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Posted: 13 years ago
I wrote up the story of Humsafar (Soap, not FF) so far for folks who are not following the show. But note that this does not have anything to do with the FF itself. 😊
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Khirad and her mom live in Hyderabad and Khirad's mom is dying from cancer, when the widowed mother reaches out to her brother, who is settled in Karachi - Baseerat, his wife and son Ashar (obviously with all traits of the US returned charming male lead).

Baseerat feels guilty from not having stayed in touch with his sister over the years and brings her to Karachi, along with Khirad. The sister falls gravely sick, and Baseerat
promises to take care of his niece by proposing marriage between Ashar and Khirad.

Ashar's best friend is Sara with all the makings of an obsessive friend, who owing to their childhood friendship blindly assumes that Ashar will marry her - which of course is not the way Ashar sees it. When Sara hears news of Ashar's marriage to Khirad, she turns suicidal, and attempts to take her life, but is saved eventually with people finding her at the nick of time.

Meanwhile, Baseerat's wife is against the marriage too and Ashar himself does not wish to be tied down to a woman who is by no means a match to his suave, urban ways of life.

Baseerat convinces everyone and with much resignation the wedding takes place at home in the presence of Khirad's dying mother. Shortly, Khirad's mom passes away and Khirad becomes a shut clam, withdrawing from the new life and the people she comes to live with.

In the days that follow, Khirad overhears Ashar tell Sara that Khirad can never be that companionable and equal partner he would like her to be.
As a result, her ire rises and her ego is grimly stoked. Khirad feels she has been forcibly thrust into Ashar's life and keeps her distance from him at all times.

While Khirad and Baseerat bond for all the lost time, Baseerat becomes ill and leaves Khirad all to herself, after he asks Ashar to give Khirad all of life's happiness. After his death, Baseerat's wife appears to have a change of heart and promises Khirad to be the mother, she has lost.

Ashar takes interest in Khirad and initiates actions to show his fondness, once she comes to live with him in hi room. He learns that she is educated and notices her refined ways.

Of course, Sara turns villainous at best, and tries to keep Ashar from bonding with Khirad, by whisking him away for impromptu dinners and never forgets to highlight her low upbringing which Ashar forbears, in compassion for his childhood friend.

Ashar begins seeing Khirad in new light, despite his initial prejudices and eventually falls in love with her. She in-turn reciprocates and they are now happily married and more of an adorable couple.

Ashar suggests Khirad to enroll for higher studies and she enrolls in a nearby university. Khirad discovers friendship in the younger student circle and for reasons unknown, Ashar is threatened by her male friend Khizer, who also happens to be Sara's cousin; Khizer is madly in love with sara only to face constant rejection due to her own affections for Ashar. Ashar turns out to be insecure about their relationship and his mood-swings remain a puzzle to her, for he never comes out with his scruples.

In a get-together where Ashar is planning to join them later at Sara's house, Khirad and her mom-in-law arrive only to find Khizer already there. Khirad is asked to prepare some dishes and Khizer helps out. He purposefully spills something on Khirad's dress and using that to his benefit, pulls Khirad's dupatta off and helps her clean herself, when the entire family walks in on them, which seemingly comes across as an intimate moment between the two. As if on cue, Ashar arrives there, right in time for the showdown.

The family declares them as an illicit couple and Khizer comes out saying that they needn't hide their affections any more, which terribly confuses Khirad. Ashar's mom castigates her leaving khirad behind at Sara's place. When Khizer finds himself alone with Khirad, he comes out with the truth. That it was a ploy - which would uproot Khirad's presence from Ashar's life - into which he was bought into by Ashar's own mom, in return for an offer to study in the states. Khirad finds her way home, only to be thrown out without an audience with Ahsar (Ashar is not at home) and realizes it was Ashar's mom's revenge for coming into their lives and for her decimating the vision she had for Ashar's life. It crumbles Khirad to come to terms with a sly, scheming mother-in-law who was far from being a mother to her.

A pregnant Khirad manages to go back to Hyderabad broken and depressed. Ashar continues to refuse taking her calls, despite the number of times she reaches out to him at office and at home. She goes into premature labor and gives birth to a baby girl: Hareem. At this time, she decides to start living for her baby and hard walls against the feelings of abandonment and betrayal from Ashar. Sara remains in Ashar's life, but he pulls into his shell and lives an ascetic life.

Four and half years pass and Khirad finds out about Hareem's heart condition, that requires an open heart surgery. She reaches her rope's end before she reaches out to Ashar as her last resort. She confronts him and states all proof that Hareem is indeed Ashar's daughter - of which, he had not been cognizant of in all those years. She doesn't hear from Ashar for the next four days while she is staying in Karachi and it begins to worry her.

The next day, Hareem is playing outside the hospital, where Ashar lands and she recognizes him as her 'picture wala papa'. The father and daughter hug just as Khirad comes out and Khirad takes her away to see the doctor. Ashar finally breaks his silence and lashes out in anger to Khirad, for keeping his daughter away from him for all those years.

Edited by 6thElement - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you so much Hasini for that write up :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey, after your kind writeup, here I am to read the story.

I have already finished the two chaps and am wondering where are you ?!!

Loved the prologue - Khirad's journey through different emotions was lovely...as is her intention of standing on her own.Ashar's memory of the life in Hyderabad was quite interesting and I found his ways around his father similar to many of ours LOL

After knowing the story I can relate well to the past that you mention - geographically i mean and the relationship between Khirad's mother and Ashar's father..I am sure you must have woven a wonderful story...

Do continue soon...

P.S. Why cant I see you around anywhere ?
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mystique_girl

Hey, after your kind writeup, here I am to read the story.


I have already finished the two chaps and am wondering where are you ?!!

Loved the prologue - Khirad's journey through different emotions was lovely...as is her intention of standing on her own.Ashar's memory of the life in Hyderabad was quite interesting and I found his ways around his father similar to many of ours LOL

After knowing the story I can relate well to the past that you mention - geographically i mean and the relationship between Khirad's mother and Ashar's father..I am sure you must have woven a wonderful story...

Do continue soon...

P.S. Why cant I see you around anywhere ?



Thanks...you kept your word ;)

Just a note: I don't intend to use the story from the soap as is and hopefully, it will sound like a different story to you folks ;)

I'm around gurl!...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 6thElement

Thanks...you kept your word ;)

Just a note: I don't intend to use the story from the soap as is and hopefully, it will sound like a different story to you folks ;)

I'm around gurl!...


I know...when do you ever use the soap storyline...

I am sure you will spin a unique story with this one..

I just wanted to say that your writeup gives me an initial idea of the background of the entire story and characters which helps me relate them to any situation you put them in...

For example, if I hadnt seen Geet I would never know what to expect of MSK !
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG! its beautiful! I love the show and i instantly fell in love with ur ff! Pls add me to ur PM list..would love to read whats in store for them. :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
You write exceptionally well.
When do you plan on continuing?
Please add me to the PM list aswell.
Thanks:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Updates for Humsafar will be delayed as I want to finish up my other SS:Starlight Express.

For some reason, I feel like I'm holding onto the tail end of the spool of Humsafar's story line and need to work my way backwards to the point until which the story has been told so far. Do bear with me and I can assure the wait won't be long.

Until then, Keep Reading. 😊

Hasini

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Posted: 13 years ago


This is just...😆

Thank you for posting this. Its quite the summary.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Confused...mein yeh story zaroor padhungi lekin pehle mujhe samhajo bhai yeh sab kya confusion hai...good 30 mins toh yeh samhajne mei gae k...Khirad is girl and Ashar is boy :O
and yaar who is this Sara now...bandi apne haath wath kat rahi na..and if K and A are married what is S all about ?? ex-lover ya extra martial affair ?? aur aur yeh Khizar banda kaun hai...aaa 😕

And is the story originally based in Chicago ya my dear author you did :D

Please clear this confusion nai toh aage ki story will go blurry...btw I loved the video and also the song and I so love Fawad (the hero...loved him since Khuda K Liye times..hehe) 😃

And m reading this story once this confusion vanishes..just read the prologue !!

Cheers,
Fatima
Edited by Escapist - 13 years ago

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