FF: Pandora's Box: Link to Thread Two on Page One

First Previous

Page

111

Next Last

Frequent Posters

--Siva--

@--Siva--

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#831

Munchy.. Didn't you feel hurt or even cry while writing this??

I was not able to read this!! I skipped some lines in the middle, to be honest!! It's too heavy for me!!😭💔

I know the story line is like that but still please make things better soon or atleast no more killings!!

Thanks for the PM!

Quote

oh.petite.one

@oh.petite.one

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#832

OMG!!! That was so heartbreaking...

i don't even want to know what those monster did to Naila and Akash...

i'm feeling a little queasy after reading that ...

wonderfully written...

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

merrydock

@merrydock

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#833

hi that was really, well i dont have words, i had tears in my eyes, the partition riots is and will always be the worst of and heartbreaking histories of both India and Pakistan. im so many ways we are lucky to have been born in this age. where i come from there has never been a riot. and i pray that i would never have to see on except in the movies. wating egerly for the next chapter.

Quote

Manal

@...manal...

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#834

I am still shivering and in complete shock! This was an amazing update!

Quote

Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#835

Muffin.

This was brilliantly written hun. Once again, you handled it perfectly.

What happened to Khushi's father and brother was brutal and heart wrenching.

Looking forward to reading the next part hun.

Thanks for the PM.

⭐️

Quote

madmaxine

@madmaxine

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#836

This is why I am an atheist.

You, btw, are completely wonderful. Doesn't it drain you out..to write this stuff? I'd have emptied a pint of Haagen Daaz (Rum 'n Raisin😊) and watched You've got Mail twice after I wrote this. Brutal, powerful writing. Take a bow, my dear.

Hugs,
Vidhya

Quote

blah_blah3

@blah_blah3

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#837

That last part brought tears to my eyes! It was very well written, the scene made me think of everything I have read about the partition.

You are a very good writer Munchy, you brought out all the write emotions with this update.

Continue soon.

Quote

LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#838

Ohh what a gruesome end. Her family died... That made me cry, atleast she had him but for how long?

Quote

shaam91

@shaam91

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#839

there!!

you have gone ahead and depressed everyone out of their wits!

just goes to prove how effective you are as a writer...last time i felt so sad after reading somethingw as when lupin and tonks died in HP7 leaving behind thrie infant son!

so rowling has some competition here..as far as im concerned!

Quote

Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#840

my hands are shivering while i'am typing my comment...mannn..it was touching..khushi's family is gone..& you have literally let me speechless.. i feel so upset that naila, rustam, haji saab are just gone...in the blink of the eye, khushi has lost her whole family...it was a heart wrenching update...naila sacrified herself to keep her daughter safe...she pushed her to arnav, as though arnav was the destiny waiting for her...the update brought tears to my eyes..esp the last...job well done..just too good... nice...waiting to read more..please continue asap...😊