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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
PRECAP-
IF TWO WOULD B LOVERS ARE TRAVELLING THROUGH TRAIN,,,,,,,,,THEN OFFCOURSE THERE WILL B A DDLJ SCENE

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Posted: 13 years ago
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mahabaan , kadardaan, aapke liye pesh hai,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,dhwani aur daqsh ka romantic background music,,,,,,,,,,hope u like it...


do listen to it completely...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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THATS AWSOM UPDATE STARING WITH A GUD BASE IS THE PURITY OF LUV,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,THANX 4 SHARING
LUKING 4WARD 4 NXT UPDATE
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
Vry nice!!!! 😃 😃 Plz do continue it 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25

update 2

''wat do u mean ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,I did it ,,,,,,,,,dats ma fault???????????''he interrogated.

She replied in one go '''off course , der is no doubt abt it''

''and may noe''.howz its so???''daqsh remarked

''its ur '.yours,,,,,,,,,,,ah!!!!...off course its ur '''.fault,,,,,bczz'..''she hesitated as she knew dat its d mistake of no one'''.it just simply happened,,,,,,,,,,,,,but lookin at d arrogant look boy in front of her ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,she just can't step aback,,,,,,,,,,she need to answer,,,,,,,,,,

While then daqsh raised his eyesbrows''''as if waiting for an answer eagerly

Suddenly something struck her mind,,,,,,,,she brust ''yeah! Its ur fault'''..u were the one who was not listening to me,,,when I told 'excuse me',,,,,not just told I repeated 2-3 times to make u aware 'but u still engrossed in ur headphone like,,,,,,,,,,,like '''' aapni hi dhun par sawaar ho!!!!!!!!!''

''Agar tumhe pata hai ki maine headphone laga rakha hai tho ''''tho mujhe batao,,,,,,,,,ki'''.tumne touch kar kar kyun nahi kaha yeh sab!!!!!!!!!!bolo.''he was damn confident,,,,,,,,,,, dats its not his mistake.

''chukar bolti tho tab na,,,,,,,,,jab tum ek jagah par tik kar baithate'';;;;;;she pointed towards d bench,,,,,,,,,,

He realized,,,,,,,,,,in any case dhawni is going to prove him wrong,,,,,,,,,but he has to defend himself''.so he tried to end up vid"let it go mujhe tumse baat hi nahi karni hai''''."

''arre,,,,,,jao jao''.mujhe kunsa shuak hai'''jao tumhe bakshti hoon aaj'..(as if she knew she will meet him again)''

''tum mujhe baksh rahi hoon?????????''.oh hello main tumhe baksh raha hoon ,,''

Soon they realized by train horn dat their train is arriving

Daqsh continued''aur vaise bhi meri train aa chuki hai ab ,,,,,,,,mere pass faltu ka samay nahi hai'""

She was in a shock,,,,and said,,,''kya???????tum iss train main ja rahe ho''''.phir tho aaj iska accident ho jana hai!!!!!!!!''

He immediately replied'' listen!!!!! You ''''''.""

But before he could complete dhwani reversed,,,,,n ,,,,,,,stared walkin towards her luggage''.he was all left alone vid his fingers raised on no one,,,,,,,,,a weird face,,,,,,,and huge anger,,,,,,

Soon he ignored'''got chips from d shop ,,,,returned to his baggage,,,,,,,,,,dhwani was already gone towards her seater coach''..seeing dis daqsh said ti himself''god! Agar aapne mujhe ek baar aur milwaya na is ladki se tho paaka main chodoon ga nahi isse'''.


Soon they boarded their respective coach,,,,,,,,,,,,daqsh in his sleeper coach ,,,,,,,,,,,n ,,,,,,,,,,,dhwani in her seater coach''..



guys wat do u feel abt d back ground music''''''plz do let me know

Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
Awesome story dear
luvd it
wow Dhwani is fabulous
she drove the auto herself?
luv the convo between Dhwani n Daksh
1st romantic n then fighter spirit
plzzz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
superb part dear
amazing
loved it
Dhwani n Daksh are cute
sweet fights
cont soon
thnx 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
hey y din't u pm me i am toh already in ur pm list😡
but still i will comment as i love rtmc n urs ff too😃
awesome update short hai but quick update👏
our dwani is supergirl ride auto😆😆😆
loved daksh n dhwani's fight😃
n the first word he said 'love' under her trance😳
Ab first meeting ho gayi hai aur bhi hoti rahegi toh dhwani ko chhodna mat daksh😉😃
liked the start of their journey👏
and waiting for their journey😍
pm me when update next
Edited by shruja - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
👍🏼 🤗
both in same train ab mazza ayega
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
this ff reminds me of jab we met😆😆😆...awesome update dear👏
i love dhwani's auto driving🤣
and i love daqsh too😍
but dhwani dear when did u say to daqsh EXCUSE ME???😆
apne would be pati se aise baat nahi karte...naughty girl😆
update soon...😃and a badawala update this time😃plz

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