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luvraj4ever

@luvraj4ever

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#821

happy holi dear...thanks for the lovely update...i m wondering who this "he" is in the last line...

cont soon

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568124

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#822

@luvraj4ever: Aashi mentions, that Bhaiya has punched him...

Who else do you think can make Abhinav that mad... 😉

Edited by 6thElement - 13 years ago

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Onir

@Onir

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#823

Hey its me again...😊

done with parts 5-9... this SS is really interesting with all the mix in characters each with their own individual thought processes & expectations from life.

Geet's talking about the ' domino effect' i too agree with it... sometimes we don't realise how our actions lead to different results in our lives... & that we in our lives are equally conected to others by each ones doings...

loved how Maan put forward both their thought processes of being affected by each otheryet trying to fight it not taking it as a rebound... Geet needs to come out of her own knots... also how he is ready to try to understand about this pull between them... by giving it a try... at the same giving her the space she needs to think about it wether she will take this try...

Abhinav's view also can't be left to let go... he wantede a relation with her without the marriage commitment... To think about it both didn't want a forced commitment coz of their parents.. one coz his own needs from life & one who is tired living under her family's expectations & morals...

loved the line...' The couples' individualities that interfere with the process in trying to thrust ones wants & desires onto the other, wanting to make them malleable to each other's needs...' so aptly this line puts forward the sentiments that these people are going through because of their relations to the other... how our own individual needs become our priority that we don't consider the other's need... which in turn tumbles down our bond with our partner...

liked the way Geet reflected u[pon her tryst with love...

lot more to go... will keep commenting as & when i read up ... curious to know how the dynamics among all these characters come out to play ...

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ammu5

@ammu5

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#824

is it maan?? loved da update

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SiniHanda

@SiniHanda

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#825

Confused :/ I need to re-read the FF again :/

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Ratna

@--Ratna--

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#826

Hasini 🤗...awesome updates 👍🏼...i love Maaneet and want them to be together...but why do i feel there is still a lot to be told about Abhi and Geet...i already find his character very interesting...and it has nothing to do with Kunal 😳...love the way Aashi helped Geet...a true friend indeed...waiting for the next update to this lovely story ...thank u for the PM...TC 😊

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hamini_yash

@hamini_yash

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#827

Oh my god, a streetfight for our princess, i wish she sides aashi's bhaiya nd make things clear for future, maan can take care of himself now right! I realy hope u bring in her clone. Pls cont soon,nd happy holi

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#828

Originally posted by: 6thElement

You really are the only one who is curious about it...🤗

Me too curious as long as Geet gets over whatever it is and doesnt end up with him.

making a separate comment in a while.

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#829

haila Maan getting punched...i wish Geet nurses Maan's chot...that would be just great...interesting update hasini but a very short one...please do continue soon.. 😊

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#830

Just read the update and all that the readers have to say..

Must say H, being a writer is a pressurizing job... what with all pressures of making Maan and Geet meet in the end even when you might feel more biased for a certain Abhi - be it KK, or whoever was earlier !😆

So now we have a fight between the two men !! - thats a first timer in your stories I guess. All your men are always so well behaved.😉

I am waiting to understand what Geet feels for Abhi. I am confused. The last update said she felt his warmth and his arms comforting ... well she feels quite the same in case of Maan as well ! Or doesnt she?

I am wondering how Abhi found out about Maan. Did he come over as well to Geet's place? And waiting to see what happens after this...Abhi was so detached all these days - he didnt try to find out how Geet was feeling after the breakup and seeing her cry once brought out his emotions altogether? Why this sudden burst?

Geet is so confused and kinda withdrawn - I am a bit apprehensive about this. Yes its been two years with Abhi and only a few days with Maan - its hard to compare or try to analyse her feelings for the new man ...but still.. I kinda feel lost in this whole thing and end up wishing that her best friend be the savior instead of any of these men...

My comments might seem disjoint - but thats what is the state of mymind after the update

And BTW - the last update was bombastic. Everyone under the same roof ? That was shocking !!

Edited by mystique_girl - 13 years ago