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Posted: 13 years ago

You wernt kidding about it being dark.
This was really emotional.
Khushi's dad had hope and naila was planning on how she was going to go
khushi has lost her family and in the most terrible way
only arnav can help her go through this
but the sad thing is this isnt the end of it.
Khushi and arnav will face a lot of problems people will say stuff about their relationship, shamsher will come for khushi and lavanya for arnav.
But pleaseee dont tell me its only going to get more darker.
Dont think i'll be able to handle much more
i can only imagine how you felt when you wrote it
absolutely tearjerkers
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Posted: 13 years ago
to tell you that are an excellent writer is the least i am able to say.
i am on the verge of tears after reading chapter 17. 😕 (am a dont really like to cry person ..)
Please continue to amaze us !
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you for sharing this wonderful story. it's very cruel, poor Khushi at least Arnav is there for her, I hope Akash makes it through too
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow😲I seriously can't describe how i fel after reading your update. It's sad how differences among factions led to such horrendous, sadistic actions. Haji saab and rustam were the sweetest, nicest people- they definitely didn't deserve to die like that. PB definitely took a dark turn this update. I'm glad Naila's sacrifice didn't go to waste, and that arnav was able to save khushi. Poor girl had to see so much.
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow... what a twist. wow. i just...i o my god you are amazing...
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Posted: 13 years ago
This is one of the most intense and best-written stories I have ever read. I can't wait to read what awaits them!
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh my God, this is probably the first time I cried reading a FF...

it must be very difficult for you to write something like...so much pain, intensity...and the worst part is that all this actually occurred...the world was a cruel place and for some it still is...

Khushi has lost everything and Arnav is the only bit of hope left in her world...really hope they make it through together...

I bow down to your writing skill...honestly this is magnificent
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow! Stunning! Omg. I loved them all Munchy! So sad and so interesting. Very well done. The last few updates very just so touching.

Keep it up!
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Posted: 13 years ago
I am on the verge of tears now😭
please update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was heartwrenching really, and I couldnt stop the tears. Just having myself read and then, imagine it all was scary...how could they?! WHy?!? How dare they?!?!Hajji sahib, Rustom, Naila...all gone? So sad!! I cant put what I feel into words really Munchy, you've left us wanting soo much moreee...
and Naila's death especially touched me..the way she let Khushi into Arnavs arms smiling and assuring herself that she knew he was going to be there for her..and then, she was gone. So sad!!
Khushi's alive, with Arnav..and I do hope the betterment for both of them. No more seperation pleasee...they wont bear it and I wont either...
This has to be by far one of the most beautiful and heartwrenching stories Ive read. Have you thought of publishing it...its soo wonderful!
and I must say this again, you're a spectacular author because with just mere words, you give us this whole tale to imagine.
Thank you for bringing forward this wonderful tale !!
-Dee

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