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HaRul-lover

@HaRul-lover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#811

Loving the storyyy :D keep doingg it

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shaam91

@shaam91

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#812

im sure you cried after and while writing it..didnt you?

how could you not..i did.:(

i knew arnav would save her...but her family?..god...i know its fiction but it stll makes me shudder coz all of this happened.to uncountable nameless faceless people..but this happened.

i totally understand arnav..he had to turn his back on a dying woman and run..but what other option did he have?

khushi lost everything..i feel so so sorry..:(

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dumas

@dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#813

the senseless murders that happened in the name god the hate that was used for degradation of people that was very heart breaking what happened her family is dead i hope the mother is also because if she isn't she will wish she was those men and the lust death is better wonder if akash is alive arnav took khushi and run but what will he do now heart breaking update perfectly written thanks for the pm

Edited by dumas - 13 years ago

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Serenite

@Serenite

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#814

I couldn't hold it any longer & I so had to comment! This is stupendous to say the least - Even though I don't get to comment on your fan fictions as I would like to, today I had to let you know that you are one helluva writer. Don't ever stop writing for forum readers like us, even when you happen to pen one of the best sellers in the near future!

Bravo!👏

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tina_1234

@tina_1234

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#815

m shakin aftr readin d updt..omg...its creepy

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647669

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#816

WHAAT?

3 MORE UPDATES?

BOY DO I HAVE A LONG READ AHEAD OF ME!

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-Mayuri-

@-Mayuri-

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#817

That was so scary. Feel so bad for Khushi, having to witness her family's death at such a young age.😭

Update soon! I hoping the next one is better than this one.

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karisma

@karisma

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#818

my eyes welled up at haji saab's n rustam's decapitation🥺.

it pierced my heart when u gave a big salute to naila by making her smile at arnav & khushi before turning to hold the assailants back

omg akash!! 😭 what happ to him? will arnav n khushi be safe ?😳

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Presadhi

@Binky

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#819

This always happen to me every time I read your updates I think I have to comment but when I come to write the comment I honestly don't know what to say (I do press the like button) but today I will write I have to.

First of all Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us every time I see that you have updated I get excited but I have this nagging feeling as well cos I know this story is not a smooth riding one and it will have a lot of heart ache.

Through your story You are actually making us live and feel the pain that every person must have gone through at that time and make us wonder how people can become these monsters loosing the best trait we have which is humanity.

Secondly I want to thank you for adding a scene that I wanted to see in the show for the longest time which is Kushi cupping Arnav's face and soothing his worries away I'm dying to see that in the show I hope one day I will get to see that too.

Sorry about my mumbling but I just had to let you know. Btw in my opinion this is your best work by far and I hope you continue to shower us with wonderful update regularly like you have been doing this far.

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#820

OMG! this made me cry so badly. the mum the dad! :'( arnav and akash going there was breath holding. khushi being safe too. but she must feel like she wants to die too and in shock her family, her home...oh gosh here comes the tears again. i hope arnav protects her.

xxx