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renee

@renee27

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Posted: 13 years ago

#851

i couldn't stop the tears from flowing while reading this...and i am pretty sure it must be terribly disturbing for you to write about that horror filled period...when men and women were slaughtered for no reason...

i had in inkling that Khushi's family won't be that lucky...just loved the last conversation between the mother and the daughter...it will be a moral booster for that girl...to fight for the happiness she is entitled to...Arnav with all his love will protect her from any harm...i am worried for Akash...did he make it?...or was caught up in the heat of the situation...it would be ironical...since the mob here came to finish a muslim family and a hindu died while saving them...

judging by the speed you have picked up i think Muffin Express is going to complete this FF pretty soon...can't wait for the next triple bonanza offer...i am sure its coming soon 😉

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lilmissmuffin

@lilmissmuffin

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Posted: 13 years ago

#852

Firstly, you deserved a standing ovation' to say it was heart-wrenching would be an understatement, your work has shed light to the horrors that actually took place' where innocent lives were actually lost leaving people such as khushi behind with unfair but yet tainted memories' just as it made my eyes teary, it must have been much much dificult to write, you've truly done justice to the concept of loss in the partition.

Secondly, you deserve much more praise because your characterisation of arnav for me is exact, although disgusted by OP & HP, the characters are unique and just simply adding few known characters and weaving them in this concept is beyond all praises' but why do i feel that although khush's father is dead, his word to give his daughter seems to stand firm? but who knows the total opposite can happen.

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Addie07

@Addie07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#853

let me take a deep breath and calm my self

my first thought :hope akash is safe.. plz let him be safe

glad khushi is safe...

Arnavs love for khushi so tangible , so intense... even with their bleak future..

so much violence...

once again ur writing leaves me dreaming about the chapters even after i finish reading...

awesome !!!

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iluvdarcy

@iluvdarcy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#854

Its a great story and I can visualize each and every scene. I am pretty much sure that you might have cried while writing that last part, I had tears in my eyes while reading.

You are an amazing writer 👏

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Juicee Sushie

@Juicee_Sushie

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#855

I am completely lost for words, as anything I say in praise of your tremendously moving and very realistic writing will just not do it justice!!!

Your writing is mind-blowing and the realism of it has me still in tears pouring down my face due to the intense emotions your amazing imagination and talent for expressing that imagination into words has evoked within me!!!

Please never stop writing!!!

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Jasleen

@Jasleen

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#856

That was so emotional and intense, I couldn't help choking up. Very beautifully written⭐️ Such a tragedy to see Khushi's whole family murdered, I'm glad she's safe. Arnav's love and care for her is so strong, I hope he's always there to protect her. Omg what happened to Akash?? Can't wait for another 3 chapters!

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roohi_love

@roohi_love

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Posted: 13 years ago

#857

So sad, and so terrifying!!! 😭 I was crying so badly. OMG, you are such a talented writer Munchy!!! Fantastic. It is truly unfortunate that events like this actually happenend, and it must be very difficult to write such a story. But kudos to you Munchy, you envoke emotions to the depths of people's souls and hearts. 👏 Thank you for sharing this story with us.

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ABCDesiGirl93

@ABCDesiGirl93

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#858

damn I'm like abt to cry!!

awesome update though!

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saiqa

@saiqa4eva

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#859

omggg...words just cant explain wot was happening to me...i know its fiction..but kasme it felt like it was happeing all in front of my eyes...im glad arnav saved her but i feel for khushi...coz she got no 1 else...n im hoping that akash will kum out safe and sound...u have to...and my hart went out to rustam and haji sahab...omg...A BIG THANK YOU...im eagerly waiting for the next chapters to follow as qucikly as possible...u have made my day...wot a talented writer...if i may, can u tell me wot u do apart from writing...where do u get ur inspriations from...coz trust me this story is just mind blowing...N PPLS PLS DO PM ME WITH THE NEXT UPDATE...ITS A MUST...

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489321

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Posted: 13 years ago

#860

Wow. I don't even have words for the last update. It was so heartbreaking and just thinking that that's what actually happened to so many people is so tragic.
You've written and captured this topic so wonderfully! I had tears streaming down my face while reading it.
This is my most favorite FF ever, hands down. :)

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