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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanx yukts 😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aria009hera

mania... how i could give u a BEAR HUG!!! abhi issi se hi kaam chala..🤗 kya likha hai!! d way he described her... it was sooo real!! d way she tugged on to him to sleep.. haayee i had an heart attack.. now m gonna bug u even more!! coz i want an update!!! badly!!!

hahahah anky ene isi se kaam chala liya...ye teddy bear se kam nahi tha😃
heheheh plz aisa mat karo mere saath ...mein ek bechari bachchi hu...ro dungi uwai uwaiii😆😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG!!! You are an awesome write Manu!! loved it...It was so beautifully written!! Every word of Part 7 was so wonderful... especially this..
Solitaire is not her kind of game. She is emotional, but not while forming opinions or passing judgments. Being suspicious is not one of the personality traits of her. She expresses her emotions easily and lavishly; no one can complain in this aspect. There will be no dearth of charming glances, gentle strokes, affectionate hugs and loving kisses.
The thing in green is really true...She really expresses very feeling and emotion so real that it appears to be reality..! She is the perfect picture of perfection! <3<3
Wow...You explained it so well...ShaktiLand! Wow...Kunwar's feelings are so well described by you! So real...No fantasy but reality..Love your FF..And Love you too!!!! You are asweetheart! <3
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Nxt_rockstar

MANU!!!

Sorry jana for late commenting but kal hi paper dekar aayi...so I decided to read it when mere dimag me xam na ghum raha hu...aur lazy toh m hu hi...lolz
Update-5
I just read it...
awesome...👏
Terence locked them in a room for whole night...It was dark...hayeee...it's awesome.😳
And holding hands thing..it's really dreamy..😍
ArSha in moonlight...wow...
And Kunwar felt her shampoo's fragrance...awww...
and then LIZARD!!! hahahahahha...Kunwar is afraid of lizards...it's really so cute...😆
And Shakti laughing on this thing...awww...😆
And then Kunwar begged her not to tell this to anyone...😉(ye agle update me h..lolz..meine dono ek sath padha)
It was an awesome update...again I will say only one thing...you write so realistic...Love you...🤗

awww...adi...darls i know u r busy in xams...so its al ok wid me...waisetere comments hamesha itne sweet hota hai ki mujhe diabetes ho jaati hai...😆😆😆
kitni baar bolu ye baat ki ur comments are always precious...par bhi baar baar padhe ka mann karta hai hehehehehe

Originally posted by: Nxt_rockstar

Update-6

The songs lyrics you used in starting is one of my favorite songs...Loved it😳
Finally they are talking...Kunwar bahut question pahunchta h...lolz😆
AND HERE COMES MY FAVORITE PART...😛
reason behind Terry's smirk...OMG!!!! This is some awesome thing I have read in times...
Shakti ka Kunwar...hayyeee...
Terry used to tease her that some prince from Indore will come for her...and he does...awww...
And jhalla Kunwar...he laughed on it...stupid...😡
And Deepika and Ranbir...ye kissa bhi mera favorite h..😆
Kunwar is fullon lattu on Deepika...talking about her...
Shakti got upset...awww...that means she surely feels for him...hain na??😉
She sat apart from him...awww...
And jhallu Kunwar wondering what happened to her!!!!
She got jealous...😉
Loved this one as well...😃
well going...👍🏼
superb writing...😃
mind blowing story line...👏

hahaha adi...kunwar to hai hi prince charming...our prince charming hehehehe
ye wo feelings hai jisme khud hi ni pata chalta ki kya ho raha hai.hehehe
typical ArSha types😃😃
song is my fav 2😊

Originally posted by: Nxt_rockstar

Update-7

OMG!!!!!!!
This is my favorite update till date. Manu you have written it so beautifully. I am feeling some eternal way this time. You described Shakti in most amazing way. She is beautiful in your FF. I am feeling that I know her very well now.
They talked and shared their thoughts. Kunwar noticed her so well that he is a moving Wikipedia of Shakti now. 😆
OMG!!! Shakti is most amazing girl I have ever heard of. She is awesome. You wrote it too well that I am spell bound with her character.
And that earlier crying part, she hugged him...awww...
And finally she slept on his shoulder...And he let her...It's a perfect story..😃
The only word for you is PERFECT...

hahahahah wikepidea...u kidding man...wiki kya wo to pura ka pura encyclopedia bann gaya hahahahaha
adi itna bhi mat bol...writer such as u r PERFECT...mine is just a little try
bt thanx so much 4 liking it jaana...i appreciate a lot
LOLAK
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Kriyaansh0311

OMG!!! You are an awesome write Manu!! loved it...It was so beautifully written!! Every word of Part 7 was so wonderful... especially this..

Solitaire is not her kind of game. She is emotional, but not while forming opinions or passing judgments. Being suspicious is not one of the personality traits of her. She expresses her emotions easily and lavishly; no one can complain in this aspect. There will be no dearth of charming glances, gentle strokes, affectionate hugs and loving kisses.
The thing in green is really true...She really expresses very feeling and emotion so real that it appears to be reality..! She is the perfect picture of perfection! <3<3
Wow...You explained it so well...ShaktiLand! Wow...Kunwar's feelings are so well described by you! So real...No fantasy but reality..Love your FF..And Love you too!!!! You are asweetheart! <3

OMG OMG OMG Rish muah gal
awww. u liked it...m so glad...it really means a lot wen readers n frenz like u appreciate my work dis way...m on cloud 9 lol
YEs our shaks is jus so PERFECT...nothing less...
thank u jaana😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: smshaffy-mehta

awww...dat was sooo cuteee update...kunwar in shakti's dreamland...aweee!!!!!!!!! 😍

shakti ws resting on kunwar shoulder wid grabing his hand...hayeee!!!!!!!! 😍 kitna cute h

thnx 4 such sweetie update n pm also...n plsss upload nxt soon ...i m waiting egarly

awww...thank u dear😳 ill try to update it asap😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: magical_mania

OMG OMG OMG Rish muah gal

awww. u liked it...m so glad...it really means a lot wen readers n frenz like u appreciate my work dis way...m on cloud 9 lol
YEs our shaks is jus so PERFECT...nothing less...
thank u jaana😳


I love you too BABES!!!!!
and yesh..She is just so perfect!!! and with Kunwar...she surpasses the limits of PERFECTION! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 21Neha21

awsme update..

i just loved d way u described shakti from kunwar's point of view..
it was so soothing n beautiful...i hav lost count how many times i hav read dat..it was so lovely..😳
n d hug..aww..dat was so cute...😛
waiting eagerly for d next update...

thank u neha...awww... u loved it
thanx 4 commenting whole-heartedly
a big wala thank u😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: namylovkriyansh

loveit mania...awesome..

thanx namy...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Kriyaansh0311


I love you too BABES!!!!!
and yesh..She is just so perfect!!! and with Kunwar...she surpasses the limits of PERFECTION! 😊

hhaha jus so true😃

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