SwaRon FF : ADLAA BADLI Chap 13 Pg 93 *3rd oct'12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: 1D_D3-Crazy
i like the concept of this and the reverse roles so please can you pm me when you update
ps. i was just wondering if the teams of D3 will be on this so Rey, Kria, Neha, Vishakha, Rinni, Bharat, Amar

hmmm...k i lyk ur idea...bt kya kre aisa nhi he lol

ya u ll gt PM u r in my buddy list i remember 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: swaron4life
Heyy loved part 2 very interesting I can't believe swayam was so rude. So different but too good I can't wait for next part I'm sorry if I was late but I'm lovin it. Pm me plzz!!! Xxx

for sure bubbles u ll gt PM !!

nd a big thnxxx 4 likin d idea nd d stry on behalf of ol !!! 😉

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Posted: 13 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: Angelic_A2011
Loving the concept!!!
Please pm me when you next update!! *waits impatiently*

oh i no it has been too late bt i ll be updatin 2day !!! 😊

actually i had forgot abt dis ff sry 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: swaron502

for sure !!! tuje PM krna kase bhul skti hu re...😆

Aww...thnx re :)

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ash

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Posted: 13 years ago

#145

ok so first of ol m sooo sorry guyzz i had completely forgotten dis FF due to examzz pressure...so i promise u an update evry week !!! next week onwards even more big updates promise !!!!

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CHAPTER 3

sharon n swayam both at their houses thinking abt each other...

sh : mene kya bigada hai uska...vo kyu mere sath ese behave karte hai..

sw : huh!! behengi kahiki...har jagah mujse takrane aa jati hai...idiot weakling how dare she take my seat

sh : sharon relax unke bare me sochna bandh kar aur so ja! aur ha kal se tuijhe unko full on ignore karna hai thke na!! gud nite god ji!!

sw : usse to me dikha dunga dat who is Swayam Shekhawat!! oh behengi bach sako to bach lo mujse!!

with different mottos in their mind both went off to sleep!!

NXT DAY AT CLG..

sh:chal beta sharon jaldi cls mai chal warna phirse un bigde raiezoo se pala padh jaega..

sw:aaj toh us behji ko clg ki ryd karani padegi :P

NIL N SWAYAM give HI5 2 each other
dey see her cmmg..

SW:tumhe pata hai na guyz aage kya karna hai..

VIC N NIL:yehh dude...

sw:so lets strt guyzz...

vic n nil wid a drink in the hand starts walking 2wardz sharon...

sh:ye log toh yahi pe aarahe hai abh kya karu?? chup chap nikal leti hun...
she tries 2 go but suddenly nil ko vic ne takar di n boom sari drink sharon ke dress pe...

sw:oopz nil tume yeh kya kiya is behenji ke kapde kharab kar diye... n laughz..
abh ye kya karegi poor gurl nai...

sh: yeh kya kiya tumne??

sw: sorry nil se galti se ho gaya naa...dikhai nahi deta?

sh: dekh ke chalo karo!!

vic: sorry bhenji agli baar nahi hoga (laughs and gives a HI5 to nil and swayum)

sharon runs to the washroom crying...

Nil: chalo guys...lets go...warna uss behenji ke saath we'll also get detention...

Sw: tumlog chalo...i forgot my fone in the lockerroom...i'll come...

Nil: par sam...dude...

Sw: chal na...

swayam runs away...nil n vicky left...swayam wait outside the girls locker room...after a while he sees sharon coming n sitting on one of the benches der...her face tearstained...she had changed...

swayam could hear her speak in between her sobs...

Sh: kyun...kyun...aise mere saath...what did i do to them...kyun humesha mere saath...oh shit...i am late...

Swayam saw her running out...n followed her...

they both reach n class n she notice that he was behind her...

Pr: oh...so finnaly u decided to grace us with ur presence...detention ..both of u

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ok so hw was d update guyzz??? did u lyk it?? if yes den pls like d post nd comment nd if no den also like d post nd comment 😆

baaki its ur wish...me toh bas warning de rhi hu ki in future sirf lyk aur comment krne walon ko hi update ke PMs milenegkyuki jin logo ke paas FF ke lie tym nhi unke lie mere paas tym nhi kyuki PM krna is nt easy wen u hav so mny frnds in ur buddy list !!!

Edited by swaron502 - 13 years ago

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ash

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Posted: 13 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: Srishti_SwaRon

Aww...thnx re :)

ur most welcm...my dearest partner in spamming 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

#147

Awesome update Jalebi..
Haw, ye swayam itni pyaari si ladki ka dil kaise dukha sakta hai. Nilesh aur Vicky toh pehle se hi satkele hain par Swayam. Kitna bura laga uss bechari ko. Aww. I hope ki Swayam apologizes for it. or atleast makes up for it some way...
Itna chottu sa update...next time se BADA wal update...okie?!
(P.S tu not okie kahe toh bhi tujhe bada update karna padega :P )

Edited by Srishti_SwaRon - 13 years ago

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ash

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Posted: 13 years ago

#148

oye kitna tym lagega srish tuje padne me?? jldi pad 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: swaron502
oye kitna tym lagega srish tuje padne me?? jldi pad 😆

mujhe padne mein tym nahin lagta...jab bhi main reply karne ke liye ake baiththi hun toh koi mujhe bula leta hai ya phir phone ata hai...ab aise condition me main kya karun?!
waise unres kar liya jake padh le..

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ash

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Posted: 13 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: Srishti_SwaRon
Awesome update Jalebi..
Haw, ye swayam itni pyaari si ladki ka dil kaise dukha sakta hai. Nilesh aur Vicky toh pehle se hi satkele hain par Swayam. Kitna bura laga uss bechari ko. Aww. I hope ki Swayam apologizes for it. or atleast makes up for it some way...
Itna chottu sa update...next time se BADA wal update...okie?!
(P.S tu not okie kahe toh bhi tujhe bada update karna padega :P )

blackmail krne ke alawa aur kuch ni ata...🤣🤣🤣🤣

haan haan thnx thnx 😆