon?! Can't wait
Xxx