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Posted: 13 years ago
Great update
Aww amar is so protective in a nice way
Hehehe he is so frustrated but am sure he'll say it somehow
Thnx 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww awesome update... looking forward to the next update

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Posted: 13 years ago
kya update tha...dil khus ho gaya...
thanks for the pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow...
awesome update... 😊
love it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updatee...
thnx 4 pm😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: magical_mania

awww...thank you sachi
wow u read all the parts
hey m on cloud 9🤗
i never knew i can leave such an impact on some one
it really means a lot dear❤️
i won't forget to PM u never ever 😆
thanx 4 d review😊



ur always welcomed dear😊
yup aalll n loved them to core...❤️
well on that fact i must assure you that u can leave a great impact on ppl with ur such improvised writing skills does it in fraction of seconds...😳
thnk u...😊
hugs back 🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesumm updte
luvd it
poor shaks kitna darr gayi thi 😍
awiiee kunwar sch a sweethr8 yaar
Shakti,
I really like you. Do u like me back?
Circle Yes or No.🤣 🤣
dese lines were awesumm simply roflin 😛
hope kunwar confesses soon
updtee soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Gals=Kuchi kuchi romantic movies 😃
boys=horror, scary movies 😈
& wat abt vinti . . . . Same as vishakha . . . Tomboy 🤣
shaks . . . . Don't worry,,, u can scratch kunwar as much as u like 😆
after effects of scary movie . . . Jo na bhi ho,, vo bhi dikhta hai 😒
awww . . . . Kunwar comforting her... 😍
archie n macci . . . Arrgghh 😵
abhi bhi pange le raha hai shakti se . . . . . . Pink floyd ban ke chain nhi pada . . . . Ab kya lady gaga banana hai 🤣
ahem ahem . . . . She's awake 😉
Feelings developed finally 🥳
lolzz . . . . His efforts are so cute 😛
sahi me,,, ye poets kya likhte hai . . . Mere to sar ke upar se jata hai 😆
for sure,,, she's gonna read them 😃
mania . . . . Itni badi demand 😲
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Posted: 13 years ago
RES for Update 15
Sowieee!!! Hudda has gone mad...😆

OMG!!!!!!! Chadi mujhe yaari teri aisi, Jaise daaru desi...meri daru desi!! What an update!!!🤗
Song made my mood!! And then ride of ArShaland took off. I love the way you state them in POVs. Unique and manuISH style...😉

Shaks broke her ankle...awww...Goa trip and a injured ankle...what a shame!!
But this injury gave Amar and Shakti some time together...😍

Kunwar is so caring..I want him as my hubby...☺️
The way he was bandaging her..awww...my sweetu Kunwar...☺️

Their talks and gestures take me to another world. You write so well manu that I as an audience is knowing something new and refreshing..Emotions in a new way...😳

Poor Archie..OMG!!! I was laughing hard...pink hair...hahahaha...🤣🤣🤣
What a revenge!!! 🤣

Shakti kissed him on forehead😍...(for coloring Archie's hair)😆

Ans then came, ultimate feel of Goa😍...volleyball match!!! Manu!! You know volleyball na??? you wrote it so precisely...It's too hard to explain the intensity of game in words..😳

Kunwar's motivation Shakti..he ought to win it..and he did...😍

8'O clock...what will happen at 8????😲🤪
I am rushing to read next update...hehehehe..😆
awesome as always...You rock Manu!!!🤗
ILU🤗

Edited by Nxt_rockstar - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
RES for update 16...

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THUD!!! stood up!!! THUD!!! again THUD!!!!!🤢
What were you thinking while writing it...??????????????😲
I am DEAD!!!!🤢
That's it...🤢



Lolz..I have a lot to say..hehehehe...😆
MOVIE ka IDEA!!!! Kya IDEA!!!! Foundation of my death!!!😆
They saw a horror movie...I can feel it...as you know I am psycho enough..😆
SHakti chose her PARTNER!!!! I mean PARTNER!!!😍
Those scratches and Fierce touches...THUD!!! again...😍

And then came HAWT HAWT SCARY TREAT!!!!☺️

A shadow scared her *ramsey BG*😆
She ran inti Kunwar's room...ended in his arms...and then absorption of me, myself, I into US!!!!☺️
She unknowingly surrender herself to him. Kunwar you are one patient and controlled man!!! KUDOS☺️
He didn't kiss her...must be so difficult to resist...☺️
She was crying..awww...gadhe Archie and Macy..😆
They admitted...and then angry young man's anger...urghhh😍
Shaks saved them literally...😳
I had butterflies in my stomach while reading this update...😍

She slept in his room...you built the trust so well Manu in their relationship...👏
He was caressing her forehead with his lips..awww...😍
He loves her...😍
And then he got a much awaited push...I should tell her that I lyk her...😍
hahahaha..he was superb trying all those lines...so sweet..😍
and efforts went into vain...😳

I am so happy after reading this update...
Superbly killer update...☺️☺️

I am sure Kunwar will find PERFECT words when time will come...😍

You are amazing Manu as always...🤗
Love ya🤗
Edited by Nxt_rockstar - 13 years ago

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