New SS: Starlight Express CLOSED Indefinitely - Page 81

Originally posted by: mayukha

P.S : Have you ever wondered why I always mention Dev and not Abhinav, it's only to reinforce my loyalty towards Maan and Geet. The combination of Kunal Kapoor and Abhinav makes me vacillate 😆 but it's so much easier to incite my dislike towards the character if named Dev.

But girl! Abhinav is NOT Dev...😆

I know how you girls feel about Dev and hence the conscious decision to have Abhinav right from the beginning, so as not to have the wrath for Dev shadow Abhinav.
And the choice of Kunal Kapoor was because I needed to give Abhinav a level playing field.

If you are rejecting the two reasons why there is Abhinav and not Dev...then I'm being rendered speechless.

PS, Do tell about your screen name? Mayukha?

PPS, Abhinav and Geet's story is slowly being told as flashbacks. You will have to wait to get to the part about their break-up.

Originally posted by: .-Moksha-.

Abhinav was resisting Geet because he was forced into their relation, the first few months their parent's set up their relation and now she's left he realised other than the sense off attraction they shared...he felt something deeper. But for Geet, I think the concept of having a partner excited her. Abhinav was most probably her first boyfriend and there was also that attraction there but she only breaks out of her shell with Maan. Well we don't know what she was like with Abhinav but from the updates I've read I can't feel that warmth with them...heat yes, but not that warm fuzzy feeling.

It's quite sad, their parents' aren't willing to acknowledge their break-up...Geet and Abhinav need to talk to their parents' and they need to to talk to wach other because they're both quite unaware of why they broke up. The lack of communication between them caused the breakup and maybe it shouldn't of happened in the first place. If their parents didn't have a hand in setting them up, would a girl like Geet ever date Abhinav? They're like chalk and cheese...they're just not compatible.

When you are biased to the outcome of the discourse, its quite easy to build arguments to support them... would you agree?

Interesting because, I haven't told A&G's full story yet.
Chalk and cheese...😆 Good one for a cheese adulterate.

Originally posted by: ucompleteme

Wow! Loved the update. The tension and the trauma that Geet was feeling throught out, the awkwardness for Maan and the feeling of betrayal and disappointment from Aashi made it one of those moments in life that shake you up. Aashi forcing Geet into the car speaks of a friendship where she may have a place to open up, but how do you tell a sister that her brother wants to break up. The families are so gung ho for the relationship and the awkwardness that Geet has to feel makes me feel mad as a female, that such dubious tasks are somehow always dumped on the girl. He just walks away from it.

Thanks for the update Hasini.

You changed your font, and I literally had you in front of my face, only to skip over it...😆

I wanted to respond to one of your earlier possibilities you had considered...No. Maan and Abhinav don't know each other.

Originally posted by: bhakbhartifan

Do we get Daadi eavesdropping their convo by any chance? Is she going to grill Maan?
I was thinking maybe Daadi can also give Geet emotional support when her parents are missing from the scene.. I know she has Aashi too, but an elder person is an elder person..

Fantastic update..
Waiting for more..

I understand your sentiment, but I don't want Daadi coming in this time. For a change, I want the women and the men involved to solve their issues on their own...

Hopefully that will have them ready for the next generation...😊

the scene brought out well, their shock , unpreparedness for this meeting , the awkwardness that comes from something as new and newfound as what's between them that has not even been named suddenly exposed in front of all who would care to notice..

I haven't written a thing...might post a short one later tonight.

Lovely FF...still few parts to read...do PM me whn u update it...!!!

Poor Geet. What the tension, truma she is going thru. She is feeling awkward for maadn and asshi. Why their family is forcing them into relationship, as abhi wants to break-up. And ashi is thinking maan is behind his brother and geet's relationship. Everyone is cornering her and made her more confusing. I wonder what maan is thinking at this situation. Thank god that asshi took geet to her out. Now I would like to know more about abhi and geet.

Loved both part.

Update soon