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Posted: 13 years ago
Updating😳Will Reply To All Innabit Sadiie x
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: x_Mishti_x

WOW!! Sadiie.. awesome update!! 👏

"He gave a lopsided smile and extended his *faints* hand."
"He extended his smooth, sexy, *faints* hand towards her."
Hayee.. I was literally smiling at my screen like an idiot ☺️
loved it loved it loved it!! 👏
Geets thoughts are hilarious! Plus 1 and Minus 1 but getting a compliment gave him plus 10 😆
you should keep updating regularly.. absolutely love all your updates

P.S Answering to all posts in one posts isnt going to help.. you're gonna have to change the colour.. one day or another 😉😆



Thank You Mishty😳
LOL *Faints* Is Me 😆 Cuz I Love His *Faints* Sexy Hands☺️

Yeah I'm Updating Regularly Now😳

Grrr!! Stop Telling Me!! I'm Already Feeling Low!!😭😆



Thank You😳

Originally posted by: Iluvkanha_GCian

lovely update sadiie, maaneet rocks!!


Thank Youu😳 Yeah, MAANeet Rock😆

Originally posted by: mishti.muna

yaar loved it..
par..reaaly shocked..lol..


Thank You😳
Ahh Kyun?😆

Originally posted by: khushi1022

wooow...sadiie...its amazing...

wat a date...🤣🤣🤣
i mean who d hell on dis earth book whole retaurant...jst for asking to b friends...
gosh geet is really going to make fool of herself...

'Man he's got such sexy hands and such long fingers Ooohh Dammnn! Shame on you Geet! Min...Plus 2 for the hands and fingers' she mentally calculated.

"I Don't get why people look at my hands and not my face" he chuckled.

well dese lines r awesum...lucking at geet's desperation i m sure she will surely eat his hand one day... 🤣🤣🤣


Omgosh!! Thank You Jii😳

LMFAO!!!!🤣🤣
Well I'll Take That As A Compliment😆

Originally posted by: geetsweet

awesome part...

love it


Thank Youu😳

Originally posted by: ..Shai..

Aweeesssooommmeee!!!


Thank Youuu😳

Thanks😳

Thanks😳


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dumas

loved the update geet is so cute and totally nuts loved how she keeps giving him points loved the update thanks for the pm


Thank Youu😳
LOL Yeah She Is😆


Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

Oh god!if GC stays more with her i m sure she s really going to faint..
He said she s cute..he also forgot to add "Pagal" 😆
loved the update..


😆Well...He Calls Her Cute...When he wants to call her Pagal I Guess😆
Thank Youu😳


Thank Youu😳


Thank You😳

Originally posted by: SONOMAKTER1

awsome update just loved it lol 🤣


LOL😆 Thank You Sonu😳

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

most of the time fainting was going on...🤣...n that too coz of his hands...🤣

or the mental calculation...which i am sure are in plus...😆

continue soon...

thnx for PM...


🤣 Eekkksss That was mee!!😆
Yeah She's Plus-ing him for everything now😆

Originally posted by: sona-rai

PART 10

awesome lovely but short update yar thoda to long likh hahahaha
PART 11
whoooaaa loved it alot yar omg GC'S HANDS gosh ME DEAD hahaha


😆Thank You Thank Youu😳
Gahhh You'll Have to bear the short updates, I'm Doing them regularly😆

Originally posted by: Gcs-girl

Amazing update
loved it
wat a Date😆
eager to read more...
continue soon
thankx for pm
😊


Thank You😳
LOL😆
Yeah Updating Now

Originally posted by: JANAGI

stay in red ..its my fav color...


I Can't😭 5 Posts to go And I'm ...Purple😭😭



Thank *Faints* Youu😳


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Posted: 13 years ago

Gangsta


Recap:

"Great" he said, standing up.

"Chalain?" he said moments later, extending his *faints* gorgeous hand.

Now the rest:

She stared at his hand once again. 'Geet look away, Geet look away' she told herself, but her eyes managed to land themselves on his sexy *faints* gorgeous hands.

"You're so cute" he chuckled.

She closed her eyes, Damn she was caught again. Was he hiding his amusement by calling her cute? Hmm Maybe but whatever, he called her cute that was all that mattered.

She forwarded her shaky hand and placed it on his *faints*. She couldn't feel her hand, hell she wasn't even planning on getting up; he had to lift her up it seemed.

"Sorry.." she said breathlessly.

"For what?" he asked.

"I..know I weigh a lot.." she mumbled, utterly embarrassed.

He chuckled, and didn't say anything. Both started walking out, he was next to her and his hand was brushing slightly.

"Jhatka!!"

"Meera please!!" she shouted.

"What? Where is she?" He asked.

Again she did it, what a fool she has turned into.

"No nothing, let's go" she managed to say.

Both started walking, she made sure his hand didn't even touch her handbag forget her hand. To be honest, she didn't want the handbag touched by his *faints* gorgeous hands, it wasn't worthy of it. As soon as they reached outside, it started raining. Typical London weather.

[Yo Mishty, London Is Cool yeah!😎Stop cussing it! 🤣 It rains here as well so It rains in London too haan! ]

"Aghhh! Stupid rain!!" Geet shouted ad the rain water dropped on her head. [IT HURTS!!😭]

"Come" he said, as he grabbed her hand and dragged her towards his car.

She was almost soaking wet by now, so was he. She started shivering as they sat inside the car. He turned the ..whatever that shit thing you have in cars to heat the cars ...yeah he turned that on...😆 Why do I call a Mercedes a Khatara for 😆

She started rubbing her arms, trying to warm herself up as she was shivering. He leaned in closer as he moved his arm to the back seats, oh Damn she could smell his cologne. She closed her eyes involuntarily. 'Man what perfume does he wear? I want one' she thought.

"Here, wear this" he said, holding out his leather jacket.

'Oh Damn such a sexy jacket! Where'd he get it from?! I want one, no no two in case I lose one' she thought, staring at the jacket.

"You are Cute" he chuckled.

Damn it she did it again. She looked away utterly embarrassed. 'Geet stop! He's calling you cute cuz he knows you're Pagal!' [Thanks Remya 😆 ]

"No It's okay, I'm fine" she mumbled.

"You're shivering, wear it" it was like an order, she couldn't refuse even if she wanted to.

She quickly grabbed the leather jacket with her trembling hands and tried wearing it. God it was so complicated. She leaned slightly forward so she wasn't leaning on the seat and put her arms in the sleeves. Only problem was, she was wearing it the other way round. She tried taking her arms out but they were stuck, she couldn't take them out. He chuckled seeing her struggle with the jacket. 'He's laughing at me Babaji! I shouldn't have worn this jacket in the first place' she pouted.

Suddenly she felt his cold *faints* yet gorgeous hand touch her bare arm. She shivered as he glided his hand on her arm in order to take the jacket off. His face was mere inches away from hers as his cool breath fell on her face. She closed her eyes tightly, her face was heating up; why have a heater when this man's one movement can make you feel hot. Her breath hitched as she felt him do the same on her other. She couldn't take it, she was gonna turn into jelly any time soon. She jerked him away rudely as he looked at her with no expressions.

"Woh..I like it like this" she squeaked.

He didn't say anything and started the car.

'I look so weird with one arm in the wrong side of the sleeves, grrr! I wanna hide' she thought, pouting.

She shrunk back on the seat as he started the car, and covered her face with his jacket. 'Mmm I Can smell this cologne Ahhh' she breathed in his jacket.



NOTE!!!

2 Posts!😭 Naaahhhiii I Wanna Stay RED!!😭Okay It's Short I Know! I Was Gonna Type Some More But I'm In Deep Trouble!

I'm Doomed Man!


O Re Piya

Please Please Please UN-LIKE This OS Of Mine!

OMG I'm Gonna Lose The Bet! OMG OMG However many people read this, UN-LIKE It!!

Sadiie x


EDIT

OMFG!!! DON'T LISTEN TO HER!!!!!!!! Zee That's Not Fair! I'm PMing Everyone As Well! You're Not Winning! Damn It!!

EVERYONE! Listen To ME

NOT Her!



Edited by ..Sadiie.. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Res!!!

Okay Dare you unlike her OS!!!

Most of you hopefully know me and are familiar with my zaalimness. So i am gonna have to win this bet!

okay putting my zalimness aside 😆

I mean who doesn't want Sadiie to do a HOT Blushyifying naughtilicious OS ☺️😉

Koi hain ???

if so i would like to meet you ...so don't be shy.

If not then go read her OS and if you like it hit the like button so i can win😈. And i promise you its a beautiful OS that will touch your heart with its concept of selfless love!

and then not only me but all her readers get a lovely HOT OS as a treat once i win 😉

Make me PROUD😃

here's the link

Edited by Mrs.ZSK - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
🤣🤣
Here we go again with the London obsession.. trust me if you were here you would want to go to the sun 😆 im telling you.. its been raining for a whole week with coldness and thunder all way through but really Sadiie.. London is nothing special .. 🤣

anyway.. lovely lovely update .. Geets reactions to Meera's words and thoughts are hilarious.. 😆 and again his *faints* hands ☺️
Great update 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
ahahahaha sadiie loved ur update yar
and i din know u had an obession with london
and u want me to unlike ur post nahi 😆
ok just this once sadiie 😉
Edited by Problem_Child - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sadiie Loool I love his gorgeous *faints* hands!! Lol
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Posted: 13 years ago
loving the update awesome well written funny and sweet geet always talking to her self and poor maam loved it thanks for the pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful update...
Alas geet got into the conclusion that she s pagal 😉
wat s ds with his hands yaar??
I think geet s attracted to his hands more than his face 😆

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