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i_luv_arshi

@i_luv_arshi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#861

u broke my heart today.. a heart wrenching update.. to think this is a deja vu of what really happened in our country makes me shudder.. i would like to bow my head to all those who stood high and bold and died fighting like hajji sahib

the partition did not just mar our landscape and divide our boundary, it broke thousands of hearts and lives then and now too.. we are still facing the demons the british unleashed in our country

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Bahaar

@Morning Star

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Posted: 13 years ago

#862

such is still the condition in most of countries among those sick men who thinks nothing beyond revenge sometimes under the name of religion, times under the name of culture or family honor, tribes, n other times for the purpose of making riches n poor n i believe they have one title a COWARD wild ANIMAL.

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Priya

@ArhiDeewani

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#863

OMG OMG OMG

This made me cry my eyes out so so so so so bad!!!!

You write so so so well, describing everything beautifully, when I start reading I never want to stop! Just read 6 parts in one go!

It was beautifully written but it was so sad and emotional!

It's just horrible to think this actually happened to so many people! We can put this off saying it is a fiction story but not that!

Well done for this FF, and well done for writing it so well, describing each emotion and the whole thing so well. I can picturize every single scene in my head.

It really really really amazing!

A round of applause goes out to you!

Keep up the good work and keep the updates coming hun.

And in reply to your PM saying you need rest, what am I going to do without your writings! You should at least keep us happy with OS's! But you can't stop writing completely, even if its temporary!

Love, Drushi + Priya. xxx

👍🏼 🤗 👏

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jenshad

@jenshad

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#864

Omfggg, This Was Heart Breaking :( Khushi Lost Everything :| 🥺 At Least Arnav Saved Her 😳 & This Was SOOO Imaginable When She Was Shivering & Then Slept .

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monkeydog18

@monkeydog18

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#865

awh thats awful! poor rustam and khushis parents! i hope akash makes it alive. thanks god khushi is with arnav now hopefully no one will separate them as she has nobody.. thanks for pm.

PS- my like button didnt work, but i left a comment :)

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Vanisha

@TheBlueAngel

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#866

i alwayz thgt Naila wil ruin evrythng bt i was soo wrng...she's 1 ov da best mother we cn eva hv.🤗

Poor Khushi..she's must hv been shattered..😭

sooo glad dat Arnav was der 4 her..

fab update Munchy..😊

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667300

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#867

This just keeps getting better and better!

I was expecting tragedies of this sort because well reality sucks and these kind of things happened.

You definitely have Arnav's emotions perfect, especially the overwhelming relief he feels despite having seen so many people die he's selfishly relieved that Khushi's alive because that's exactly how he would really feel in that situation.

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#868

oh my god.. can't stop crying.. you have written it so well.. and i am sure you have felt the pain as well while writing.. excellent job... just wonderful

i wish stuff like this never happened... but unfortunately it did.. and in reality there were less arnavs to save hundreds of khushis...

fight and riots that broke in names religion and caste are the most horrible and stupid way of taking lives..